(MG)MINI SS: Irresistibly Yours! Part-5/Page-39 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dqno1

Amazing start

A couple at the crossroads of life

very realistically portrayed

I would love to read more



Thank you dear...
Hope you will like it further more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: flowing_river

Today's busy and ambitious life is d reason. .
Hubby wife doesn't havw time for each other...
Nice plot..


Yes...it is a reason...
But they need to find a middle ground...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome .. Geet is hurt.. & so maan.. but m not understanding y Geet is thinking like that? is something happened?

even i wanted mushy mushy nights of maneet 😉

waiting for next update


Yep...both angry at eachother now...
Mushi mushi nights surly will come later... ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

superb starting...👍🏼...brilliantly written...👏👏👏...Maaneet personal problems......Maan angry at Geet...😡😡...Geet hurt by Maan...😔...can't wait 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...


Thank you dear...glad to know u enjoyed the part
Will try to update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




until I know the reason why Geet is feeling like this I will say Geet is wrong...

she can discuss this later...he came back same day after a weeks tour to his wife for her love...he took her out for dinner...may be for Geet watching movie together is spending time together but may be for Maan dinner outside is good way to spend time together...and yaar sach mein aajkal ki baseless movies ke liye wife jhagda karein is very foolish...

waiting for next part to know Geet's thoughts...

thanx for pm...



Oh reason will be explained in the next chap...
Yes...the difference is opinion n looking at things put ppl in wrong situations...
Haha...yup...no more romantic movies :((
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Anny90

this is one of the tough topic to write...

there are many elements in a relationship and one is not enough to sustain any relation..
waiting for next update...please try to update asap..😊


Yes it is...now am realizing..
True to the second line...but this story has an altogether different kind of moral...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

very realistic portrayal of husband and wife relation...each other's point of view...!! hope it won't get more sore...!! waiting...


Thank you dear...
I m trying to keep things fictional yet real...
No...dont wore...willnt ket that turn soreee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats on the new SS! Superb interesting update! Maan n Geet r married! Geet asks him a question! Maan answers bt Geet hurt by his answer! Maan takes everything in the wrong context! Geet in tears! Geet wants 2 spend tym with him! n do things n go out with him! Maan angry! update soon! Well written


Yes...geet is hurt by his reply...
But he was just tooo...edgy...
Geet pull things at a very wrong time...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: saharmursleen

i have also tha same problem which is faced by geet in this ff... plz can anybody tell... the sex is only way through which boys show there love... pata nae q mujhy yeh sirf physical relation lagta hai... y they dont have time to talk with uss spend time with us y they only want to have a sex


Hey dear...
Each one have their own opinion...
Some ppl are nt too expressive to say this in words n show in action...
While some lack in actions but repeatedly assure it in words...
All we need is to understand the other person POV
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: -indu-





Lovely opening...

Geet in dilemma and maan not understanding her... But I think geet's timing is wrong... May she should have waited for a day or two... He just came from a trip and geet came up with the topic...



Do continue soon...


Yup
Lets see how they will solve it out...
It was defo a wrong time...but thats what we do at times...
Not caring about the correct moment, we just go on with things in our minds

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