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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tumse mil ke...

"Geeett...

Stop crying...can't you see I am trying to do somthing.. I
can't concentrate in anything"... Maan shout at a crying
geet.

Geet got scared and immediately tried to stop crying.but poor
girl can't seem to control her hiccups.

Maan felt bad instantly.he knew he is being rude with her but
what can he do.he don't able to hide his irritation.He is
stuck with the most irritating and dumb girl in the
world.that what he think of her...!!!

How he wish to reverse the day if he could...He, the maan
Singh khurana,the sole owener of khurana empire stuck with
the girl whom he don't even like.all because of his stupid
friend.geet is his friends sister thats why he is tolareting
her.he went hoshiyarpur for a business deal so went to meet
his friends family. They are like his own parents.maan
don't have anyone in life so he treat them as his own family
except geet.he went there and had to take geet with him as
adi's (his friend) parent ask him to take her to adi.they are
tensed to sent her alone on train so when maan went there
they felt relieved.now because of her badluck his car broke
down in the middle of jungle..ohh god how I wish to just
leave her here...he groaned in frustation.

yeah I know I am behaving like a jerk but what can I do.I
don't like girls who don't speak for themselves.never tried
to raise their voice and always do what people want them to
do.. and geet is the perfect example of them.though I don't
know her that much.because whenever I came to visit adi she
was never around.when she was around I never give her
importance.

Here again she is squirming..and whimpering..ohh god...!!!

"Geet stop moving and making noise."..thodi Der chup nahi
baith sakti tum."..I yelled at her.

She jumped hearing my voice and stilled.I again felt a tug in
my heart but didn't give much attention.got busy fixing
the.jeep.

Why she is too quite..?? Is she alright...?? I thought after
sometime feeling concern.I don't know why I am feeling this
new protectiveness towards her.

I peeked behind the bonnet to check on her.there she
is...sitting under the tree where I left her and clenching
her fist to be still.I felt bad.she looked pale and so
innocent.I went towards her.

Geet kya hua...? Why are u so quite..? Aur haat main kya
hai...I tried to sound soft.

Woh..Woh...she stammered..

Now I felt really bad.I am such a a** hole.poor girl got
frightend..

"Kya hua bolo sweetheart."..I tried to calm her.( sweetheart
wow...where it comes from maan...did u forgot u don't like
her...)

Aap ne hi to still rehne ko bola na...but it paining too much
maan jii...dekho...

she opened her palm and I felt a fist clenched my
heart.there's a big cut in her hand.ohh my god...she hurt
herself but still keep quite just because I told her..

"Honey why didn't you tell me earliar...how is it
happened."..??I don't know why I kept calling her with
endarement but it seemed natural to call her.

"car ke door main lag gaya..you told me to keep quite na aur
papa bolte hain humesha apno ki baat manna chahie."..she
cutely tried to make me understand.

Now I felt ashemed of myself.I always thought wrong about
her.she is not like what I thought.she is just innocent.pure
heart who always listen her parents every word and take them
seriously.

I took her hand and bandage it.she moaned in pain when I
applied antiseptic.but why I felt her pain in my heart.am I
getting weak for her..!!!

But how it is possible..I never thought about her on that
way..how can I fall for her in one day...what is happening
with me...I groaned feeling confused.

Maan ji..are you sleeping...??

"Nahi to...do you want something sweetheart...??"
Again...stop calling her sweetheart maan ...I chided myself.

"Mujhe bhuk lagi hain...can I have somethings please..mamma
pack some food for me...we both can share.. you are also
hungry na.".she start her bakbak but I am loving it...ohh how
I wish to stop her cute talking by taking her lips in mine.I
felt a strong desire slammed in me just seeing her animated
talk.

"ohh stop thinking like a pervert maan..she is too innocent
.."I controlled myself.

Chalo khate hain...saying that I brought the food and we
started eating.but seeing her trying to eat with her injured
hand I can't stop myself..

"Don't even think about that geet...I am feeding you ok..."

She blushed and nodded.this is the first time she got
affected by me and I felt I am in cloud nine.I fed her with
my hand occasionally brushing her lips.I know I am flirting
with her but I cant help myself.can you imagine the reseved
maan is flirting with the girl whom he didn't like earliar..I
guess love can make people do anything.

Yes I am calling it love..I don't know what else to call the
strong feeling I felt for her.now I have to make sure if she
feel something for me..I know its too early for her but I
don't want to lose her.

after finished eating we talked for sometime.basically she
did all the talking and I just admired her.I stoped try to
fix the jeep by now.I don't want to go now. I have only this
night with me and I want to make the most of it.

"Are you sleepy honey..?? Chalo so jao..I will make a bed for
you..."I deliberately called her honey to see her
reaction.she blushed again and I got my answer.she is
affected by me.

"Maan ji...can I hold your hand..mujhe Dar lag rahi
hain.."she asked meekly.

I am all yours sweetheart...you don't have to ask..I thought
in my mind.

I hold her hand and she came closer.I give a tug in her hand
and she came more close without hesitation.I don't know what
am I doing but I just want to make her mine.she snuggled
closer giving me goosebumps.

"Geet do you know what are you doing...its not right to come
this close to other man.." I tried to make her understand.she
is too innocent to know her own good.

You are not other man..you are my maan..she whispered in
sleepy state and I get the shock of my life.am I listening
right or just dreaming.

Her eyes snapped open and she look flustered.she tried to go
away from my hold.now I understood what happened.she spoke
her mind in her sleepy state.I felt like I got all happiness
in life.

Is that so..am I your maan..?? I teased.

She blushed hard and tried to hide herself...

"I can be your maan..only yours.. but for that you have to be
my geet..only mine..I don't share which is mine baby"...I
whispered in her ear making her shiver.

She looked at me with surprise and happiness both in her eye
and murmured,

"I am only yours maan.."I just hugged her and kissed her
forehead.I pressed her more into me not having enough of
her.she melted in my arm like honey..today I got the
happiness which I was always looking for...I know its early
for both of us to excepting that we are in love but we both
know what we feel...

The rest of the night we both slept in each others arm and
sharing our feelings..she told me how she Fall for me years
ago but never have the courage to told me.how she felt she is
not worthy of me for which I scold her.gradually we
fall asleep.

I wake up in the morning and found my mishti in my arm
looking like an angel sleeping peacefully.

"Goodmorning misti."..I whispered and she open her eyes
hearing me..

" Goodmorning maan ji."..

" What maan ji..call me maan..my name sounds amazing from
your lips"...

She blushed and whisper..

"Maan"

After our morning romance I fixed my car and when we were
stating for Delhi I just hold her face in my hand and said,

"So now on you are mine..dont even think of going away from
me. I love you geet"...I sound possessive...
I am possessive..I don't want to lose her..I found my
love and I will keep it with me...true love is too hard to
found..and I found mine...

Here is another is for you all who liked my work and
encourage me..I love you all for excepting me and my
work...wish you like this one also and give your response...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os...loved it a lot
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cute nd sweet OS lovd it ill be waitng 4 more such stories😃
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Cute n all lovey dovy😳
Like ur style of writing!😊
Waiting for more stories from you. ..
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Very cute os.👏
loved it😊
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I loved it. That was so sweet!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

cute nd sweet OS lovd it ill be waitng 4 more such stories😃



Thanks for liking my os dear..I will try to write more I promise... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Cute n all lovey dovy😳

Like ur style of writing!😊
Waiting for more stories from you. ..



I am glad dear you liked my writing..I read your one of your story..I loved it but why sad ending.. 😭
But anyways it's awesome dear...
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very sweet and cute os
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Eagerly waiting for next part

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