'Nee Chupule Naa Uphiri' Maaneet SS PART 2 PAGE 25

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FamenLucknGlory

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Part 2 Lovely updates Maan saves Geet in nick of time and she is now staying with him . Gurmeet tries to convince Drashti that is Lara's father but he disagrees to him about their marriage so Drashti suggest a solution to this problem

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Awesome Update

Maan sees Geet running back home and fortunately he also wanted to see her as she was sad talking to her relatives as he came to the door he hears sounds and breaks the door open only to see the home owner trying to misbehave with Geet .
Maan's anger took the best of him as he just hated the fact that this elderly man taking advantage of his angel and he tells the villagers too that he is taking Geet with him .
while Gurmeet comes with his parents to seek Lara's hand in marriage but her father very rudely rejects the proposal
now I wonder what will happen

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Annu8193

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

very nice update. ...

maan saves Geet. ...

continue soon

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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Awesome part,eventhough i have watched the movie but am loving the way u molding the story,maan has brought geet in home and the other side gurmeet and his family coming to lara's home,but her parents not agreeing for marriage.the reaction of guru shows how possessive he is towards lara, waiting for next part

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

WOW!! Awesome update...loved it dear... sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 23 days...

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Maan saved geet took with him went ti his house adi his mother feeling sad for geet maan stunt her stage lovely scene he told can't seeing any thing guru his parents went to lark house for alliance he get angry her dad insult him nice update

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tanubag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Maan saved Geet and took her to km. Here Guru's parents came to Lara's house for her alliance but Lara's dad got angry and insult Guru.

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cuteeagle65

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

awesome update loved it maan safe geet in time & took her home lovely

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Jasmine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Loved Geet n Maan's intro.Poor maan is always rejected by women bcz of his handicap n geet is beautiful but blind.after her dad's death her relatives ignored him.Maan gets attracted 2 her.when d house owner misbehaved with her he saved her n brought her home.loved the pics.Loved ur imagination of their village n Maan's house n the pics u put to show ur imagination.And instead of making Maan rich like other writers u made him lower class.loved it.U chose manorama as Savitri instead of Neelu.That was a change.can u tell me y u chose manorama?Gurmeet Lara luv is wild n passionate.Gurmeet doesnt mind pain but he cant bear her going thru any pain even if its 4 him.So sweet.The tattoo chain n the romance were too nice.Lara's dad insulted Gurmeet.Oh!Lara has got a plan 2 get united.Waiting 4 d next part.plz update soon.
Since i've seen d movie i know whats going 2 happen.But r u planning 2 show the same things in ur story or will u cut off that tragedy?