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Posted: 10 years ago
res game khatam kya...?
or still I have a chance?

kitne baje update aa rahi?
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Part 10


Maan was too lost in his thoughts..he entered his room..which was dark ..he closed the door n walked in only to be hit by the smell of flowers n scented candles..as he moved more inside the sight itself made him shocked..the bed was decorated fully..maan immediately switched on all the lights..n saw geet sitting in the center of bed with her face covered in viel..she was like a typical bride waiting for her groom on SR.

Maan was mesmerized by the site..it was a dream for him n it has come true today..he forgot geets state n moved to her like a moth pulled to fire..geet was restlessly shifting in her place..she was trying to see or to say peak thru the small place between her face n viel..as maan neared she sighed heavily..

Maan parted the screens n flower canopys n sat in bed..he can see her lips which was cutely pouting..

geet:patiji..remove the viel soon..geet couldn't see anything

his ears has turned dumb as his desires grew up...he heard only the lips moving..

he moved closer n lifted the viel.n it fall on side of bed in floor...his eyes looked in hers..she too looked at him as he looked at her without blinking..she too stared at him like it's a staring game..



when she couldn't she blinked her eyes..maan slowly cupped her face n leaned to take her inviting lips in his..afterall he is a man with desires n this decors had ignited his suppressed desires..as he came forward she backed up n landed on bed with maan over him,,their body glued with each other..his hands were on her bare waist..it was soft smooth n silky..he was so lost that he started to carress unknowingly n he leaned more to kiss the petals..

she turned left with giggle n his lips landed on her cheeks..he felt desires burning him up..but geet was now giggling madly..

geet:aah..ha ha..p..a ti..ji..ha ..ha..

maans trance broke n he came out of his fascination..what he is doing with geet..he was shocked with his behavior n lifted his body from her n looked her..

man:geet..why r u laughing..

geet:gud gudi horahi hai..

she pointed his hands on her waist..

maan:sry..he removed it from her waist..but he cant stop drooling the white skin..

geet:yahaan bhi gud gudi..

she pointed her face..

maan:wahaan kese..

geet pointed his beard..

geet:it pricks n makes ticklish..

maan sighed..her ticklishness only made him back to present world..warna he don't know..his all vows will be grounded..

maan:what r u doing here..

he was confused..he left her down in dadi's room n she is here in his room..

who decorated this room ..he instantly calculated it must be adi as no one other than him knew maan is married ..

maan:adi ko such nehi pata..warna he would not have done this..

geet:patiji..aap kyun goorarahi ho..yeh koi game hai kya..

maan:hmm..no..say me how u came here..

he asked politely..

geet shifted to him closely..

geet"aap bohut achi pati ho..

he smiled sadly at her complement..she doesn't know the meaning of it too..few hrs of marriage n she is complementing him..

maan:how..

geet:aap..aapne itni achi decoration ki na geetko sonekeliye..

maan:mei..kisne kaha..

geet:naina ne..she told me to wait for u..

maan mentally cursed nt n thought to talk to her later..

maan:ok..u sleep..i ll change..



he got up from the bed n walked to his wardrobe..geet too followed him..maan sensed her following him..he stopped n turned..geet who was behind him bumped on him n was about to fall...he held her by waist..n geet too hugged him tight in fear..maan was having hard time with her around...he was aroused n want to cool his desires..but geet is testing his patience..he can now see her fully..she was standing in blouse n skirt..the low hip skirt was revealing much of her navel..her belly button..he want to roll his tongue around it..his eyes moved up checking her feminine parts..he is not a saint too ..he is a man of desires n geets beauty is only igniting him..

geet slowly steadied herself..

maan came back to senses when geet turned showing her back n stood still...if front was not enough her back was equally tempting him..there were strings revealing her full back n the back .. she asked him to remove her dress

geet:patiji..utarano..

maan closed his eyes..n took long breathe..he don't want to yell at her..

maan:geet go n sleep..

he suppressed his anger n told her..

geet"par geet ko dress change karni hai..geet ko yeh achi nehi lagi..maa ne kahaa so pehenliya..

how simply sheexpress herself..maan thought..

geet:ab geetko sona hai..yese nehi..mujei change karo na..

maan gulped his saliva hearing her every words..

maan st:with her innocence im going to have a hard time..but I know my limits..i must keep it..noone can make me turn up..not even nt's evil mind..

he mentally made himself strong to face geet..

maan:ok..but where is ur changing dress..

geet kept her small fingers tips in mouth n started to think..she then looked around the room

geet:yeh maa bhi na..bhoolgayi hogi..aap meri kapde utharado..muje sona hai..

she yawned.

Maans eyes widened..

Maan:what..bina kapde..

Geet:are budhu pati..meine woh pehni hai na..jo under pehnthi hai..

Maan closed his eyes..she will surely make him die in shame..

Maan took his tracks n vests n another set of pant n kurta..

He gave to her..

Maan:u change to this..

Geet looked at him n the dress..

Geet:but how will I change

Maan:go to washroom n change..or I ll change in washroom..u change here...

Geet pouted n showed her puppy eyes..she was still standing there..

Maan s anger was raising every second..how much he will control his desires..n she is hell bent on seducing him..her pout..he want to take that plum lips..every passing sec with her in same room was difficult for him..

Maan shouted:I said go..

Geet started to cry:aahhh..aahhh.. patiji..ne data..aaahhh

Maan pushed his hair behind n held his forehead..

Maan:st:maan u need patience..yeh bachi hai..see now she is crying..now how will u stop her wailing..

Maan:ok..ok..sry..i wont shout..ro math..

Tears were running like river in her eyes..

Geet: aahhh

Maan:sry ..sry ..


He gently wiped her tears..

Maan:promise I wont shout at u again..

Geet:promise yese nehi ..yese..

She kept her hands in throat n said..promise like this..

Maan couldn't be angry anymore than chuckle at her childish antics.

Maan kept his hands n pinched his throat saying sachi..

She giggled..n laughed..he felt peace seeing her smile..

Maan:now go n change..

He said softly..

Geet:but...

Maan:no but wuts..go..

Geet:lekin geet ko dress pehna nehi aatha na..budhu patiji..

Maan stood still..silence lingered in the room showing maans shock..

Then he heard someone clearing the throat..

Geet ran:maa..

Maan too turned n looked at rano..

Rano:I knocked the door..but u didn't hear it..so I came in..

Rano:ur mobile was in that room..shayad aaraoo wahi boolgayi..

Maan:thanks..erm..woh..

He was feeling embarrassed to que rano about what geet said..

Geet:mama baby..

Rano:he is sleeping.

She noticed the decorated room n sighed..whatever she heard while entering she knew maans intensions..he wants to keep distance with geet..

Rano:.beta..erm..shall I take geet with me.

Maan nodded in yes..he was a bit relaxed when she came as savior..

Rano:geetu.n u come with me..

Geet:nehi..mujei yehi sona hai..see mama patiji has decorated room for me..muje yehi sona hai..patiji ke pass..like naina did yesterday..

Rano n maan both were red with geets words..

Rano:geet..nehi beta..u must change too na..come with mama..

Geet pouted

Geet:nehi..mujei yahi sona hai..

She yawned n sat on bed..

Rano sighed..

Rano:yeh kya zid hai geet..chalo..lets go..

She raised her voice a little...but geet again started to cry..

Geet went to maan

Geet:patiji...aahhh mama ne d.aa..ata.

She needs some one to support like every child does..if mama taunts, the child will complain to father...here too she was complaining to man ..she expected he will pamper her..thats child heart..

N maan too couldn't see her tears n the baby face turning red..

Maan:erm..maa let her sleep here..if u trust me..

He was thinking that rano may think he wants geet as his wife ..

Rano: ..its not about trust beta..u have saved us from humiliation..specially geet..her character was pointed..n u saved her dignity...now she is ur wife..n u have r8 on her more than us..im worried only about u..what if she wakes up in mid n disturbs u..her childish antics u may not be able to handle her..

Maan was relaxed..she didn't take wrong way..

Maan:wo..yeh..meine..nehi kiya..

Rano:I know beta..u don't want to explain me..

Maan looked geet who was now half sleeping in sitting position..

Maan:woh I was telling geet to change.but

He dont know how to say

Rano:.she doesn't know to change herself..humesha mehi karthi hoon..

Maan was shocked..same time he doesn't want to embarrass rano more who was looking somewhere else than maan..

Maan gave rano his kurta..n went to washroom to change..

Rano patted geet

Rano:beta..change karke soja..

Geet: I ll sleep here only..

Rano:ok..

Geet turned her back n rano started to change her..she removed her choli n put the kurta over her..geet removed her skirt .

Rano looked at the pant..

Rano:insert ur legs..

Geet:na..mujei pant nehi pehna..

Geet always hate wearing pants..rano avoided salwars for geet for that only..geet was used to skirts..as she was comfortable with it..n if geet was compelled too to wear it ..she will remove n threw it in sometime..

Today rano was helpless..but she forced to wear geet the pant..geet was making fuss over it n cribbing too..she couldn't fold her leg..she doesn't like it n so on..

Rano:geet..beta..dont u want to sleep..or u want to crib like this..

Geet:nehi mujei is bed pei sona hai..

Rano:then sleep..

Geet laid on bed n rano patted her..geet was drifting to sleep..

Rano was having tears..she will be the first mother to be with her daughter in her first night..the arrangements for geet n maans sr..how she wished geet is normal n she would have blessed her whole heartedly n would have asked her to give them a grand child soon..but now..

She wiped her tears n left the room as now she started to feel nostalgic more..

Maan stood under shower more than long time..he can still feel her soft silky waist in his palms..

He shook his head hard..no..no..she must not affect me..there is no physical attraction for me..he said to himself..he felt calmed n composed..he took time to dry himself n change giving time for rano to change geet...he came out n saw his room empty..geet was sleeping..n rano has left..maan closed the door n came to his bed..he removed the decors n laid next to geet..he couldn't stop himself looking at geet..this two nights have changed his life..

In drunken state he slept with geet..today she is his wife..baby wife..he chuckled..he admired her beauty..her serene face..he couldn't stop himself..he lifted himself up n bend near geets face n pecked her forehead..

Maan:goodnight patniji..

He has spent many restless nights in loneliness..but today he felt his room comfortable n peaceful with geets presence..no matter if she is child or young...now he have someone as his own..his wife..near him..geet rolled in her place n then snuggled to maan..finding comfort in his arms she slept keeping her head on his chest..

He pulled the sheet over them n drifted to a peaceful sleep..





Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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awesome edits by priya...love u...ummahhh













priya
Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update
Naintara is truly a terrible person to actually take advantage of Geet's
situation , I'm glad that Daadima did'nt appose to Maan's decisions
now lets see what happens as Maan enters his room to find his wife

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update
loved it so much
plz update your another story
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part. Embarrassing situation for Maan and Ran. NT is evil but then Maan is smart. He will take care of everything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part di
maan is mesmerized 2 c geet nd was controld by his desires😳
bt geet's giggles made him 2 cm back 4m his dreamland
maan controld himself nd askd who did dis nd geet said dat naina tld her 2 wait 4 maan nd he did all decors😡
again a new prblm 4 maan geet doesnt knw 2 change nd askd maan 2 hlp her😲
thank god rano came on time nd savd maan👍🏼
maan clamd himself nd came back 4m washroom nd he saw geet sleppng peacefuly 😊
maan felt sm happiness aft long time nd geet slept in his arms😃
waitng 4 d nxt part di update soon

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