Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Congratulations Avi!!!🥳

The banner is just wow!!

The colors, the whole feel is just superb,

Awesome job Laxmi👏

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Adi ka bhompu bajnewala hain.😆

Geet is provoking him with those 'Sir's'

Haaye par aisa punishment ho toh...😉

Mujhe gaana yaad aa gaya

Geet ke liye perfect hai

Aaj hamne dil ka har

Kissa tamam kar diya

Khud bhi pagal ho gaye

Tumko bhi pagal kar diya

Sir sir oh sir I love you

😆

I love this possessive Maan. His every action makes my heart squeeze with a 'Uff Tauba"😳

Par Geet bhi koi kaam nahi.

She is as equally begrudging to share Maan's attentions with anybody else😉

Coming to Sameera Sharma and Dr. Armaan.

I loved how you brought in the jealousy angle, but through it they ended up claiming each other.😳

The dance...the song... the pics and their actions...I am dead.

Naach woh dono rahe the dhadkane meri tez ho rahi thi😳

I was cracking up at Adi and Maan's leg pulling.

I very much liked the ease that you have shown in their relationship.

But you know what I realized, the way Maan is teasing Geet, or Adi, or laughing it is as if he finding himself because of her.

I find it amazing that it is Geet who has lost her memories, but it is Maan who is finding his lost self again.

The best line from yesterday's update:

The romance novels on my nightstand lie untouched. My hero has stepped out from them.

I absolutely loved the two things from this chapter.

The first was Maan's thought process

In an odd way, her possessiveness soothes me. I feel needed. I feel loved. My actions have an effect on her.

The second was Geet's

The romance novels on my nightstand lie untouched. My hero has stepped out from them.

Thanks Avi for giving us such a wonderful couple.

🤗

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awesome update...my lappy is not working properly...it has suddenly become slow after formatting...😕...look like I have to ask for help from an expert...plz bear with me if I ever commented late in ur next updates...

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
awesome update...my lappy is not working properly...it has suddenly become slow after formatting...😕...look like I have to ask for help from an expert...plz bear with me if I ever commented late in ur next updates...

NP Sanghita😃 I will try to remember but if I forget you can PM me.

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

NOTE: Since all that most readers keep asking about after every update is Pammi and ML to be revealed to Maan soon, I will be cutting short some of the chapters so that we can come to it quickly.

Story will end sooner too but hey it is your choice. Padhna toh aap sab ko hai. Waise bhi mujhe apni story padhna accha nahi lagta, lol.

AVI KHABARDAR JO STORY KO SHORT KIYA

I DONT WANT TO READ ABOUT PAMMI THE DRUGGIE

I WANT MORE OF BONE MELTING ROMANCE AND HEART THUDDING LOVE BETWEEN THEM

SOME JOY AND LAUGHTER WITH ADI AND PINKI

SOME GREEN EYED MONSTER IN THE SHAPE OF ARMAAN SAMEERA MEERA PARI

THODA DILI DARSHAN ALA MUMBAI DARSHAN

BY THE WAY CONGRATS FOR A NEW THREAD

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Super like 👍🏼

super duper bumper update

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Good Night ,Avi ...LOL

sweet dreams..

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: punam2712
NOTE: Since all that most readers keep asking about after every update is Pammi and ML to be revealed to Maan soon, I will be cutting short some of the chapters so that we can come to it quickly.
Story will end sooner too but hey it is your choice. Padhna toh aap sab ko hai. Waise bhi mujhe apni story padhna accha nahi lagta, lol.

AVI KHABARDAR JO STORY KO SHORT KIYA
I DONT WANT TO READ ABOUT PAMMI THE DRUGGIE
I WANT MORE OF BONE MELTING ROMANCE AND HEART THUDDING LOVE BETWEEN THEM
SOME JOY AND LAUGHTER WITH ADI AND PINKI
SOME GREEN EYED MONSTER IN THE SHAPE OF ARMAAN SAMEERA MEERA PARI
THODA DILI DARSHAN ALA MUMBAI DARSHAN
BY THE WAY CONGRATS FOR A NEW THREAD

Yeh kya note hain Avi, maine nahi dekha. I just saw it coz Punam quoted it😲

I agree with Punam's comment.

Yaar don't do this na Avi

There is so much potential to this story. I want to see that, not the ruined potential of it.

Cutting it short will not do justice to it.

So please, please continue it at your pace.

We want to read what and how you write, not what others want to, or don't want to see in it🤢

Humari acchi Avi.Maan jaogi na?

🤗

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

dont cut the story

it is going on good notes

with little suspense I am really liking it

and we know Pammi will be exposed at end so nothing to worry

you are a great writer

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yeh kya note hain Avi, maine nahi dekha. I just saw it coz Punam quoted it😲

I agree with Punam's comment.

Yaar don't do this na Avi

There is so much potential to this story. I want to see that, not the ruined potential of it.

Cutting it short will not do justice to it.

So please, please continue it at your pace.

We want to read what and how you write, not what others want to, or don't want to see in it🤢

Humari acchi Avi.Maan jaogi na?

🤗