MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD-2~ UPDATED pt 20 / Pg 139 / 21st Oct........ - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago
She created her own world in between them, she rightly understood their behavior and kept to herself.
And like YR wanted she made them proud and happy.

Can understand Maan and Annie's attitude.
But Dadimaa, that was unexpected one.

Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..Geet had a painful past..Wants to know more ..
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😃 updating ..TM..


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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where is maans mom now...y he didnt call her
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my dear friends 🤗

Updating
Thanku so much all of u




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(F banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 14




Part - 15




Geet got as her usual time with d buzz of her alarm ,,checked Manu nd secured him in bed ,, went to freshen up nd took bath then took out dresses for her nd Manu nd hung them on stand ,, went to kitchen , prepared her coffee nd manu's milk , sipped her coffee as well as prepared BF for both ,, while preparing BF her thoughts went to Maan who was with them last morng nd she cooked his fav ,, she sighed nd shrugged her mind ,, secured d kitchen , took manu's milk nd went to wake him ,, who needed too much pampering at this time ,, after many attempt he wake up nd she gave him feeding bottle nd he starting sucking his milk ,, Geet arranged d room nd set d washroom for his bath .

After an hr both wr ready to go , she for office nd manu to his creche ,, d crche was near her office nd her Company provided this facility to its employee ,, they met U&A sam bid them bye nd went .

There Maan wake up late with knock of housekeeping staff , Maan lazily got up nd sent him back ,, check d time ordered a coffee in pentry nd went to freshen up ,, took his coffee watching out from window remembering his last mrng ,, how beautifully manu wake him nd had Coffee with Geet ,, he urged to meet them again but then remembered how manu was sad nd he himself was sad when came back ,, NO O ,, I cn't make him cry again nd I've to make me satisfied with this small amount of happiness ,, Maan checked t time nd thought that Geet wd be in her office this time ,,, he opened his bag nd started to pack d things he bought for d family nd then something struck his mind .

Maan: Oh' S*** ,, Geet had paid for all these things , she didn't take my card , now how i'll pay her back ,, all d things wr costly nd he felt bad that he didn't give her nd manu anything ,, he sat on d bed nd started thinking ,, he knew that Geet didn't take money if he tried to return or won't take anything if he gave her directly so he thought to go diff way ,, he got ready , took his BF , took a cab nd went to that Mall from where they shopped last day ,, he went to that counter where Geet was watching d wrist watch ,, that was beautiful nd he bought that nd then many toys for manu even diff cars too ,, he came out took d cab again nd went .

After a long travel he was at Geet house nd knocked at U&A sam's door ,, U sam opened d door nd welcome Maan ,, Maan wished him nd handed him d big bags .

Maan: U sam these r some gifts for manu , Geet nd he is not at home so plzz handed them when they come at eve .

U sam: u cn wait here for them Mr Khurana .

Maan: sorry U sam i've to go , i've my flight so need to finish some work befor that .

U sam: OK , i'll give them , have something .

Maan: no thenks U sam nd plzz take care of Geet nd Manu .

U sam: don't worry Mr Khurana ,, they r like our child . thanks for ur visit .

Maan: thanks to u U sam , goodbye nd take care .

U sam: Goodbye mr Khurana , nice to see u nd plzz come again .

Maan: yeah sure , bye.

Maan moved back in d same cab at once with heavy heart watching Manu nd Geet pics in his phone,, he crave to see them but made his heart stone ,, his day passed talking to his partener company if they need any visit of his nd few more,, In d afternoon he was in d hotel then spent time on net checking his mails which he didn't check last day nd replied them ,, he took his dinner nd packed his bags ,, his flight was early in d morning so set his alarm nd sleep early ,, he so much wanted to see manu's face when he saw his gifts ,, but that was not possible now .

Geet nd manu came back home in d eve ,, both freshen up nd changed ,, she made coffee for her nd fresh juice for her kiddu then made dinner nd Manu recited his rhyms nd countings sitting on chair near Geet ,, she packed for U&A sam nd both went to give them ,, Geet handed them dinner nd asked about their day , they spent few min with U&A sam nd then moved back ,, U sam recalled that Mr Khurana gave packets for her nd manu ,, he stopped her nd handed her d shopping bags nd told her that Mr khuran came nd gave this to manu .


Geet was shocked nd looking at d bags ,, she asked when he came nd went ,, U sam told her ,, manu was super happy getting gifts from his uncle Maan .

Manu: mommy ,, gifts fol me .

Geet : yeah baby .

Manu: wow!! Mommy so many gifts ,, uncle Maan bought these fol me.

Geet: yeah baby .

Geet thanked U sam took last nyt's tray nd came back in her home ,, manu was coming behind having a soft toy in his hand ,, both entered in living hall nd she kept d bags on d sofa nd went to kitchen ,, she was very surprised why he rought these gifts for them nd went without meeting them .

manu emptied d bags nd started checking all d things which Maan gave him,, he was very excited nd showing Geet everything then manu showed her a box wrapped in a bful gift paper .

Manu: mommy ,, open it .

Geet : OK ,, she opened that nd that was d same watch which she saw in d mall ,, she was looking at that with open mouth ... God!! He noticed that .

Manu: mommy watch , fol u .

Geet: yeah baby , how is it?

Manu: butiful , uncle don't give me watch .

Geet: baby u r small na so he bought toys for u .

Manu: I want a watch too .

Geet: Ok,, we'll bought for u , fine.

Manu: no ,, I ask uncle Maan nd I , I want like his ,, big watch.

Geet: no baby ,, he gave u many toys so don't ask more , nd now he is going back so he cn't come here ,, Oh yeah ,, manu baby ur uncle Prem nd Heer aunty r going to India TM ,, have ur diner baby nd sleep , don't u go to see off them ?

Manu: india ?

Geet: yes baby ,, their home ,, for marriage .

Manu: malliage .

Geet: hum, come , have diner nd sleep for some time ,, then we'll go to drop them , OK.

Manu: OK .



Precap - departure ...


Part - 16

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sorry for mistakes...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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hai babbie
Meine mist par jo abhi reply ki padho
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Main bhi desh bhar ki mushkilon ke saath. Net aur charging ki lowest level ke sahare
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Originally posted by: priya111111

Main bhi desh bhar ki mushkilon ke saath. Net aur charging ki lowest level ke sahare


Aur babbie ne:-)hamein ab tak nahi:-)dejha
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


Aur babbie ne:-)hamein ab tak nahi:-)dejha



wo tho laal hogayi hai

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