the story line is going well...
in previous parts again i felt yaar ab maan-geet ki sagaai and marriage k beech ke do teen mahine kab bitenge n how are they gonna meet... u almost skipped two months in this update...
and Maaneet have met as well...
call me insane but i reaaly love u for skipping 2 months...but still I feel maaneet get really less time together...
hopefully they will hv spme gala time in Oz..
and the things i liked in this chapter are , actually i liked all the things going in the story. Although ur story is bit confusing at times...
I sometimes by the end of a part forget wot I read in middle...
liked the way aliya -rohail story progressing in this chapter.. and seeing somebody following aliya making it clear that ssomething is fishy and aliya's parents know abt it...
will wait for this to be disclosed.. loved the way u portrayed aliya - rohail scene.. i wish rohail cud hv stayed little longer with aliya at her place so we could have gotten more of their banter...
I liked the character of nidhi she is smart nd intelligent... beauty with brains... copying lectures frm professor was mast and she cracked that id too.. hopefully now Maan will now handle it more carefully...and he can now protect Geet as well...
and the best thing i liked about this chapter was the Nidhi - Maan convo esp. regarding his relationship with Geet...Nidhi very gently made him realise wot is lacking in their relationship...she's a really good friend to Maan, she just not care for him but also about his relationship with Geet...she did wot a friend shud do i.e. knocking some brains into Maan's over active mind. ...I literally cracked up when nidhi warned him " USKO MAT BATANA!!" that was so damn cute and hilarious ...
Khurana brothers always manage to bring smile on my face lol "darwaza kholo and samne jo darwaza hai uski ghanti baja do" buwahhh!!! laga hi tha aas - pados mein honge but itne paas... ha ha ha ha... finally maan gave a thot to wot nidhi told him and now he is looking forward to spend some quality lone time with his lady love- Geet finally...
I liked the way Maan had acknowledged Geet's presence while greeting everyone around...
it was subtle and sublime something more cozy...
Edited by anky_s - 10 years ago