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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
maan dont want to be called as sir from geet's mouth for his entire life so he decided not to go to college but his dad failed all his plans and he had to go to college ...all were happy to see him in the college...maan gave a test to students and went to home...geet was nervous about the test and her pen also stopped writing maan gave her pen and went out from classroom geet felt revealed and did her best...all at KM teasing maan ..maan called aditi to get the details of class timings but aditi cut the call and messaged geet's no...geet was feeling easy after talking with maan..both are feeling differnt with this new relation..eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayee kya cute sweet lovestory hai

pati teacher aur patni student

romance kya jamega jab pura class pati par fida ho aur patni jealous
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantestic update dear...very well written.. 👏 .👏.👏 👏...i really enjoyed it alot.. 👍🏼 ...
well now maan trying to make geet comfortable...😳 ...and aditi is my fav...loved her teasings.. 😆 ...

now eagerly waiting for...????

hahaha

next class from mr.khurana!!.😉 . 😛 ..
continueee sooonnn dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...maan n geet both r changing...abb dekhte hai kya hota hai...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all loved all the banners. They are just wow.

Coming to the story i really liked it a lot. Sweet and very cute. Maan is fun loving guy, carefree but very discipline n hard working. He is so successful yet so down to earth with no ego as of now. I really loved his character a lot. Quite different than what i have been reading. And Geet is also very sweet, bubbly n full of life girl. And she is so in love with Maan.


I just loved their first meet(college one) Their small nok-jhok and both had almost made an opinion regarding each other. But everything flew out of the window when they met for the roka. Geet is already in love with him but now even Maan has started to accept her. This arrange marriage is quite different than what i have been reading on Maaneet. Then the surprise test n Geet so not behaving herself was also funny. Maan has his effects on her.


Coming to Dev-Rohail, poor them, they always get stuck in one thing or the other. But they do know how to get out of it too. Both are such kids n a lot adorable. I loved Aditi too. Dev, Rohail, Aditi, these three are a lot naughty n mischievious. I liked Akshay, Soha, Arjun, Tanya n Dadima too. Even Geet's parents are lovely n of course Nandini too. And Maan n Ranbir's first meet was hilarious. Even the college parts were funny.


So far just loved reading the story. Looking forward to this coming friday.



-Sanjana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayeee...awesome one...lovvving the story a looot...cant wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago


"Bhai!!!" A frustrated Rohail opened the door of Maan's room calling him loudly to wake him up but to his surprise he saw him already up and getting ready...

"Hain??" A confused Rohail looked at Maan with open mouth who was adjusting his tie while looking himself in the mirror. He looked at his watch which showed 7:30 in the morning...

"Bhai???" Rohail looked at Maan in a disbelieve...

"Hey!! Morning!!" Maan smiled turning his face towards Rohail... He was dressed up in a light blue jeans with black shirt and a black tie around his neck...

"Wah wah!! kya baat hai... aj to kuch zyaada he jaldi dikh rahi hai university pohunchne ki..." Rohail chuckled forgetting about his frustration...

"Ab kya karun??? Hone wali biwi ko thoda impress bhi to karna hai!!" Maan winked at Rohail...

"Huhhh???" Rohail's eyes widen up with this unexpected answer...

"Set hai!! Yaani aj wo sab hone wala hai jo... actually pending tha!!" Rohail bit his lower lip with a grin...

"Pending kaam mein rakhta he nahi hun!! Bohat maze le liye tum sab ne... ab bus... line pe a jao sab!!" Maan warned with a smirk...

"Hahahahahahaha..." Rohail laughed loudly...

"Arre bhai!! mein to bhool he gaya tha... jis kaam k liye yahan aya tha wo to kiya he nahi..." Rohail ran fingers through his hairs...

"Kya??" Maan looked up at him while wearing his socks...

"Bhai presentation!!!! poori raat nahi soya hun mein... please help me out naa... Warna bohat bezti hogi meri sab k saamne..." Rohail opened up in front of Maan...

"Hmmm... sochte hain kuch!!" Maan pressed his lips together while thinking of something...

"Meeting kab hai???" Maan asked...

"12 Baje.." Rohail took a deep breathed...

"Theek hai! mujhe 11 baje reminder dena... aur tab tak dete rehna jab tak mein reply na kardun...phir i'll do the rest.." Maan smiled while getting up from the bed wearing his shoes...

"Huhh... Thanks Bro!!" Rohail gave a side hug to Maan and turned to go...

"By the way!!!" Rohail stopped and turned...

"You are looking too good today!!" Rohail added with a wink and left which made Maan smile...

Spraying his signature perfume, he put his wallet in his pocket along with his mobile and grabbing the car keys from the dresser, looked at himself in the mirror for the last time and walked out of his room for the breakfast...

...

On the other hand Geet was hell excited plus nervous at the same time...

"What should i wear today???" This was her question since the time she was up... From the last one hour she was standing in front of her wardrobe unable to decide what to wear...

"Nandni se help loon???" She looked at Nandni who was still sleeping...

"Nahi!!! Bad Idea... wo bohat chere gii mujhe..." Geet shrugged off her thought of asking Nandni and again turned towards her wardrobe... Finally after wasting so much time she took out a Black Capri with a shaffoon long shirt in the same color...

"Ummm This one is looking nice!!" Geet smiled looking at the dress and then quickly closing her wardrobe went inside bathroom for a quick bath... It was only 7:30 but she was feeling like she is already running out of time...

Getting ready and checking herself out in the mirror for the last time, she went downstairs making sure that she won't make a noise so that Nandni will not get disturb from her sleep...

"Khairiat??? aj itni subha subha kese uth gai???" Smriti looked at Geet with widen eyes...

"Ummm wo...bus... aise he..." Geet stammered...

"Actually mumma!!!... Aap se kuch kehna tha..." Geet took a moment to think and then turned towards Smriti...

"Kya???" Smriti looked at with wrinkles on her forehead...

"Mumma wo..." Geet took a deep breath and then narrated the whole scene since the time she met Maan for the first time at that Rainy Night...

"This is what we call Destiny Beta! Uska door door tak tumse kyun rishta naata nahi tha... lekin dekho, usse tumhari zindagii mein ana tha aur wo agaya! Aur ab jab... thoda student teacher scene hai yahan... to usse janne ki... samajhne ki koshish karo... hmmm??" Smriti smiled at Geet... She was too supportive that moment...

"Par... apko koi problem nahi hui k... i mean wo iss tarah... he is my professor???" Geet asked arching her eyebrows...

"Nahi!! Kyunki Maan apne saath saath doosrow ke saath bhi bohat honest hai... Ussne kal he Ranbir ko call kar ke sab bata diya tha... bal k ijazat bhi li thi k kahin humay to iss sab se koi problem to nahi hai! " Smriti smiled giving Geet another shock...

"Matlab... ap logon ko sab pata tha??" Geet looked at Smriti with a disbelieve.. Her respect for him grew more in her heart...

"Haan sab pata tha... ab deir nahi ho rahi???" Smriti smiled and got up to set the breakfast table...

"Maan Khurrana!!!! Tum akhir ho kya???" Geet smiled and shook her head...



"Lagta hai Baarish hone wali hai!" Maan thought as he looked up in the sky while locking up his car... As he turned around to leave from there, he saw Geet taking her books and hand bag out of her car and locking it up, just in front of him...

A smile appeared on his face as he saw her hitting her head against her palm again and again... His simple smile turned out into a laughter as he saw a new side of her... She was jumping on the ground with a frustrated face that is when he realized that she forgot to change her slippers and was wearing the usual one she must wears at home... She was looking too cute in that look and beautiful as well... With her fair body complexion and flawless pink skin, the black color was going really well... Simple pearl earrings, a silver chain with pearl pendant and a light make up was making her look more graceful...

He stared at her from bottom to top and smiled dreamily... They both were wearing black that was surely complementing the two..

He came out of his trance when suddenly the water droplets starts to hit him and it started raining like cats and dogs... Before the two people in the parking lot knew it, they were already fully drenched with rain..

"OMG!!!" Geet shouted...

"Aj sab ghalat ho raha hai!! Haina???" He commented loudly with a grin while walking up to her...

"Nahi nahi!!! sab bohat acha ho raha hai... pehle meri sandles and ab baarish!!" Geet passed a sarcastic comment with a pout...

"Gusaaa!!!! Naak pe rehta hai??" He teased her...

"Hhuh???" She looked at him with narrow eyes... Maan started too wonderfully that Geet didn't got any chance to become nervous in talking with him...

"What??? Yahin khare rehna hai??" He asked folding his arms against his chest...

"Aise ander jaein gay???" Geet looked at herself from bottom to top and then at him...

"To phir yahin khare raheinge???" He arched his eyebrow...

"Ummm..." She didn't knew what to say so she started looking here and there trying to think of something...

"Chalo!!... Bheeg to hum wese he chuke hain... abb baarish aur kya bigare gii??" Maan smiled showing her the way...

"Lekin... kahan??" She asked...

"Chalo to... Kidnap nahi kar raha... " He gave her an assurance look and she hesitantly started walking with him...

He opened the door of passenger seat of is car for her and as she sat down, he closed the door and took the driving seat... He started the car and before pressing the accelerator, took out his mobile and started punching few buttons then putting it back, started driving the car...



He stopped his car in front of a juice, Coffee shop and pressed the horn...
A waiter came running and asked for the order... It was still raining so they decided to be in the car only...
"Kya logi tum???" Maan asked turning his face towards her...

"Ummm... Cold Coffee!!" Geet took a second to think and then spoke out softly...

"Yaar!! ek cold coffee le ana aur mere liye... Ek strawberry milkshake.." Maan placed the order and turned his face towards Geet who was busy looking outside in the rain...

A smile was crept on her face showing how much she was loving it right now... He actually wanted her to be a girl who would find happiness in these small small moments of life...

"Tumhe Baarish bohat achi lagti hai naa??" He smiled at her...

"Haan!! I Love Rains!!" She said taking her hand out from the window of the car to feel the rain...

"So??? Aur kya kya pasand hai??" Maan started...

"Mujhe??? " She took a minute to think...

"Rehne do... yehi bata do k kya nahi pasand hai!!" He giggled seeing her thinking like that...

"Show off!!" She blurted out at once...

"Wo to mujhe bhi bilkul pasand nahi hai... And in this business world, you will see many like that..." He made a face expressing how much he hates diplomacy...

"Lekin... One needs to be a little diplomatic to survive..." Geet put her thought forward...

"Haan... khair yeh to hai.. Anyways... yeh sab choro, Here is your cold coffee..." He forwarded the large glass of cold coffee from waiter's hand to hers...

"Mujhe thanks kehna tha apko..." Geet looked down pressing her lips together...

"Thanks??? kisliye??" He asked with narrow eyes...

"Dad se baat karne k liye... Mein soch he rahi thi kab aur kese baat karun.. lekin uski naubat he nahi i.." Geet looked at him with a light smile on her face...

"No need to Thank... Mein khud koi complications ya misunderstandings nahi chahta humare beech... Yeh kuch cheezein to mujhe clear karni he thi sab k saamne..." He replied softly..

"Aur... aj tumhe yahan mein laaya bhi isiliye hoon taake mein kisi bhi interfearence k bagair... on a serious note baat kar sakun tumse..." He came on his point...

"Kaunsi baat???" She asked innocently...

"Geet!!! Dekho... Its a fact that you don't know me as a person... And let me tell you a truth that i backfire really hard, Kyunki now i will be there in the university, to... possible hai k cher char ho aur mein uska jawab bhi dun... but in this all i don't want you to get uncomfortable and get embarrassed or something... Tumhe mera saath dena parega.." He put forward the first thing which he knew they will be facing soon...

"I don't believe this!! You really wana do this??" Geet questioned...

"You want to disclose our relationship publicly in the university???" He asked putting his mug down on his lap...

"Nahi!!! I mean... It will be really very awkward then.. Wese bhi Additi keeps no stone unturned to pull my leg..." Geet made a face...

"Bus phir.. let me handle it my way!! Kyunki... now is getting too over!! Saara waqt bus aur koi topic he nahi hai in sab k pass... And now its my turn.. Revenge you see!!" He smiled tongue in mouth...

"Ahan!! And... they won't pay you back???" She raised an eyebrow...

"Itni himmat nahi hai kisi ki... Tumhe yeh sab isliye bata raha hun kyunki hum log ek doosre ki bajane mein koi kasar nahi chorte..." He took another sip from his mug and then put it aside...

"Aur agar tum uss time ghabra gai.. to unhe aur mauqa mil jaye ga... Zahir hai hum ek doosre k baare mein zyaada kuch nahi jaante hain to we need time to know each other!" He sounded logical to her...

"Hmmm..." Taking a deep breath, she rested her back on the seat... She was totally herself with him right now...
Just after a second, her mobile buzzed and she picked it up to see...
"Class postponed for 2 hours???" She passed a confused look to which Maan smiled and nodded in a yes...

"To??? Ab???" She looked at him as they both finished their drinks...

"Tum batao... Tell me about yourself, Additi k ilaawa aur kya irritating lagta hai??" He joked...

"Hehehe!! Yeah! She is too irritating when it comes about you!! Warna she is like my sister!" Geet giggled...

"Haaan... but there are only one or two to irritate you, meri to poori family he mere peeche pari hui hai! Pichle do maheenow mein... meine tumhara naam itna suna hai k mujhe bohat tight kism ki chirr ho gai thi tumhare naam se... Infact, mein to New York se yeh tey kar k aya tha k it will be a NO for me..!!" He smiled remembering that time...

"Phir haan kyun kaha??" She questioned with a grumpy face...

"Isska jawab, mein tumhe shaadi k baad dunga! " He smirked, answering her in a full flirtatious tone which made her go red for a moment... Her gaze shifted from his face towards the window side to hide her blushing face...

"Ab chalein?? I'll drop you home so you can change..." He suggested...

"Ummm yeah!" She agreed immediately ...



He had just started to know her a bit and he guessed it right that he needs to make her comfortable with him or else these classes and the teasing comments from their friends will turn out to be a disaster for them... Plus, he wanted Geet and himself to be sure that they can actually manage with each other and make this relationship work out...

"Mujhe ek sawal bhi samajha tha apse..." Geet started on the way... She just felt like when he is putting so much efforts to keep the atmosphere friendly, then she should even contribute...

"Arre haan... sawal bhi to tha tumhara..." Maan smiled looking at her...

"Ek kaam karna, class mein pooch leyna... filhaal to ghar ja k change karna aur phir wahan se wapas university pohunchna bohat he mushkil lag raha hai mujhe... Poora road jamm hai" He pressed his lips together looking outside...

"Huh??? to ab??" Geet asked who paid attention on the road for the first time...

"Ab yeh k... dua karo baarish ruk aur mein U-Turn le lun... warna phir kuch sochna parega..." He chuckled...

They were still stuck in jam when the rain turned more heavy...

"Geet!" He turned his face to look at her who was playing with her chain looking outside...

"Hmmm???" She looked at him with lost expressions...

"We are jammed yaar!! Wapas university nahi ja sakte ab... Infact ghar pohunchne mein bhi 4 se 5 ghante lag jaeinge..." He informed her about the situation...

"Huh???" Geet got a bit worried... Her car was parked at the university and here he is telling her that they will not go back...

...

"Ranbir!!! Geet ka phone bhi nahi lag raha hai aur bahar itni baarish bhi ho rahi hai... mujhe samajh nahi a raha k kya karun???" A worried Smriti called Ranbir who was in Khurrana's office for a meeting...

"Phone nahi lag raha??? Acha tum pareshaan mat ho... mein kuch karta hun.." Ranbir tried to calm down Smriti and ended the call...

"Kya hua???" Akshay asked who was there sitting with him discussing some project...

"Kuch nahi!! Bahar baarish bohat ho rahi hai aur Geet ka phone nahi lag raha hai.." Ranbir told Akshay...

"Oh!!!" This made Akshay worried as well...

"Chahoo!! yeh papers meine..." Dev, who just entered in the meeting hall telling Arjun about something stopped seeing the two faces...

"Kya hua???" Arjun asked looking at Akshay and Ranbir...

"Bahar baarish ka kya haal hai???" Akshay asked Dev instead of answering Arjun...

"Don't ask Dad!!! Traffic itna jam hai k kya kahun??? Tez baarish ki wajah se mobile signals bhi theek se nahi a rahe hain.." Dev answered making a face...

"Infact, Abhi Rohail bata raha tha k uski subha Bhai se baat hui thi aur wo bhi iss meeting k liye ane wala tha... tabhi to meeting 2 baje tak postpone karwai hai humne.. Lekin ab, Bhai ka kuch ata pata he nahi hai... na phone lag raha hai uska..." Dev told further...

"ANYTHING WRONG???" Rohail asked, who just came up for some work there...

Akshay and Ranbir informed others about Geet as well and they all started dialing their numbers again and again... It was decided that they will ask Geet to be with Maan so that she will be safe...

...

"Bhai kahan ho???" Rohail finally succeeded in calling Maan...

"Arre yaar!! bohat bura traffic jam hai yahan..." Maan hit his palm against the steering...

"Chhh... yaani tum university se nikal chuke ho???" Rohail got puzzeled that now what would he tell Akshay and Ranbir...

"Haan... Classes cancel kar di hain saari aj..."Maan told him more...

"Aree yaar!! ab mein kya karun??? wahan sab pareshaan ho rahe hain k bhabhi ka phone nahi lag raha aur baarish bhi itni tez hai... Ab tum bata rahe ho k classes bhi cancel ho gai hain..." Rohail told Maan about the scenerio...

"Geet mere saath hai... theek hai aur hum yahan saath mein traffic jam mein phase hue hain!!!" Maan broke the news...

"Wow!!! Superb!!!" Rohail laughed...

"Shut Up!!! wese office yahan se zyaada kareeb hai... agar aisa he traffic raha to we will be there in about i don't know how many hours..." Maan made a face as here he is tired of this traffic and there Rohail was laughing...

"Ok... Theek hai!!" Rohail smiled and ended the call...

...

"Wo Bade Papa!!" Rohail came entered in the meeting hall to inform Akshay and others about Maan and Geet...

"Kya hua??? baat hui???" Dev asked instead of Akshay...

"Haan... wo... bhai traffic jam mein phasa hua hai aur Bhabhi uske saath hai... shayad kuch deir mein yahin office a jaye kyun wo jahan hai wahan se office zyaada kareeb hai.." Rohail gave everyone a breath of relief with this news wheras a grin appeared on Dev's face...

"Mein... ata hun abhi..." Dev excused followed by Rohail...

"Apni hassi pe control rakho warna bohat pitne walay hain hum bhai se..." Rohail warned Dev...

"Meine kuch bola???" Dev arched his eyebrow...

"Hass to rahe ho naa?? Wese bhi shayad bhabhi saath bethi thi isliye wo control kar gaya warna meri bohat zabardast class leyna wala tha abhi wo..." Rohail told further...

"Oye!! Bhai meeting attend karega???" Dev's eye popped out...

"Haan to???" Rohail passed a confused look but then his eyes popped out as well...

"Mar gaye!!! " They both yelled together and ran for their works...



"Damn!!!" Maan shouted getting inside the car again... he was all wet again.

"Kya hua???" a worried Geet asked...

"Kya hua??? yeh poocho kya nahi hua??? Agay aur peeche... donow sides bohat buri tarah se jammed hain... aur agar baarish nahi ruki aur hum yahan kuch deir aur rahe... then our car will start floating!!" Maan introduced Geet with upcoming circumstances...

"OMG" Geet almost shouted...

"Gadi ko yahin chorte hain.. and lets get out, yahan rahe to pakka phass jaein gay!!" Maan took a decision...

Grabbing his coat from the back, he gave that to Geet to wear and opening the door stepped out of the car...

"Yahan to already itna paani bhara hua hai!!!" Geet shouted as soon as she got out of the car...

"Shukar karo gadi se nikal aye.. warna doors bhi jam ho jatay aur phir pakka hum oopar he pohunch jatay!" Maan commented in a peeved tone...

"Hmmm.." Nodding in a yes, Geet took a step to walk forward but got slipped with water..

"Ahhh..." She shouted as she was about to fall but her grabbed her hand and pulled her up again...

"You Ok???" He asked with concern...

"Haa..." Geet nodded trying to catch her breath...

"Idhar se niklo... yahan paani kum hai.." He grabbed her hand in his again and started running...
This was the first time ever he touched her which made her tremble for a moment... She forgot where she is and what else is going on.. what she was looking at was her hand in his... She was running blindly where ever he was leading her...

They both stopped outside a hotel and he left her hand...
"Huh!!! Thank God!!!" Maan looked up at the sky and then at Geet who was looking a little frightened...

"Don't worry!! At least we are safe now!!" He kept his hand on her shoulder to assure her that everything will go fine...
She some how managed to nod in a yes and quietly followed him...

Just like their first meeting, where they were alone and got caught with a weird situation, Here they were alone for the second time and again got caught but to some dangerous situation...
For him what matters was Geet! She was his responsibility right now and for Geet, he was the savior and support..

"Shoot!!!" Maan ran fingers through his hairs as he found the whole hotel booked... not even a single room was there... It was about 3 in the evening but was looking like 8 at night...

"Ab hum kya kareinge Maan???" Geet looked at Maan with pale eyes...

"Arre sir app??" A man came to Maan...

"Ummm???" Maan looked at the man with narrow eyes, trying to think if he remembers him or not...

"Sir!! mein iss Hotel ka manager hoon... Aapki company ki side se ek suit humare iss hotel mein humesha booked rehta hai...filhaal wo khaali hai, app chahein to usse use kar sakte hain!!" The manager informed Maan...

"Wow!!!" Maan thought... It was a great help for him that moment...

"Thanks... Keys???" Maan smiled and demanded the keys...

"Sir!! Aap yahan sign kar dijye aur yeh rahi keys..." The receptionist put forward a register and room keys in front of Maan...

Signing the register, he took the keys and asked Geet to come along with him...

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Reaching inside the hotel suit, they both took a sigh of relief...

Geet sat down on the bed whereas he threw himself on the sofa... For few minutes, there was a complete silence in the room after which he got up and moved towards the little table where a mineral water bottle was kept along with a glass... He filled a glass of water for himself and gulping it down, filled another for Geet...

"Pani???" He gave her the glass...

"Thanks!!!" Geet, who was still in some kind of shock took away the glass from him and gulped it down in one sip...

Taking away the glass from her he moved towards the wardrobe area to see if he can find something to wear... But to his surprise, it was filled with almost all sort of dresses, male/female both..

Taking out a simple blue jeans with brown shirt, he moved towards the bathroom instructing Geet to call Smriti and make her aware of the situation...

"Oh God!!! Isse zyaada kharab kya hota??? Bohat ajeeb lag raha hai mujhe... Pata nahi yahan kab aur kitni deir rukna parega..." Geet cursed the bad weather under her breath as soon as Maan left for the bathroom and started dialing Smriti's number...

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"Number laga???" Maan asked as he got out of the bathroom after changing...

"Hmmm... maa se baat hogai hai, pareshaan ho rahi thi wo lekin ab sab theek hai.." Geet smiled... She was looking too relaxed after talking to Smriti...

"Hmmm..." He smiled and again sat down on the sofa...

"Ab aisa na ho k yahan se tumhe seedha hospital le k jaana par jaye mujhe...Wo ek alag adventure ho jaye ga phir..." Maan indirectly asked Geet to go and change...

"Kya???" wrinkled appeared on her forehead...

"Kya?? kya??? jao kuch kapre nikalo aur change karlo... warna beemaar par jao gi..." He pointed towards the wardrobe...

"Oh!!" Shaking her head, she stood up and went to change...

"Ab isse zyaada interesting mulaqat i don't think meri kabhi bhi isse ho sakti thi..." He smiled at her ...

"Mom Dad ko phone karta hun!!" Maan thought and dialled their numbers one by one from the landline...

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Finishing the call he thought to order something but then stopped thinking that he should wait for her...

She came out wearing a simple white tights with blue kurti with a scarf around her neck...

"Maan????" Geet looked around all over the room to find him and then went ahead towards the attached dinning and T.V hall...

"Yahan bhi nahi hai... ab yeh kahan gaye???" Geet scratched her head...

"Aj possibly aur kya kya ho sakta tha??? huhhh... i have never ever imagined this in my wildest dreams that i will meet him for the second time like this and will get stuck with him...Wo bhi is tarah... Kahan mein unki presence se kaanp rahi thi aur abhi yahan we are actually sharing a suit..." Geet thought about today's incidents taking a deep breath...

She was still in her thoughts, smiling looking at her hand and remembering how he caught her hand and saved her from slipping down and didn't left her hand even for a second till they both reached hotel...

"Geet!!!" Geet heard a knock on the door and then his voice...

Opening the door she found him standing there with smile on his face...

"Shayad... humay aj raat yahin rukna parega..." He said pressing his lips together while walking in...

"Huh???" Geet's jaw dropped down her knees..

"Mu bund karlo.. usse koi faida nahi hone wala... Achi baat yeh hai k we are safe and not alone..." He chuckled...

"Ghar pe sab parehaan ho rahe honge..." Geet made a sad face and sat down in the TV lounge...

"Nahi!!! meine abhi sab ko call kar k khud baat ki hai and they are relaxed because you are safe... Itni baarish hai bahar k jo jahan hai, wahin betha hua hai..." Maan said while putting his phone down on the table...

"Wese jo hota hai ache k liye hota hai... socho.. agar tum slippers change karna naa bhoolti to iss waqt aur problem mein hoti... Aur agar hum uss time wahan se nahi nikle hote to abhi tum bilkul akele pata nahi kahan hoti.." The showed her the positive sides...

"no idea!???" Geet giggled hugging a cushion..

Whether gave both of them a chance to spent some quality time with each other like this... They were truly themselves only right now free from any formal dressing or anything just like how they used to be at home...They both not only chatted with each other but discovered more about their families as well...

At One end, Their families were worried about them, praying to God for their safety and here at the other End, They were Caught In A Rain Romance!!!



It wasn't just an ordinary hotel room but a luxurious suit which consist of 1 bedroom and a huge hall where dining table, television and sofas were neatly placed...

She was busy in watching some movie whereas he was completely engrossed in his book "Tick Tock" by Michael Bennett which he just brought from the Hotel's bookshop when he went downstairs... Food was already ordered and now they both were waiting for it... There was nothing much to talk about at this point of time so they both tried to kept themselves busy in some sort of activity to avoid any awkwardness...

"I am starving now... It was about 8 when i had that strawberry milkshake and now its 8 of Night!" Maan ran fingers through his hairs while turning a page... He then looked at Geet from the corner of his eyes whose eyes were fixed on the door which was clearly indicating how much she was hungry...

"Dinner Sir!!" They both heard a knock on the door and then a voice...

"Thank God!!! I was starving!!" Maan kept his book aside and went to open the door... A man came in and pushed the dinner trolley inside... "Anything else sir???" He asked...

"No Thank you!! By the way, what about the weather condition???" Maan inquired...
"Sir wo to depend karta hai k baarish kab rukti hai!!" The waiter answered back and left...

"Dinner???" Maan looked at Geet who was just waiting for him to call her any moment... She got up quickly and got seated taking a chair next to him...

"Apko.. khane mein kya acha lagta hai???" Geet asked casually while serving herself her food...

"Filhaal to yeh Italian he acha lag raha hai... agay ka pata nahi!!" He said while putting a fork wrapped with spaghetti in his mouth...

"Hehe!!! Seems like you are too hungry!!" Geet smiled pressing her lips together..

"To??? You are not Hungry??? Ya tum hawa pe zinda rehti ho??" He arched his eyebrow while hiding his smile..

"I am a foodie person... Mujhe sirf hawa pe zinda rehne ka koi shawk nahi hai..." She narrowed her eyes as wrinkles appeared on her forehead...

"Hahahaha!!! Chalo achi baat hai, To... Miss Foodie!! Apko kuch banana bhi ata hai ya bus khao aur mast raho..." He chuckled.. It was fun to irritate her a little...

"I know cooking!!" She looked at him sternly guessing his mood to irritate her...

"Aur gussa??? wo bhi bohat ata hai???" He smiled tongue in mouth enjoying her expressions...

"Aap se kum..." She snapped back...

"Mein??? Abhi kuch deir pehle koi keh raha tha k mujhe gussa nahi ata??Mujhe kab gusse mein dekh liya???" Maan raised his eyebrows..

"Abhi thodi deir pehle, jab app apne gusse ka demo de rahe thai... aur usse pehle bhi..First Day! First Class... Maan Sir!!" She said the last line purposely to irritate him...

A wide smile appeared on his face at this answer.."Tumhe pata hai, tum logon ki classes attend karne k liye mere mana karne ki sab se bari wajah kya thi???" He asked...

"Kya???" He passed a confused look...

"Tumhara yeh Sir!! jo mujhe university k bahar sunai bhi nahi dena chahiye..." He clearly warned her about the thing he hated the most...

"Hahahahahaha.." This cracked her out and she started laughing with an open heart making him stare at her... "She looks even more pretty when she laughs.." He thought...



"Tum Bedroom mein so jao aur darwaza ander se lock kar leyna..." Maan instructed Geet while opening his book and resting again on the sofa... He was a mature man and was very much aware of the upcoming issues that he knew will surely arise as soon as they will reach back home...

"Hmmm..." Pressing her lips together, she nodded in a small yes and went inside the bedroom closing the door behind... "Mumma!!! What do i do now?? Mujhe bohat ajeeb lag raha hai.." Geet got a bit uncomfortable now... It was an uncertain situation and no matter how much she trust him or his presence is giving her a feeling of being protected but still she was scared... She has never ever gone through such a situation..


"Mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai... ek to itni zor zor se bijli karak rahi hai, oopar se itni toofani baarish aur mein yahan, aise... Mera dum ghut raha hai iss akele kamre mein... mein nahi reh sakti yahan..." Geet gulped down the lump under her throat...

Till the time it was day and she was in front of him it was all going fine but now her heart started sinking... She started feeling too much suffocation in that lonely room... She opened the terrace window for some fresh air but got scared with the thunder sound... It was too dark outside..
"Ahhh!!!!!" Geet screamed and ran out of the room...

"Kya hua???" Maan got up with a jerk hearing her scream...
"M...mmm mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai..." Geet stammered looking here and there...

"Geet!!! calm down!! Betho..." He made her sit on a sofa and gave her some water to drink...
"Better???" He asked as she gulped down the water in one sip under her throat..
"Hmmm..." She nodded in a yes while catching her breath... Taking a sigh of relief, he sat down on another sofa opposite to her though he was too sleepy at that moment...

"You want something???" He asked after a long silence with an absent mind... He was up since 6 in the morning and now his eyes were getting too stubborn and demanding some rest..

"Nahi! I am feeling better... " Geet replied feeling her breath coming back to normal...
He got up to have a glass of water and then headed towards the washroom to wash his face so that he will be able to open his eyes properly..

Pulling her legs up on the sofa, she rested her head at back and closed her eyes.. At least she wasn't feeling any suffocation now. She was also up since morning and tired too and that worked over the fears making her dizzy and fall asleep...

He came out of the bathroom, feeling a little fresh and saw her fast asleep...

"Lo!! Meri neend bhaga k khud so gai!" He hit his head against his palm then walked up to her only to find her all shivering a little..

"Tum sote hue aur bhi khubsoorat lagti ho.." He smiled at his own thoughts and then very slowly and carefully carried her towards the bedroom in his arms... Placing her on the bed, he pulled the comforter up to cover her.. He kept looking at her for while noticing her simple gestures, the innocent look on her face and a dreamy smile shining on her lips... Those pink rosy lips got his attention and then a sudden hit of his mannerism pulled him out of his trance...

"Pagal hogaya hai kya??? chup chap nikal yahan se.. aur ja ke soja.." His scolded himself and correcting the comforter, was about to move out when she caught his hand along with the comforter tightly hugging it from her face... His fingers touched her cheek popping his goose bumps out... For a while he did nothing but to stand still with this sudden contact of his hand from her cheek but then realizing what changes are taking place inside him, he slowly took his hand out of her grip and closing the door behind slowly he came back into the hall and lied down on the sofa...

"She is making me crazy!! Aisa pehli baar ho raha hai k kisi k liye mein iss tarah feel kar raha hoon... wo hazaron ki bheer mein bhi kitni alag lag rahi hai mujhe, Yeh ehsaas k agay ja ke uski zindagii meri zindagii se jurr jayegi kitna pyaara hai!!" He smiled thinking about all his feelings... He didn't noticed it before but her presence was effecting him... He was loosing his control over his heart now...




Hope u like it!
Next Update... Next Friday
Sameera
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Edited by sameera_12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update. Too good and superbly written.loved everything, their talks and getting comfortable with each other. Waiting for next already
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Posted: 10 years ago
An update even before asking!
Kya baat h...
hmmm so both to be laila majnu struck in bad weather!😛
So maan all set to have his share of fun bichare dev n rohan !😆

ab waiting for the next Friday!!!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderfully Update Sameera 😃
I just loved Maan's character, He's so sweet 😳

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