(MG)MINI SS: Irresistibly Yours! Part-5/Page-39

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Lovely opening...

Geet in dilemma and maan not understanding her... But I think geet's timing is wrong... May she should have waited for a day or two... He just came from a trip and geet came up with the topic...

Do continue soon...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Interesting concept !

Very realistic .. looking forward

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Anny90

@Anny90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

this is one of the tough topic to write...

there are many elements in a relationship and one is not enough to sustain any relation..

waiting for next update...please try to update asap..😊

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

very realistic portrayal of husband and wife relation...each other's point of view...!! hope it won't get more sore...!! waiting...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats on the new SS! Superb interesting update! Maan n Geet r married! Geet asks him a question! Maan answers bt Geet hurt by his answer! Maan takes everything in the wrong context! Geet in tears! Geet wants 2 spend tym with him! n do things n go out with him! Maan angry! update soon! Well written

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swpna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Nice story..loved it.
Thanks for the pm..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

WOW!! awesome start...continue soon...😃

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

until I know the reason why Geet is feeling like this I will say Geet is wrong...

she can discuss this later...he came back same day after a weeks tour to his wife for her love...he took her out for dinner...may be for Geet watching movie together is spending time together but may be for Maan dinner outside is good way to spend time together...and yaar sach mein aajkal ki baseless movies ke liye wife jhagda karein is very foolish...

waiting for next part to know Geet's thoughts...

thanx for pm...

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: hermoso
Sorry , sumthing went wrong in earlier post reply . promising start ana and i feel every couple have this phase where realation becum monotonous amd stagnated . Would love to read how stagnated relation get fresh air . Looking forward to read . Can u plz update " the deadly husband" too

No problem dear...

Yes, its a natural phase...but i will try not to deal it in a serious way as thats the reason we get away from reality n read fictions for a bit ;)

Yes, tdh is coming up next in 2 days

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -Mitu-
I will post a detailed comment tomorrow
But I read somethong very toucy and fresh and my fav theme
After so many day ... I still read just outline ... and have to read it completely
And seriously I stated to wait for next part

Mitu

Thank you dear,...

Glad to know you found it a fresh starting...

Will try to keep it as fresh as i can...