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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally , Khushi accepted her lover for Arnav and she confessed her love with so much of drama. She kissed him first, in front of the whole office, because confess her love.
Now Annie should learn not to disturb the love birds , she's just being a pain.
The car scene was really beautiful, the way Arnav showed his longing Khushi confess her feelings. Beautiful..
So looks like news had flew to both family. Eager for family encounter...

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally...arnavs over the moon...fab update...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

and am here finally
omg a lot is gonna happen
seems finally arhi can be together
and something about kiss but this one all know about
public kiss ufff they are gonna get it from their siblings wont they


Yup!😆

oh i dont know aru she might be quite because she is coming down with something
this something you have been bitten by too
its called love disease
very deadly if you get it
no really it is my dear man


Sardi Khaasi Na Malaria Hua
Yeh Gayi Arnav Isko Love Love Love Loveria Hua😆

its what he said last night thats why she is so quite right
what else can it be
nothing else happened in night is there
you never know though


Especially with me as the writer!😆😉

hmmm so back to routine or is it
khushi nervous
dont go together right aru
glad to know he knows her so well
he should do right
he loves her after all and its true love
you are supposed to know those whom you love
maybe not all the time
but most of the time
i swear am talking rubbish now sorry


Errr... Not rubbish, just off the track!😉

back to this
hmm not her veerji or you would have heard about it
could be this man called ASR affect finally
okay something did happen last night
should have known night doesnt always end in kappa fics
not with more dhamaka


🤣 Thank you for giving me so much credit!😆😳

so guess rajji and geet said something
no wonder she is in a trance
did they say something along the lines of you love aru
or beginning to love the man


Yup!😆

awww they helped geet out in dressing and undressing
shame though in a way
maan didnt get to do either
okay being naughty and gutter minded but cant help it


Oye! Gutter ki duniya se baahar nikal! Warna main sharam ke maare laal ho jaaungi!😳😆

well maybe when they get married then
he might not be able to dress her up
but can surely help with undressing


Hey Babaji! Tu toh jyaada hi kuch besharam hogayi hai chori!😆

kyun hai naa maan
yeh sunn ke maan ke mann mein laddoo phootenge naa
of course he would be excited about that
but lets not go there yet


Thank you!😳

ahhh rajji she is gonna look beautiful on her engagement day
but even more so on wedding day
they saw brides glow
lets see if that will be true for geet and khushi or not
bet it will be
after all they will be marrying their love and soul mate naa
and am going off track here sorry


Chalega! I enjoy when you ramble!😉

well agar rajji ke liye aaye toh theek hai
parr khushi ke liye aaye toh musibat hogi
well unless of course its aru himself
phele toh aru unko chodenge nahin jo unki khushi ko unse dur karega
aur phir maan bhi toh hain
am sure he will be one hell of a possessive brother too
hai naa am sure he would be


Oh yes! He will definitely be one possessive brother!😆

geet dont you think rajji is too small for all that
but khushi aint
inhe kya hua
do you even have to ask that dear
inhe aru hua ya naa hua
bol de chorri
apni bhabhi ko bol de jo hulchul dil mein chal rahi hai
she can help my dear
after all she went through such things too
well at least her case wasnt complicated
how come arhi case is usually more complicated than that of maneet


Hey! Never realised that till you pointed it out! I seem to be hell bent on making AK's life more complicated than MG's in every story! Albeit subconsciously but still I am doing it! Maybe it is because AK have more flaws and more irrational compared to MG! Thats what I felt in the show. K seems foolish and silly compared to G and A seems very impulsive and selfish fellow compared to M and hence, they have more problems compared to MG! True, right? G acts silly many times but not as dumb as K and Aru is way too selfish and self centered compared to M. Thats what I felt while watching the show!

rajji is bang on right
she is in love
but wont accept
not long before she does
ahh she is shocked well we arent
you are in love but dont know it yet
well starting to fall at least
serious toh hai geet
loveria is always serious my dear
rajji its best you dont know yet
you are bit young for all this
focus on your studies
and your dau will come too


😆

then geet wont have to shoo you away dear
bhabhi se kaise chupati
she will tell you dear
awww she is confused
thank bababji for geet
or else she would remain confused


I know!

well maan wouldnt be that much of help naa
after all he is still a man
not that he wouldnt know what it is troubling his gudiya
but still some things a woman can explain better naa
not that much to worry about
but with khushi being this way so of course geet is panicking
and she finally says it
lots of finally moments so apt you named it dear
geet you know her better now surely
she freaks out for such little things
but for her it isnt little naa
pyaar ho raha hai and that too with a man she kept denying she loves
so of course she is confused.com
chalo khul ke sab bataya apni bhabhi ko
now she can help her out
that wasnt just hatred
that was also jealousy the green eyed monster dear
bites those in love too
and can be dangerous


😆 Waah! Jealousy ki kya description hai! You sure you dont want to try your hand at writing stories?😉

as she found out
wow she didnt realise what she is saying points out to that she is in love
and that too with aru
hmmm and now is shocked that her bhabhi thinks she is in love with aru
so cute right
do you really know whats love
cause its bitten you on the nose and you still dont see it
am sure she will be still denying it all last night
but she cant for too long
ahhh loved geet here
first she is all abusive of him and then she starts listing his good qualities
she is gone case for sure


😆

defo in love warna arrogant munde ki hamiyaan ke saath saath unke gund bhi yaad karr rahi hai
aww so lost that she didnt know they reached office
bless aru is worried for her
of course he is
urggg that thing called annie is here
well she has to be right
after all she gotta confession to make


Exactly! Without villain love story seems empty!😉

chill yaara she is nothing more to aru than his friend
woh bhi dekhte hain kab tak
she can never take your place in his heart ever
no matter what she does


👏 Well said!

yipee she at least accepted it to herself
about time too man


😆

annie teri khair nahin
khushi tere ko chodegi nahin


Agreed!

well i hope she doesnt
after all the witch is trying to steal her man away naa
haiyye jis tarah se inhe realise huya pane pyaar ke baare mein so cute


Thank you!😃

bhole aru yeh kab hua kaise hua kyun hua
sorry had to say that


Dont worry! Even i was thinking the same but when I put myself in Khushi's shoes I realised that it is something Khushi would think!😆

lord this girl is so funny
okay so she wont confront annie first
but tell aru about her love for him
wise choice my dear
but will she be able to do so
lets see then
yeh chipkali toh gayi re


Agreed!😆

yes dont be shy
you are a khurana dear
no need to feel shy of him
he is your love naa
will she just go up to him and say those three magical words
oh teri before she could this witch had to ruin it all
koi nahin khushi hai naa
khushi to rescue of her man
really how on earth do you come up with such fantastic dialogues dear
fevicol khaa ke paida huyi thi
had me cracked up😆


😆 I dont know! They just come up!😆😉

all were waiting for this
not only AR staff but us too man
yes where is the popcorn man


Should I write a small scene where I send you some popcorns?😉😆

aru aur annie dono shcoked to see her this avtaar
well annie messed with wrong girl didnt she
aru khushi ko kuch nahin hua hai
bas pyaar ho gaya hai yaara
waah kya sunaya hai inhe
and annie she is right
DO NOT MESS WITH HER RIGHT NOW
SHE IS ON FIRE MAN
he loves only khushi and will only love her
nothing you can say will ever change that fact
i am fan of this khushi now kappa lagi raho


Thank you!😳 And I am really glad that you liked this Khushi!😃

what the
yeh aru bhi naa
oyye its not just a cat fight
but also fight for you dude
he is blind in khushi love that he didnt see annie loves him
men i tell you sometimes totally clueless


😆

record it well would be good if you did will help for sure
kameeni teir himmat kaise huyi
tu karti hogi pyaar aru se
parr woh sirf khushi ke hain samhji chudail
actually chuhiya khushi does love aru


Chuhiya?🤣 Oh my! Should have used it in the update too! Will find a way to use it for Annie soon!😆😉

and so she does care
this girl is really thick naa
hello if you are in illusion he will love you leaving khsuhi then keep dreaming
cause thats the only place you will get him
well maybe not even there
kya drama hai
gadhi hai yeh ladki agar isse lagta hai ki aru kabhi inke honge
badi aayi apne aap ko tees maar khan samjhane
ahh loved her dialogue again dear
you are truly just haiyye what to say runnign outta words


Thank you!😳😃

yes he is her deewana
aru come out of it mate you will be needed
i dont like the look of this kameeni right now
territory claiming sure worked
wow she kissed him
and in front of staff and all
haila kya baat hai
he wouldnt have seen it coming
and neither would anyone else
especially that kameeni


😆

wow she sure showed her love for sure
why does she care
oh i dont know because she loves him stupid
thank you annie for that
khushi only realised her feelings for aru when she saw chudail flirting with her man (with geet prompts too but annie is the one who pushed her to realise her feeling)


Exactly! Didn't I tell you in the start of the story that this will be one story where the actions of villains will actually bring the leads closer?😉😃 This was just one of those instances! Ab aur aise twists aane baaki hain!

due to you we got arhi awesome kiss in front of all staff of AR
chorre shock se bahar nikal
kiss her back dont be shy or slow
really anj here telling him to kiss khushi okay again didnt see that coming


😆 Simply adding some humor there!😉

ahhh she just realised what she did
but no way is he gonna let her draw back from this mind blowing kiss naa
yeh toh gayi ji
wow what a kiss man
run outta breath them and me too thinking of their kiss


😳

annie gayi chalo acha hai
la what the dont
not that i would mind you tweeting about aru no longer being a single man
but if her veerji came to know and his di
well they have had it


Agreed! And they are going to have it!😉

as if she will stop now this la man
now she got it huh
what she did it hit her now
well it was all impulse naa
and she outta that phase now
but aru surely isnt
though wise move to get outta there
they do have to talk about this
ekaant mein shanti se baath ke baat kariyega
wait she drove his car yes she did
this is what i notice am ajeeb


Agreed!😆

ahhh well time to talk and rightly so
besharmi toh pyaar mein ho hi jaati hai
so chill babes
yeh toh hona hi tha
after all such hottie and with that witch being a right pain
you were bound to do this
sometimes it happen


😆

awww now aru wanna know what was that all about
was it just a spur of moment thing to tell annie off or mark her territory
yeh insaan hai ki zameen bhai


🤣 Just imagined Khushi slapping a note on Arnav's forehead which reads 'Property of Khushi Khurana! Trespassers will be prosecuted!'😆 Imagine Arnav's expression!😆

sorry just kidding
she had to mark her territory
why should men have to do that every time right
or does it mean anything
well does it mean something or what
but guess she gotta tell him that
as it is he wont be able to take it if it isnt love for her
he would be heart broken
well luckily that wont happen
khushi you always are confused dear


😆 Agreed!

well time to clear it all out
time to tell him what you feel for him
and it wasnt just one off kiss
there shall be more of it
but thats not the point
time to tell him of your love my dear
he has waited for it impatiently at times and patiently too
please put him outta his misery dear
me likey this speechless munda


😃 Me too!😉

makes a nice change i tell ya
who would have thought that even ASR does speechless
but then why wouldnt he right
not the kind of thing he expected
and especially not from her
anyone else yes but her its shocking or him
trust me no meant nothing about that kiss
but he is right to be wary
after all she didnt confess naa
and till she does how will he know if she loves him or not
unfortunately he dotn read mind or is that fortunate
awww he is afraid that she might just break his heart again
but not this time
this is it what you were waiting for
so be patient and let her tell you all
so first anj and now maan
they aint there and yet they are prompting them right
well she finally says it
yipeee man and he sure is surprised
acha hua behosh naa huye


😆 That would have been funny! "Arnavji! Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh toh behosh hogaye! Ab hum kya karein? Haan! Chappal sungaate hain!"😆 Can you imagine Arnav waking up to her shoes near his nose?🤣

itni khushi ki baat jo hai
he could have naa
bechare phoole naa sama rahe honge
after all she finally is in love with him
and that he wanted forever
ahhh he is still cautious
of course he is
well not anymore
her body language her posture her face her eyes
all scream her love for him
phew he can finally take a sigh of relief
no need to be vary it has come true your dream yipeee
haiyye what beautiful confessions
that was just magical kappa dear


Thank you!😳

they give in to their love
and about time too all are saying
wasnt easy to see them like this
now no barriers to their love from coming out
well thats not true but thats for later
they can express themselves freely to one another
and that is one hell of a moment
he is buddhu
i so agree but then men in love can be


😆

awww she is complaining to him too
that was cute


Thank you!😃

hmmm point to be noted aru
if you want her to kiss you like that again you gotta make her angry
do remember that dude


😆

waise aru is right in what he said
kissing him in public means you werent thinking straight for sure
but blame it on annie huh
thats so funny yeh khushi bhi naa


😆

and he is gonna use that again
well he wont mind is she kisses him due to jealousy
khushi not his fault dear
you were the one who kissed him naa in jealousy
and now its time to face the consequences
veerji aur di ko batana iss kiss ke baare mein
that will be fun to see them explain that
can they explain it i wonder
well they can try
rest is upto their siblings
all i can say is loved this chapter
things are finally moving forward for arhi too
shame no confession from annie
but oh well thats for later
kiss was enough
and their confession of love too
what a chapter ji waah kya baat hai

Glad you enjoyed this update so much bestie! I planned this kiss scene ages ago when you asked me to see kiss scenes in DFL! That time I promised you that one of my new stories will have kiss scene for both the couples and there you have it! Fulfilled my promise!
Thanks for commenting bestie! Made me laugh a lot and also made me lot happier! Love you!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


finally and finallly khushi realised her feelings and expressed it also...😲😃 enjoooyed the part...i was feeling very bad for arnav...now glad that their problem is solved...now eager to see maan and anjalis reaction😆

Glad that you enjoyed the update! Anjali and Maan's reaction will be up in the evening!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pup03

happy finally khushi confessed her love for her arnavji but the confession was bomb.. kissing him in front of entire office was out and out lovely scene.. but in all this thing arnav missed that his best friend have declared her love and how she will win him over.. hope arnav realises this and do something before she hurt khushi again.. loved the update.. it was superb.. 😃



thanks for pm 😊


Thanks for commenting dear friend and I am glad you enjoyed the update so much!
And about Annie's confession, before Arnav realises it and remembers her words, something will happen which will make Annie herself confess not just her love for Arnav but also the accident she created for Khushi!😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

iss lavanya ne tweet kar di hogi...abb toh sawalon ki barish hoga khushi aur arnav per...maaja ayega...khushi ne itni J hogayi ki usne sab k samne...khushi dis is tooo much...magar ek baat kahun...i loved it...pyar kiya toh darna kiya...haan na...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thank you soma dear!
Glad you enjoyed the update so much!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShiningHearts

Omg wow finally khushi realised her feelings fr Arnav n confessed it too.:D

n loved d way she gave her ans to Annie que.;)
n hpe annie's truth cme out soon bfre she again try to harm khushi...
Fantastic update...
Loved it..

Thanks for commenting and I am glad that you enjoyed the update!
And your hope will come true, Annie's truth will be out before she harms Khushi again! Infact, it will come out on 23rd November's update!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

when i saw ur pm.. My mind was on ur pm full day bt free nahi thi..now i got tym.. Aur jaese pm chk kiya waha daekha Finally likha hai.. Maine DFL ko choda Fair story ko b choda ye finally daekhne.. N c i m smiling.. She kissed.. Haay wo b sab k saamney.. Update kro na ek aur kiss..hehehehe..

Really? You were so excited for this update? Wow!😃
Glad you enjoyed the update dear friend, really glad!
Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 28
awesome...
Khushi told Geet her confusion...
Rajji's grumbling was funny...
and finally finally Khushi realized her love for Arnav...
and the office scene was too good...
take that Annie...
and now Arnav has come to know about Annie's feelings too...
ek teer se do nishaane in fact many nishaanes...
Khushi kissed Arnav is front of everyone...
and also confessed...
the families have come to know about them also...
waise Geet and Maan's engagement was done in front of the media right then that creep Dev too would have watched or come across it right?
cont soon dear...

Glad you enjoyed the update dear friend!
About Dev watching the engagement, of course he must have watched it. But he won't be able to find them easily as addresses of high profile people are generally tough to find unless they are popularized by media like SRK, Ambani and AB's house addresses! BTW, you are very close to revealing my future plot!😉
Thanks for commenting dear friend!

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