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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

itna khaduspan bhi acha nahi hota yaar maan thoda pyar se baat kar leta to kya jata janab ka sadu kahika nice update kalpana

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anky_s

@anky_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Lovely update. Very much entertaining, thoroughly enjoyed it. Geet landed up into Khurana Mansion, awesome. After all she wants Maan Singh Khurana to train her...koi mazak thodi hai...MSK ke ghr toh jana padega na...lol. Fees bhi degi madam, good going.
Poor Annie not understanding one bit of entire convo.
Dev knew which button to press.
He managed to trick Maan on the pretext of challenge.
Now , Maan is going to be Geet's trainer...seems interesting.
The story very much familiar to an old Dharmender-Hema Malini starer Raja Jani...I loved that movie a lot..and I'm lovin this as well.

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: chavvi16
this time main khushi one
and this on the variance
whatever that means

Ok!

Arre! Insaan ghar ke andar nahi aayega toh kya darwaaza pe khada rahega
loved this line man
so true what she said

I was laughing while writing it as I could imagine Geet saying it!😆

hawww bechari ko rone bhi naa dein
bade aaye train karne waale
khud bhi trianing ki zaroorat hai inhe

😆

beta maan this is not good for you
trust me you will regret saying what you said about her
okay i know he was being truthful
but really has he no heart man
bechari bachi ko kitna kuch sunaya

I know!

hope she gives it back to him too

Oh she will! You just wait and watch!

that will make me so happy
but not now dheere dheere
so he knows never to mess with girls
sochte kya hain yeh ladki hai toh kuch bhi keh denge
geet puttar tennu bhool pana asaan naa se

Waah! Kya remix hai! Tennu is punjabi and the ending se in marwadi! You fused two different languages dear! Awesome!👏😉

of course he will remember you
although true he did meet many peeps there in the party but why do i feel as if geet is the only one he would be able to recall from the party
i hope thats true

Of course! Who can forget Geet?😕

hmm but then no one else came to him to train her
does he know what he is doing

😆

well maybe in training
but rest i think he is clueless about

Obviously!😉

maan dev this bet you guys might win
but to be fair geet will be the real winner

Well said!

wait and watch

Thanks for commenting dear! Enjoyed reading it!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: fict
Loved the update. Geet is so naive that she directly came to Maan's house to get training😆 Poor Annie, doesn't know what to do with Maan. Maaneet talks were entertaining.😆 looking forward to many more interesting scenes like these.

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet
whoaaa sooo maan is gonna make geet a princess.. fab kalpana.. cont soon hun

Thank you!😳

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: love2_soma
toh man n geet agaye dono dono k zindagi mein...abb dekhte hai fate kya khel khelta hai inn dono k saath...

awesome n wonderful n really funny update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Glad you enjoyed the update dear!

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Part 2:

wasnt maan lil rude to the girl and the girl being geet, he should have behaved better😳😆

lovely part...ofcourse the jhalli waitress is geet...who else 😃 enjooyed the convo between maan n dev...

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: flowing_river
OMG...maan and dev at dining room were like so useless to annie...
business and fake show has made maan feeling less...haughty rude...
i just loved geet's dialogues ...🤣
big hug 🤗 to you for such biggg update...

Thank you for the hug!😳 A hug 🤗 for you too for being such a sweet reader!

I am so happy that you liked my update!

Hope my future updates continues to make you happy!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: priya111111
oh god poor geet seedha ghar tak pahunchgayi apni makeover keliye😆😆aur dekho maan kitna rudely behave kiya par dev kitna cooly geet se baath kiya. arey waah dev ne tho maan ko itna uksaya ki ab maan geet ko badalne ki taan liya aur bet jeethne ka bhi kaha. in sab mein ab poor geet kya hoga.
sab se jyaada geet ki baatein ek dum mast lagi 😆😆

Main bahut khush hoon ki aapko Geet ki baatein pasand aayi!

bahut dil lagaake use likha tha! So happy that you liked it!

Thanks for commenting Di!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: idunno
bahot hi maja aa gaya kya likhti ho!👏 dialougs are hilarious, and story we know already but still different than MFL, love this story and try to update soon.

Thank you!😳😃

Glad you liked my Maaneet version of My Fair Lady! Hope I can maintain the humor quotient in the story!