Ishq Shava - Love is cure MG SS pt 41 pg 107 thread 2 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part .
Loved it..
Eagerly wa iting for next..
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oh poor geet again in trouble but the gud part is maan babu willl finally realiz his lov
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Posted: 10 years ago


I read all parts of this story today...

wonderfully written...

how a very rude, angry man falls in love with simple girl day by day...how the meek girl got love and comes out of her troubled past and fell in love with angry young man...beautiful...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part...n the precap is simply superb...
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GEET JUST WANTS TO BE WITH MAAN
AND MAAN WANTS GEET TO ALWAYS SMILE
IF THIS IS NOT LOVE, THEN WHAT IS
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
She hd understood him like no one
Everyone sees MSK she see's Maan in him
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Ishq Shava : Love Is Cure

Part 26


Maan rushed to the temple but Geet was not there in the temple, Maan called Adi to know what was happening there, and from Adi he came to know that Geet was not found anywhere else, Maan panicked and ordered Adi to look everywhere, and he too ran up in search for her and stopped before an old building, it looked creepy and Maan thought for a second, something made him suspicious and he went inside, and searched up, "Geet," Maan's voice echoed up in the empty place, "Geet" Maan shouted up again, looking everywhere,




Maan's heart was beating high like anything, an fear grew up making him weak, his throat dried up with the fear, Maan never felt this fear in his life, it was like an death fear, he felt his grounds moving under his feet, "Geet, where are you, you better be safe Geet," Maan shouted as he found a tear rolling down, "Geet," Maan shouted, and stood near an wall, and called Adi again, and his negative answer made him scared more, "Geet, where are you," Maan shouted, and feared that something might have happen to her, and the thought gave an energy to pull him up to search for his life,

"Geet" Maan shouted again, "please be safe," Maan cried up, "God, Please, please, be with my Geet, till I find her, please, and please take me to her, I want my Geet, I want my Geet" Maan shouted up and he wasn't listening up to his own words, as he was screaming "My Geet" again and again, Maan suddenly stabbed on something and looked down to see what it is and his heart skipped an beat as he held the dupatta on the ground, "Geet" Maan shouted and looked around panicked and finally stopped as he found a staircase leading down stairs,




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"Please leave me" Geet was begging the heartless guy before her, as she was held to an pillar as two guys held her hands on the either side, "Leave you, no way, if I can't have you, then no one can," he screamed, "now too I will let you go if you agree to be my wife, atleast for one night" He asked Making Geet's eyes widen up in shock, Geet then looked down and held her breathe, "I Choose to die" Geet said, the guy got anger and held the sword near her neck, "Think again" he ordered, and Geet was still calm and looked down,




"Your wish" he said and raised the sword in full swing, "Maan" was the only sound there and suddenly everything went silent, Geet was surprised to see no pain in her and opened her eyes and her heart smiled for a second and the next second her smile turned into pain as she saw Maan hold the sword he raised and the blood flowing down his hand, Geet looked at him with her wide eyes, and so as the Vikram Singh, he try to pull the sword from Maan's hold but he could so he left the sword,




Maan throw the dupatta on Geet and his eyes turned red with his boiling anger, scaring everyone there frozen up, they looked at each other feeling the fear in them, Maan dropped the sword from his bloody hand and the sound of the sword pulled everyone from there frozen state including Geet, It was like a few seconds of thunder, when Maan smashed those guys with his fury fist and angry stunt, Geet who had never see his fight live, was scared up seeing the merciless Maan breaking up the bones and making them scream for life,




Maan then suddenly grabbed Geet's hands and ran up, as he heard many more footsteps, Geet just followed him as Maan pulled Geet up away from the dangerous place and as the found an hide out, Maan looked around and there was no one near, and so Maan took his mobile to call Adi, but the signal was not there, "Damn, Not now" Maan thought and suddenly he was pushed away, with a gun shot, "Maan" was all he heard and an pain aroused in his shoulders and looked at Geet who was looking dead scared and looked before him, to see that Vikram Singh holding the gun,





"Now you are dead Geet" he walked up to her with the gun pointing to her, "Not until I am alive" Maan hovered and held Vikram's hands, and there was an huge struggle between Maan and Vikram, in offending and defending Geet, Finally Maan made him drop the gun and hit him hard on his abs and neck, Vikram fell down on the ground with unbearable pain, and Maan pulled Geet and rushed away and stopped as they found an safe place outside the old building and Maan called Adi, and informed him and the guards and asked him to capture everyone,




Maan cut the call and was breathing in relief that Geet is finally safe and with him, Maan was pulled from his thoughts as he felt a shot of pain when Geet touched his wounded shoulders, and Maan looked at her crying up, "Didn't we have a deal of not crying" Maan asked slowly trying to divert her mood, but it didn't work, "Why did you come there, why did you save me, I was ready to die, and once I am dead, my bad luck to will die with me and no one will ever suffer because of me" Geet said weeping up, "Enough" Maan shouted up as he held her shoulders tight, "ahh" Geet's sign Made Maan to pushed her way, and then he relaxed and turned towards her,



Maan slowly held her shoulders, "Geet, your trust in me is only this much, all my promises had no meaning for you" Maan asked pained and Geet's eyes filled up again, " You were ready to die, How could you Geet, how could you decide to die, when I am alive, how could you be ready to leave me alone, aren't you suppose to be with me forever, you didn't even think once how will I live without you, what will happen to me, this means you don't like me, you don't want to be with me, you are ready go away from me leaving me alone in pain, why Geet, what did I do for getting this kind of punishment, why Geet" Maan stopped his words which was speaking his heart out, pained up to the core,




Geet was just staring straight into his eyes, there was pain, concern, care and she could see something more in his words, she wasn't sure about what she thought it was, she looked at him frozen up with his words, she wanted to wipe those tears and hug him tight and scream an sorry, but she couldn't, she was struck, she can't believe her ear, "Baba ji, what did I do to get this care and concern for him, why is he pained up like this, he doesn't want me to leave him, he wants me to be with him" Geet thought and her tears rolled down in happiness,



Maan then took his hands from her and stood away, Geet relaxed herself a bit and slowly saw his blood flowing hand and slowly touched it and held it up in her hands and Maan looked at her, "I am sorry, please forgive me, I will never go away from you, I promise you, I will not go away from you, I promise even to fight with the dead to be with you, I will never leave you, I will never give you pain, never, my life will be only yours to create or to destroy" Geet said as Maan looked at her,





Geet smiled a bit and took her dupatta and tore it up and tied around his cut to stop it from bleeding, and she looked at him, and she can't feel any more happy than this seeing him, there for her,

Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho
Dil ne tujh ko hi pukaara
Tune hum ko hai banaaya
Tune hum ko hai sanwaara
Jahaan ko to rab ka hai, humein tera hai sahaara
Bas teraa saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho
Bas teraa saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho
Tere kehne se kar jaayenge
Hum mar jaayenge..





Mere yaaraa tere gham agar payenge
Hame teri hai kasam ham sanwar jaayenge
Mere yaaraa tere gham agar payenge
Hame teri hai kasam ham sanwar jaayenge


Geet tied the dupatta, and Maan looked at her, "Geet, you better remember your words, your life is mine, you can't go away from me, I won't let you, I need you in my life always, but not like this, not with the tears, not with any pains, not with an negative thought but with the smile I asked for, Can you," Maan asked with a smile and Geet smiled up and Nodded an yes, "Then come on, let's start an new journey together" Maan said as he held her hand slowly, and walked up and Geet too followed him not knowing whether it's a dream or reality, whatever it is, she wished this forever,




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"Maan sir" Adi screamed up seeing Maan and Geet walking up towards Geet's house, "Geet di" Rachi screamed up crying, "Adi, don't panic, I am fine" Maan said, "What happened" Maan asked, while Rachi went and held Geet up, "Sir, It will take a day, I guess" Adi said, "No problem, complete all your works and make everything proper here and then you can come back" Maan ordered, and Geet's aunty to come up and freaked out, "Oh My poor girl, why do you have to suffer for us Geet" she asked crying up,

"Please, don't say like that," Geet begged, "Geet, we need to start up now, to reach home before late night" Maan said in his usual roaring voice, "Rachi, you come with Adi to Delhi, once the work here is completed, and before you come there, I will get your admission ready in a big school, you are ready for that right" Maan asked and Rachi looked at her mother for permission, and she nodded a yes with a big smile and tears, and Rachi smiled up big, "when you came there, Geet and I will come up to join you up in the school, ok" Maan said and Rachi smiled and came and hugged him up,

"Thank you, thank you so much, you are so nice, I am happy that Geet di is with you, my Geet di is so innocent but she is pure as the moon, I was always worried about her, but now I am so happy that Baba ji had made her to live in an place she deserve to be in," Rachi said and Maan Pulled her slowly and held her cute face in his hands, "You are so sweet, you are brave too, and now forget your worries about your sister and start dreaming about your life, as you dream it, I will make it come true, Ok" Maan said and Rachi smiled big,

"That's good" Maan said and kissed her forehead, Geet looked at them and her tears flowed down her eyes in happiness, now she doesn't have to worry about Rachi, nor her uncle and aunty, Maan is there, she thought, Maan slowly looked at Geet and eyed her cried and he glared at her with his stern look, Geet understood his look and wiped her tears and smiled big and Maan grinned and nodded up, "we are leaving, Adi will be here and take care of everything" Maan spoke to Geet's aunty for the first time and she nodded an yes and Geet went and hugged her and Rachi, with a Good bye kisses and went away with Maan,

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Geet was looking at Maan with a smile on her face as Maan was driving up, "What" Maan asked as he saw her stare, "You know, you are so scary" Geet said and Maan looked at her puzzled, "Scary" Maan asked, "Yes, the way you fought with those guys, it scared the hell out of me, I could literally hear their bones breaking up," Geet said, and Maan looked at her with the same seriousness, "what else do you think I would have done to those bas***ds for touching my Girl" Maan said and turned around,

"My Girl" Geet thought and smiled up big, "Baba ji, does he mean what he is saying," Geet thought blushing up and turned around and stared outside the window, after a long, long drive, Maan and Geet reached the Mansion, Maan parked his car and looked up towards Geet and she was sleeping high, "Poor Girl, what all she had to go through in a single day," Maan thought looking at her innocent face with a sweet smile on her lips,

He didn't want her to wake her up and so he went and try to pull her up in his arms, as Maan snaked his hands around her shoulders, Geet signed and hover up and held him tight holding his neck tight in her hands, Maan stopped for a second as he was shocked but he knew she was just reacting without her sense as he touched her in her sleep, and he pulled her up in his arms and walked up towards the house, Geet kept her head on his chest and his warmness was so welcoming and made Geet relax more into her sleep,




Maan then took her to her room and made her to lay on the bed, and when he try to move away, Maan felt her tight hold on his neck, not allowing him to move away from her, Maan smiled up and pulled her hand slowly from him, and made her lay back comfortably, "Sleep well Geet, sleep well, I am there for you, always," Maan said and went away,




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It was 9.00 when Jay got an call from Maan, "Maan," Jay's voice was so cheery, "Where are you" Maan asked in an serious tone, "In my office" Jay said scared by his tone, and that's all Maan cut the call, "Maan" Jay called up and then looked at his mobile, "What happened to him" Jay thought confused, while "Sir, everything is ready, if you come we can start up" Jay assistant Nisha said and Jay nodded and went away,

It was 9.25, when Maan entered into Jay's conference hall like a storm, shocking everyone, "Maan" Jay looked puzzled up, "We need to talk" Maan said and Jay nodded up, "please, Wait in my cabin" Jay said and Maan nodded and went away, Jay looked at his staffs looking at him shocked, "Maan Singh Khurana in their office", "Nisha you take over, I will be back" Jay said and went away, Jay felt little nervous seeing Maan's face, it was bit scary, "Maan" Jay called up as he entered into cabin and saw maan pacing to and fro,

"Jay" Maan roared making Jay jump up a second, "What is it Maan, what happened, is it, is it with Geet" Jay asked slowly, "Yes," Maan said, "What, what happened" Jay asked trembling up, "I am in love with her" Maan screamed up, "Oh My God" Jay breathed in relief, "Maan, you scared me for a minute, why are you so serious now, you are in love, you need to be happy and smiling and celebrating, not hover up on me, and freak me out" Jay said,

"Finally, finally you understood, you are in love, Maan Singh Khurana is in love," Jay said smiling up and hugged Maan up, "I am so happy Maan, I am so happy" Jay said and pulled away from Maan, and looked at his face, which was still a bit serious, "there is one problem in it" Maan said, "Problem" Jay asked looked at him puzzled,

Precap: Maan's problem and Jay's solution


Edited by Maya_Maan - 10 years ago
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Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 10 years ago
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WOW!! that was awesome ...loving their closeness & moments more & more...precap is interesting...😳
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itni fights ke baad aakhir Maan is sure that he is in love with Geet...

he saved geet from Vikram and Ranchi also...

Geet ki chachi ko aakhir samajh mein aa gaya...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...

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