Kalpana's Maan Geet VMs Galore! Thread # 4! 14th VM on Page 55!

First Previous

Page

113

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#811

even i might have missed it
but guess was too into it to miss it
not that it matters
this was just one mistake
kuch writers toh bas poocho mat
angreezi ka murder karr diye rahe

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Hey! Stop making it sound like some chore you have to do!😕

Take your time! As long as you read it, I dont mind you not reviewing for once!

But dont make it sound like a duty or chore! It is supposed to be a fun thing! Samjhi!😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#813

oyye chup karr
its never a chore
but its just timetable to let you know when to expect comments
like you used to tell me when to expect stories i am telling of comments
okay so i read the last few para of DP now before closing it
omg what do they mean by public kiss
they didnt but they did naa
now even more eager
but will leave it for tomorrow
kal ke liye bhi toh kuch hona chahiye naa

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#814

wait aru is owner of fashion house AR right in my fair khushi
i hope so

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: chavvi16
even i might have missed it
but guess was too into it to miss it
not that it matters
this was just one mistake
kuch writers toh bas poocho mat
angreezi ka murder karr diye rahe

That is because they did not learn good english in school dear! I would be one of them too if my mom had not studied in convent and Dad had not been adamant in making me talk in English and watch English serials and movies from my young age. I still remember being 5 year old and watching serials like Dynasty and Bold and Beautiful with my dad! Could not understand a single thing as their accent was so different and I wasnt used to it plus I could not read subtitles at that age. So I used to simply watch the tv and giggle and whenever above PG 13 scenes came dad would send me to mom or to get something!😆 Those are few of my earliest memories!😆

That mistake I did is embarrassing coz everyone knows I edit and update! Even after that, having mistakes is a bit embarrassing.

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: chavvi16
oyye chup karr
its never a chore
but its just timetable to let you know when to expect comments
like you used to tell me when to expect stories i am telling of comments
okay so i read the last few para of DP now before closing it
omg what do they mean by public kiss
they didnt but they did naa
now even more eager
but will leave it for tomorrow
kal ke liye bhi toh kuch hona chahiye naa

Yup! They kissed! They finally confessed! That is why the title FINALLY!😆

Oh timetable! Cool!😃

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: chavvi16
wait aru is owner of fashion house AR right in my fair khushi
i hope so

Yup! He is AR fashion house owner there while Maan is KC owner. Those basics I wont change till the story demands it! For eg: In my upcoming story Haunted Eyes and Broken Souls, MSK and ASR own a hotel together! But there is a reason behind why they are not CEOs of AR and KC!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

oh good will be right to say what i did in my comment then
just wanted to clarify you see
no we all make mistakes
after all we are humans dear
chill meri maa
oyye tere jaane ka time ho gaya hai right
chal chal chorri

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#819

Pehle tera review reply kar doon yaar! Just ending pending hai!

Phir jaati hoon! Aaj main pata hai noon ko soyi nahi! Mom sent me to get some things which dad forgot to buy. Ye humesha hota hai! Dad bolte hain main sab khareed laaunga par kuch na kuch bhoolte hain phir mujhe jaana padhta hai!😆

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#820

haiyye bechari
well in this my fair khushi you will get lot of bashing of aru
and rightly too
i think this one comment might be bit long too
well so it seems now
but am having too much fun to stop

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago