MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD-2~ UPDATED pt 20 / Pg 139 / 21st Oct........ - Page 38

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🤗 Hi sweetie...
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Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi Avi dear...
aaj bada cold hei yaar.. sipping ginger tea this time ...
meds leker so gai aur kisi se baat nahi hui...
😊 how r u..?


mazza hai

Papa aaye hai so enjoying with him

nap le rahe hai so I am here

sab gumshuda kyun hai?😃

apna khayal rakho

jaldi so gai thi? aissa kyun? cold ka bahana toh nahi tha?
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hi thanks 4 da note! Wen will u b posting The Bliss??
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aaj kahan gayab ho gai.. lily.. ?
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hai babie..
green light ..din mei..
r u updating
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pics lagana shuru kar do har thread pe

countdown mein bhi mazza aayega😆 aur targetbhi ho jayega
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hello my dear friends..

Updating...

Thank you so much all of u ...





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(F banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 15

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Part - 16


Both d cuties had theit diner ,, Geet secured d remaining work,, informed U sam about her early mrng prog nd then both settled in bed to take some sleep ,, Geet set d alarm nd made manu to sleep .

She got up after 3 hr nd get ready ,, called Prem nd said that she was also coming to drop them ,, she dressed sleeping manu , filled his milk bottle nd kept in her bag , took manu in her arms nd went out ,, she settled sleeping manu in his seat nd started for Prem house ,, they didn't visit her coz they wr hell busy in packing nd to complete other works ,, Prem's family lived in India nd Heer's here in US but they decided to marrying them In india bcoz most of their relatives nd Prem's family was in India ,, whole family was going for nealy 20 days so have lot's of work .

Geet reached at Heer's home , prem was also there , he came there last nyt ,, all wr ready to go ,, a cab was already there to drop them , Prem nd Heer came with Geet with some bags nd Heer's parentsnd lil sis Adab wr in cab behind Geet ,, Heer wake up Manu nd he opened his drowsy eyes but became active seeing Prem nd Heer ,,he complaint Prem that he was angry with him coz he didn't talk or visit him ,, both said sorry to him nd caught their ears ,, they reached airport ,, prem went to collect a pass for Geet ,, Heer nd other took out d bags nd loded on trolley ,, Geet went to park d car nd came with manu after 5 min ,, all wr in d airport lobby ,, all collected their boarding passes nd sent their bags then came to Geet they have sufficient time for check in ,, all wr talking ,, Heer nd her mom wr feeding Geet with their shopping experiences nd Prem nd Adab wr busy with manu ,, after few min of talk Heer Dad told them for check in coz they wr 5 members nd had many hands bags with them to check ,, they bid bye to each other nd went.

Geet moved to go but felt a tug on her shoulder ,, she turn nd her eyes widened ,, aap !! Uncle Maan ,,, mommy see uncle Maan ,, manu jumpped on Maan spreading his arms ,, Maan held him at once nd pecked his cheeks , manu too gave a return peck on Maan's cheek nd said,, Thanku .

Maan: thanku for what baby ?

Manu: fol gifts ,, I love them .

Maan: thanku my baby u like those ., but whar r u dong here ?

Manu: we came to dop Plem uncle .

Geet: wo my friend Prem , Heer nd her family is going to India so we come to drp them .

Manu: uncle Maan we'll also go in malliage .

S*** ,, Geet smacked her head inwardly ,, BBC ne bak diya .

Maan: really ,, when ? Geet is it true u r coming ?

Geet smiled sheepishly but manu chirped .

Manu: yeah ,, nd i'll sit on holse with uncle Plem.

Maan nd Geet smiled at his excitement who was jumping in Maan's arm .

Maan: Geet u didn't tell me that u r coming India .

Geet remained quiet nd tried to change d topic .

Geet: thanks a lot for d gifts ,, eski koi jaroorat nahi thi ,, mere pass jo hai aap sabka diya hua hi hei ,, waise aap yahan ,, aap bhi essi flight se ja rahe hein?

Maan: yes ,, nd thank god jane se pahale mai tum dono se mil liya ,, Geet don't lie nd tell me when u r coming ,, won't u come to meet dad nd mom?

Geet : i'll , don't worry ,, now go , u r getting late for check in .

She took manu in her arms nd told him to say bye his uncle ,, manu wave his small hand nd mouthed bye ,, Maan took his hand nd kissed that nd then his cheek saying ..Bye baby ,, Geet too wished him happy journey nd bye ,, Maan steped back with heavy heart nd manu tore him more saying ,, miss u uncle ,,, aawww ,, Maan came forward swiftly nd hugged him ,, kissed his cheec nd forehead nd then he kissed Geet's forehead too in a flow nd said ,, I'll miss u too sunny nd i'll call u ,, OK .. take care Geet .

He turned nd moved hurridly towards checking counters leaving a shock Geet behind ,,,what was that ? He pecked her forehead ? she was looking at that direction where Maan went even Manu too .

She came in sense when manu touched her cheek to get her attention .. Mommy .

Geet : yes baby .

Manu: mommy ,, all al going when we go ?

Geet: soon baby ,, let's go home .

Manu: we'll go in aeloplane ?

Geet : yes baby.

She came out from d lobby having manu in her arms ,,, took her car from parking ,, settled manu nd went with a confused mind , Maan's changed behaviour was a puzzle for her ,, what's wrong with him ? Why after so many yrs he was nice nd caring to her ? What happened behind her which changed him like this?

She was thinking about this unexpected behaviour of Maan nd manu slept in his seat missing all ,, she enterd in her house ,, settled sleeping manu in his cot nd sleep for few hrs ,, she was on leave nd informed manu's crche too last day.

That day she finished some of her nd U&A sam's work ,, shopped for her kitchen ,, spent time with manu nd sleep on time at night ,, both have to go in d mrng.


Precap - Maan got something nd missed manu ...

Part - 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4168408/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-2-updated-pt-20-pg-139-21st-oct?pn=81



😃 Now i'll update it daily...




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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Barbie doll tu sone ki😃
How r u

cold better hui?
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Barbie doll tu sone ki😃

How r u

cold better hui?


😆😆 thanks ...
today i'm fine,, meds li na ,, aur skull se aaker soi..😃

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