Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED - Page 5

Nice. Super. Awesome. Mind Blowing. Wonderful aanddd Januable Chapter Aviii [8->]
Loved it [:D]
How innocently he asked shud I talk to adi? Daanto usey [LOL] n One Punch to Adi Sir only bcs Geet called him Sweet [LOL]
Arre yeh kia Sir bolke ghalti ki phir bhi punishment se bach gai [:$]
Glad to see Old BCC Chalu Maan is back [;)]
All the Pics were totally Januable, Unbardashtable Cute n Lovely [:$]
Kurbaan Hua ka magic phir se chaa gya Avii Waah tussi great ho [:D] [:$]
Dono taraf aagai Jo hai lagi. Dono hue Jealous [:$]
Hahaha Gorilla n Chipkali yeh Maan mile thy [LOL]
Really really loved ur version of Kurbaan hua or Khuda Jaane [8->] it was Simply Beautiful [L]
Hahaha loved the way Chalu Maan blackmailed Adi about pinky [LOL]

Regarding ur note.. I would say please do not take any rash decision, Bcs of some ppl Do not cut or edit any scene [8(]
Its a request Aage aapki marzi [|)]
I will support u always but kabhi Katti bhi ho skti hoon [LOL] [LOL]

Continue Soon [>:D<]

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Nisha mera original plan wo tha hi nahi

you know I work from an outline

scenes are also decided ahead of time so that the flow does not break

now I see I was wrong in this outline

MG cannot be separate for readers, even the ML is hard to digest

My effort to show that she falls in love again blah blah blah makes no effect on readers

I have not shown him to be cruel or harsh and yet just the fear that he will be, is not letting anyone enjoy the story, so why to write it this way?

It is better to give readers what they want...

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Readers se yaad aaya hum bhi tou Tere hi readers hain 😲
Hamari wish bhi poori honi chahye that's do not cut or shortened the story 😛 😲 😡

Wonderful update. Loved it
Geet and maan become couples... I like the bonding between adi and maan. Maan is calling armaan as gorilla. The poem was beautiful and their dance was just mind blowing . That chipku sameera is acting as maan's girl friend. Geet is very jealous seeing maan with that chipkali. The VM is very lovely. Waiting for the next part. Precap is interesting. Thanks for the PM .

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Aaarghhh 😡 😡 😡

Originally posted by: dqno1

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abhi kuch cut bhi nahi kiya aur red face already?

Want to write it my way but if everyone is just scared, all the time, iska kya, uska kya toh mere haath hi nahi chalte to type, sacchi

I had planned a romance more than Locket.. was sure it would make everyone love this Maan and Geet more but mera confidence toot gaya hai.

Yaar Ab main apne confidence ke liye ka kahoon 😲
Kuch tou log kahengy.. Logon ka kaam hai kehna
Anyways yeh red faces was not for u.. Its for me 😳
Kitni der se comment kar ne ki koshish pe koshish karing but yeh net 😡

Congress on new thread
nice update maaneet going to pary
both are jealous and they danced
In next geet came to km waiting for next

Wow Part 😊 totally adorable yet sensually magical... Pehle I was in love with past but now I'm loving the present.. I don't know whether its Happy-LoveyDovey maan or your Writing that both Past and present becomes enjoyable

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nisha mera original plan wo tha hi nahi

you know I work from an outline

scenes are also decided ahead of time so that the flow does not break

now I see I was wrong in this outline

MG cannot be separate for readers, even the ML is hard to digest

My effort to show that she falls in love again blah blah blah makes no effect on readers

I have not shown him to be cruel or harsh and yet just the fear that he will be, is not letting anyone enjoy the story, so why to write it this way?

It is better to give readers what they want...

Congrats on new thread...

Superb update...kissy se start and blushing pe finish... 😉 😉
Maan face on hearing about white saree...dance and song so sensuous and awesome...
Maans ..muscleman, gorilla n touchy feely..geets chipkali comments were so funny... 😆
Maan n adi convo also great ..

no no don't cut short the story...we don't want pammi...we want nice updates like this with ma'am geet adi pinky romeo muscleman 😉

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Susegad

<div>Sometimes readers just don't know what to say and create storms in a teacup.😛

You stay your course Avi. If you cut it short, I promise you at the end of it, you will be the one who regrets it the most. Coz you are the one who knows what the story could have been like.

Anyway, why is this a poll story based on readers emotional barometer.

You write it just like you planned, and I promise each and everyone is going to love it.

This Maan just does not have the ability for cruelty. It comes across clearly in the way you have written his character.

As for the ML, always love the track.The journey of see ingthe brain and heart guide you back to the same person who is in you sub-conscious is amazing.

I hope you will let the story metamorphise completey.

Nobody likes the caterpillar stage, but we have to go through it, to see the butterfly.

To some perhaps, some parts of the story are like the caterpillar stage. But everybody is waiting to see the potential butterfly

And the process of the transformation cannot be rushed, or the butterfly will be ruined.

I hope you will not cut the story short and kill its' essence.

So please explore and let us explore along with you, the full potential of this story.

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Sahi Kaha Nisha Ji.. I'm with u 😆 😃