MG~ FF~The Jinx - UPDATED Pt 10 / Pg 137 / 19th Sep ................. - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 6! Lovely update! Geet answers his questions! She is a single mom! Maan shocked! Geet tells him this is USA n nt India! Geet makes him agree nt to tell his family! Is this Maan's child? She mentions something abt being a jinx n Maan sad! update soon! Well written
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 6


Part - 7


Maan was looking at d playing kid with heavy heart ,, his antics nd innocence made him to smile ,, he knelt near him on carpet took his car playfully with a naughty smile,, d small cutie frowned at him nd sat in his knees .

Manu: heyy ,, it's my cal .

Maan: OK , let me play with it .

Manu: no o ask mommy ,, she give u othel to play .

Maan: but why not this ? I like it .

Manu: no o o, it is mine ,, give me , peezz.

Maan: let me play with u plzz ?

Manu: u al big ( he gestured with hand lifted it up),, mommy give u big cal .

Maan: I have big cars but I like this ?

Manu: u have big cals ?

Maan: yeah , four.

Manu amazed: foul !!

Maan: hummm ,,

Manu: felali (ferari)

Maan smiled : no ,, not Ferrari but others .

Manu proudly: I have felali ,, give me back my cal .

Manu stood up nd came close to him to take his car from his hand but Maan hide that behind his back ,, manu went back then Maan lifted his hand upward to tease him ,, Manu came in front of him , held his neck nd climbed on his thigh ,, he clutched his collar in his one fist nd tried hard to get back his car from Maan's hand but lost his balance nd fall down on floor ,, Oh!! No ,, baby ,, Maan instantly lifted him but kiddu started crying again .

Maan : Oh baby it's oK ,, nothing had happened ,, see i'll beat d floor ,, it hit u again ,, Maan patted his foot on d place where manu fell down but he was sobbing ,, Maan felt bad making him cry again ,, Geet came running there listening Manu's cry .

Geet: what happen? Why he is crying ?


Maan: wo , he fell down .

Geet: how ?

Maan: wo ,,, he wanted to snatched d car from my hand ,, it's OK , OK baby here is ur car ( he gave him d car ) ,, calm down ,, i'll give more ( he didn't know how to pacify a crying baby .

Manu was whinning nd forwarded his hands towards Geet ,, Geet took him nd tried to pacify him .

Geet: no baby don't cry , see here is ur car ( she took d car from Maan nd gave manu),, come we make coffee for uncle ,, will u help ur mommy in kitchen ?( But he didn't budge nd clung to her holding her neck ) Geet brought him in kitchen where she kept d pan to warm d milk nd coffee filter to make black coffee.

Maan followed them ,, he was feeling bad for making a playful kid cry .


Maan: esse mujhe do mei bahar le jata hun .

Geet: koi nahi wo chup ho jayega abhi ,, ye jyada tang nahi kerta ,, right baby ,, it's ok now u got ur car nd we buy more TM , do u want more .

Manu sobbed : mo m m y d l e d fe la li .

Geet: OK , red , fine anything more ?

He nodded in yes hiding his face in her neck ,, Geet was holding him from one hand nd doing work ,, Maan saw her nd felt that it was hard to handle both .

Maan: Geet let me help u .

Geet: it's fine Mr Khurana ,, i'll manage .

Maan: Geet plzz ,, at least give me manu ,, i'll take him out ,, manu come baby won't u show me ur house nd toys ?

Geet: go baby show ur toys to uncle ,, u know he has a very big house nd will show u when u visit his house now 1st go nd show urs ,, my sweet baby ( she pecks his cheeks lovingly)

Manu became lil eased nd looked at Maan with wet eyes ,, Maan forwarded his arms for him nd Manu came nd held Maan from his neck ,, good boy , let's go .

Maan: where is manu's room ?

Manu showed him d way gesturing by hand nd both went towards gallery ,, Maan saw many photo frames on d wall nd stopped there to have a look ,, he was awed that there wr pics of all Khurana family members , Geet's, nd manu's ,, he touched his Dad's pic nd manu replied ,, dadu ,, Maan was amazed then he asked about all nd manu told about all , granny , gr8 granny , annie aunty , uncle Maan , nakul , istish , jojo (dog) ,,

Maan was impressed how Geet intro him about d family ,, then they went in nd Manu showed him his room ,, Maan made him stand on floor ,, manu opened a cabinet nd took out his toys one by one ,, Maan sat down on carpet nd watching him with a smile ,, manu was happy now nd showing all his things to him with demo .

Geet came there with a tray nd kept that in d cabinet ,, he handed Maan his coffee mug nd took d feeding bottle of milk, sat on floor .

Geet: Manu come baby have ur milk nd then sleep .

Manu: no mommy , no mik .

Geet: I added choco baby , it's tasty ,, come .

Manu: choco mik .

Geet: yeah ( she made him lay down in her lap , gave him his feeding bottle nd took her coffee ,, Manu started sucking his milk but stopped in mid )

Manu: mommy , we'll go to maket tm .

Geet: OK ,,,, have ur milk .( he started sucking again then stopped again)

Manu: mommy , I w a n t led felali .

Geet: OK , fine ,, finish ur milk baby.( he sucked nd stopped again)

Manu: mommy ( Geet rolled her eyes nd nodded her head , Maan gave a big smile , he was enjoying this cut talk ) , I w a n to s e e l I o n n m o n k y .

Geet curiously: lion nd monkey , why?

Manu: teachel saw us .

Geet: OK ,, ( she understood that his crche teacher showed him d pics or videos),,, ur teacher showed u today?

Manu: yeah , big l I o n ( he gestured with his hand )

Geet: OK , i'll show u ,, now finish ur milk , fast , before my coffee. ( he started sucking his milk but again...)

Manu: mommy ...

Geet: 1st finish ur milk then mommy talk to u .

Manu: mommy ,, peezz.

Geet: finish .

Poor soul started sucking his milk with hang face nd finished that ,, handed d bottle to Geet ,, he burped .. aarrr ,, looked at Geet nd Maan nd laughed heehee ,, mommy tummy said i' m full .

Geet smiled: OK , now sleep if u want to see lion n monkey TM.

Manu: uncle , I'll show u l I o n TM .

Maan: me ?


Manu: yeah ,, big l I o n ,, mommy took us ,, light mommy .

Geet: yeah baby .

Manu: uncle Maan ,, don't go ,, we'll go out TM ,, OK .

Maan: OK baby .

Manu: come , I show u bed ,, he held Maan's hand nd Maan looked at Geet perplexed ,, she too was stunned at manu's behaviour ,, he was comfortable with Maan now .

Geet: Baby uncle is living in a hotel , not with us .

Manu: h o t e l ??

Geet: a place to stay like home .

Manu: not hele with manu ,, uncle Maan ,, u l go ing ?( his face hang )

Maan's heart melt down seeing him like that he took him in his arms nd pecked on his cheek lovingly.

Maan: i'm here nd will go when u sleep ,, OK .

Manu: al u not coming with me TM ?

Maan looked at Geet then Manu's hang face nd again at Geet who was looking at him helpless.

Maan: i'll baby ,, if ur mommy allow me ?

Manu: mommy ,, mommy ,, let him come , peezz .

Geet: OK .( she don't have any option coz if she denied she had to handle a crying manu again nd she didn't want to make him cry )

Manu was super happy : y e e e ,, mommy manu loves u big . ( he spread his arms )

Maan: OK, now sleep ,, u have to wake up early to get ready .

Manu: OK ,,, mommy . ( he came nd clung to Geet circling his arms around her neck ,, placed his head on her shoulders to sleep )


Precap --- night stay ...


Part - 8









Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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WOW!! that was brilliant...loved it...😃
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so kaun hai yeh cutie...maan k bete toh nehi hai?

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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main hu di
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Loved it..
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Eagerly waiting for it

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