MG~ FF~The Jinx - UPDATED Pt 10 / Pg 137 / 19th Sep ................. - Page 83

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😃 Good Night lakshu nd priya..
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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(F banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part - 9




Part - 10




Maan too bid bye to them ,all came out ,, Geet opened door nd settled manu in his baby car seat ,, handed him his car nd placed few more toys near him nd then gestured Maan to sit taking d driving sat herself ,, Maan was awed seeing Geet's smartness ,, this was a totally new Geet in front of him ,, very simple nd very smart ,, he settled in d passenger seat nd Geet ignite d engine ,, Maan looked back at manu who was sitting happily nd looking out from window.

Maan: is he fine there alone ?

Geet: yeah , don't worry , he is habitual .

Maan: I cn hold him here Geet .

Geet: it's OK ,, he is fine there nd u cn hold him in zoo ,, save ur energy for there ,,

Maan passed a smile .

Geet: 1st we r going to ur hotel , u need to change na .

Maan: OK , fine .

It was a long travel for more than 1 hrs ,, manu slept in his seat ,, Maan was worried for him but Geet told him that he was comfortable there ,, seeing d distance Maan was lil confused why Geet lived there away from city though she cd live near her office place .

Maan: Geet u cd live here then why u live there so far?

Geet smiled: yes I can but that place suit me more ,, i'm living with that couple from last 3 yrs ,, they helped me a lot when I was in need so how cd I leave them nd most imp manu nd U&A r very attache ,, there r many more things that I preferred to live here .

Maan became quiet listening this ,, he cd understood seeing her from last nyt that how difficult to bring up a baby alone nd that elderly couple seems very nice nd helpful ,, he was glancing back at manu now nd then to assure himself that he was fine ,, they wr in front of his hotel nd Geet stopped d car .

Geet: u go nd change wr r waiting here .

Maan: why , u r waithing here ? come inside u cn wait there .

Geet: do u have some more work ?

Maan: no , but why waiting here ,, u both cn sit in d room comfortably .

Geet: we r fine here ,, plzz go nd change ,, we have to travel 1 more hr too ,, plzz, move fast.

Reluctantly Maan rush in ,, Geet's this formality pinched him in heart but he cn't force her ,, she allowed him to accompany them nd that was enough for him ,, he was in his room nd realised that he forgot his office bag in Geet's house ,, lost in manu he came out without taking that from d room ,, Maan called Geet .

Maan: hello Geet , a prob here.

Geet: hi, prob ,, what?

Maan: I forgot my bag in ur house .

Geet: oh!! S*** ,,, now what ? Do u have room keys or any imp things in that ? Where r u ?

Maan: no there wr only lappy ,, papers nd passport , room key is with me .

Geet: OK , do u want to go back to take that?

Maan: no it's not possible now ,, we have to travel long ,, I cd get that at eve .

Geet: then fine , we try to come early , so u cn go with us to take that nd come back on time ,, when do u have ur flight to Ind ?

Maan: that was on day after TM .

Geet: thank God , kal nahi hei warna hectic to jata ,, r u ready ?

Maan: yeah , coming .

After 10 min he was there in d car ,, he was dressed up in smart casual complimenting Geet nd cutie ,, manu was still sleeping .

Maan: ye abhi bhi so raha hei ?

Geet smiled: hummm,, accha hei zoo mei kafi ghoomna padega to soega nahi .

She started d car ,, Maan was asking her about d related places which wr they wr passing ,, Geet was amazed at his friendly behaviour ,, he was a diff Maan whom she knew before 3 yrs ,, he never talked to her properly in those yrs ,, these 3 yrs had changed him a lot .

She was behaving nd replying normally ,, it was just a matter of a day nd she cd bear for her kid's happiness nd yash uncle's favours ,, after nearly 1 hr travel they wr at d Zoo ,, she parked d car ,, she came out nd wake up manu ,, lazily opened his eyes but became cheerful seeing that he was at d Zoo ,, maan came nd took his hand in his ,, Geet take out d baby bag nd handed that to Maan nd then made a bottle of formula milk for Manu , kept that in bag nd few more eatable boxes ,, locked d car ,, took back d bag nd hanged on her shoulder with her bag.

Geet: let's go baby to see ur lion .

Maan: i'll take him Geet .

All came at booking counter ,, Geet took their passes nd went in after few yards they got d zoo map nd they stopped there to decide which side choose to go 1st ,, one side was play zone nd water park nd other side was wild view ,, they selected wild view coz manu was excited to see d lion ,, they took their road nd started walking ,, Manu was walking holding Maan's finger from one side nd from other side Geet was holding his hand ,, he was walking between maan nd Geet sometime normally nd some time jumped in joy ,, they wr in a thick green natural surrounding ,, ppl wr visible there on road with their kids in fair distances .

Soon they wr near a bird'z zone nd diff kinds of birds in separated net partitions ,, there wr small - small trees with birds houses in d netted partitions nd d chirping of birds making d air noisy ,, there wr many kids nd all wr enjoying , mimicking birds with antics ,, it was really a fun to watch kids like that .

Manu: mommy ,, uncle ,, see angly bild , he indicating at a red bird.

Both nodded with a smile nd nodded in a yes ,, he was very excited

Next was monkeys , chimpanzees nd baboons part nd that was a big fun for all ,, monkeys wr jumping from here to there , chimpanzees making faces nd screaming inside d net nd kids wr outside .

Manu: mommy ,, mommy see monky's baby .

* Maan nd Geet enjoyed a lot with manu ,, he was not ready to go away from there .

They brought him to next area nd it was a stone fencing part ,, there wr giraffe nd zebras ,, Maan took manu in his arms to show him ,, manu liked those then they walked a lil nd came again an open wall fencing part ,, this was lil watery nd muddy part like a big long pond ,, there wr lots of crocodiles nd alligators ,, manu nd Geet feared seeing them ,, manu held Maan's neck nd collar tightly .


Manu was watching those creatures quietly ,, now he was lil tired nd hungry ,, though Geet was giving him nd Maan water in intervals but it was neary 3 hrs they wr walking .

Manu: mommy wheal is l I on ?

Geet : last zone baby ,, r u hungry ?

Manu nodded in yes , now he didn't want to walk nd clung to Maan ,, they sat on d benches under d trees nd Geet took out feeding bottle nd handed manu ,, she asked Maan to give her manu in her lap but Maan willingly lay him in his lap ,, Geet opened another box of snacks nd forwarded to Maan ,, both too munch nd had juices ,, they wr talking about randomly on what they saw ,, this lil rest refreshed them nd now manu was on toes ,, he again walking between Maan nd Geet holding their hands .

Preap --- fun continue ...


Part - 11



The Jinx --- Thread - 2
Link ...





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😆😆 Updated ,, Pg..137... enjoy..

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