In The Eyes Of The Beholder~2~ Chapter 13, Pg 73, June 4, 2016

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Teju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Now this abhinav inspector is making me suspicious.. n with whom he was talking good or bad (villain) ?? story me twist.. 😲 Gosh Geet is too much.. Some what Maan too got some doubt abt Abhinav.. Chalo bande ka dimag chalata hain tez.. 😆 Geet told something abt her dad n her mments.. seems like she was ladli of her dad.. Yup.. My dad too used to tell me story while travelling on bicycle otherwise I used to sleep.. n waise koi fayada nahi tha story sunate sunate bhi so jati thi.. 😆 toh he used to ask me q'ns in btwn.. to get to know I am awake.. 😛

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

WOW!! it was brilliant...loving it...😃

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

bike... hmm such passion and deep connection ..

i own a bike too.. hahah 😆 river rider *bicycle though**😆

I love my bike.. and the passion of her father and hers.. resemble mine.. 😊

im glad to be a part of your memories...and story..

cant say how i am feeling right now..in the midst of all my robo colleagues around and manipulative emotions.. this one erupts unusually and unplanned event which took me off guard!!

"I don't want to repeat my innocence. I want the pleasure of losing it again."

"There are moments when I wish I could roll back the clock and take all the sadness away, but I have the feeling that if I did, the joy would be gone as well."

"Memory is the diary we all carry about with us."

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
bike... hmm such passion and deep connection ..
i own a bike too.. hahah 😆 river rider *bicycle though**😆

I love my bike.. and the passion of her father and hers.. resemble mine.. 😊

im glad to be a part of your memories...and story..

cant say how i am feeling right now..in the midst of all my robo colleagues around and manipulative emotions.. this one erupts unusually and unplanned event which took me off guard!!

"I don't want to repeat my innocence. I want the pleasure of losing it again."

"There are moments when I wish I could roll back the clock and take all the sadness away, but I have the feeling that if I did, the joy would be gone as well."

"Memory is the diary we all carry about with us."

I guess we all have some story connected to bikes and our father. I am so glad we did not own a car at that time, coz this is one of my favorite memory with my Baba.

The bike rides and the stories are what connect the child in me to him😊

Being connected to a small part of the innocent you, right when you are feeling disconnected from the world is what I would a serendipity😃

Couldn't agree more about turning the clock back. I like the me I am right now. The good and the not so good. It is the sum total of the joys and sorrows that has made me what I am today and taking anything away is surrendering a part of me that makes me...me.😊

Always love the perfection of the quotes yo post Kittu.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

part 12 - liked the way how your father narrated each story with diff names ..you got in your blood...you have that in your stories that hooks reader to it..

coming to the story...geet has so much endured in her past but still amazing that geet is so much funfull...loved maan taking care when he was mad at her

maan reminded of his extra-hygine-concious bro after meeting AS...

what mission AS has ...what he was hiding from maan about his bro..

cont soon

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Ohk Sameer Khurana plus Geet's father's mystery started.

awesome update.

will be waiting for more.

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bina_a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

oh... I thought geet was just crazy of the bike, but she has some memories! Hmm... Memories also stay with you even if we don't want to remember a few of them. I always love reading this story as it always makes me laugh but this time it reminded me of some memories. Loved it Nisha :-)

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Sometimes visuals can be deceiving, and that is what happening with each update.

There is more in to each character than they are showed.

How can a father leave his child abandoned, when he means a everything to the child.

AS is here with a mission.

Nice chapter.

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Deelight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Gosh... d banner its sooo goood... awesome

lovely update.. muaaah...
cant get this story out of my head!

n tat was really sweet of ur dad !!

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Susegad

I guess we all have some story connected to bikes and our father. I am so glad we did not own a car at that time, coz this is one of my favorite memory with my Baba.
The bike rides and the stories are what connect the child in me to him😊
Being connected to a small part of the innocent you, right when you are feeling disconnected from the world is what I would a serendipity😃

Couldn't agree more about turning the clock back. I like the me I am right now. The good and the not so good. It is the sum total of the joys and sorrows that has made me what I am today and taking anything away is surrendering a part of me that makes me...me.😊

Always love the perfection of the quotes yo post Kittu.
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yes yeshhh ... my father.. my overprotective father never allowed me to go alone.. he used to tag along.. and after few days.. (*may be 3 or 4)😆 i told mom that dad is staring at other aunties.. thats it!!!😆 🤣 u can imagine the rest of the scene unfolding in front of your eyes😆

though my mum never believed that (*she trusts my dad more than herself) ...she took the cue that i dont like it.. and never ever she made an attempt to clear the fog.

even now.. even after dropping me,he wont leave...my dad just stands there until and unless i board my office bus!!😆 i feel good about it.. he is like a brother..younger bro.. who wrestles iwth us.. and pouts when we dont share our chocolates.. who fights with mom just becoz she gave me one twix bar extra 😆

he befrnds all my frnds.. splly all my gal frnds(*well only few galfrnds..hardly .. i have too many boyfrnds)😆 .. and puts up a show as caring and jolly guy..

that show..sarbhai vs sarabhai.. Indravadan jaisa 😆 my mom is sort of maya.. not soo much sophisticated.. but yet she is classy!!

and myself 🤣 Monishaaa 🤣 no not that im too clumsy.. but tooo lazy to do anything around.. 🤣

ohh we dont own a car even now.. so no probs!! 😃 and i love my dad's old scooter.. bajaj.. where i used to sit infront , that lil tiny seat awww 😳and feel like princess 😆😆

my my ... i reviving all my memories.. not that i dont remember anymore..its just never expressed freely!! 😊

you know i love calvin more than any cartoon char.. cause he posses such innocence and too much of stupidity .. one moment i wanna whack him cause he is troubling his sweet darling mother.. and other moment his love for hobbes and not manipulative enough to convince others..

huh!!

that innocence is no more.. billions of ppl are loosing innocence.. its not hobby or an emotion.. its one sort of a trait.. and i hardly find ppl innocent now.. 😡.. its soo frustrating..

Mayyo is one among them who is stuffed with loads of innocence 😊

@bold second you again 😉

Ohh my .. thanks for the compliment nisha ji 🤗 🤗

Never intentional... but those quotes sync well enough at times 😳 not all the time according to avi 😆

Edited by KittuPratzz - 10 years ago