ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED updated PART 5 on 16-9-2014/Page 118 - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan already nagry on geet like always...
loved the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oops...!!
iss sameera maan ki gf 😡


ps : will edit tomm from pc 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...geet is so cute...dev is so calm & understanding...& maan poore dust danav...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor geet maan usko hi scold karta rehta hai hai
Parth ko bhi dara diya but geet to gv him answer back
Now he gv punishment again her for giving answer back
Precap is interesting supperb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3.

I loved that Geet finally replied back to Maan. OK, the guy is nasty! Even his own nephew is scared of him. That makes Maan look really bad!

Good for Geet! I am sure she will finish whatever work Maan gives her but I am disappointed in Maan. Is business the only thing he cares about?
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3
nice part...
hahaha Geet cribs about Maan's daants...
my God why is he like to this own nephew?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh gosh maan is so rude 😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan pagal hai kya ??
He is not even leaving the child.


Nice ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the three updates...
So Maan scolds Geet all time..phir chahe bechari ki galti ho ya na ho..
Oh god Meera in pain..thank god Geet informed Dev on time..
Aww..Geet aur Parth me frndship ho bhi gayi..
Wht the hell...how can Maan scold her in front of Parth..he is complete jerk..
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Posted: 11 years ago



PART - 4


Geet took little boy to KM.she wants to drop him so she reached office quikly,but Parth aint ready to leave her. She hold his hand and went inside the KM. Servant informed that that no one is a home. Not even the owner ie Savtri Devi. She to went to hospital to see the Meera. Parth stopped Geet. He wants her to be his side as no one is at home except servants.

Geet glance in his innocent eyes in which fear is evident. She wants to leave for her job sake but can't denied to innocent appeal of Parth.


She decided to stay until his family arrived. Soon Savtri devi came back home. Seeing her Parth felt happy and rush to her. Dadima embraced him and loved her grt grand son. Parth asked about his parents and told the office experience with her. She get annoyed on Maan's behaviour. Geet came forward and greet her. She introduced herself and asked about Meera.

Dadima met her with a smile. 'Good evening Geet. I am thankful to you,for taking care of Parth in our absence.'


'mam how are Meera mam? I hope everything is alright.' Geet is worried so she asked about her.


'dont worry, she is stable now. Suddenly baby's moment got struck inside and her BP is raised. But now every thing is under control. She will get discharged soon.' Dadima was reliefed and told her about Meera's condition.


Parth told about Geet and aslo how she come as his saviour when Maan is scolding him badly at office. Dadima smiled hearig his stories. 'ye Maan b na hadd karte hai. Waise Geet aap bahut himmat wali hai. Warna aise bahut kam log hai jo humare pote k samne bolne ki himmat kar pate hai.' She was very delight atleast some took courage to open mouth before him.


'nai mama i wont do it intentially.' Geet worried a bit may Savtri devi wont get angry from her also for snap backing to Maan.


'First of all ye mam kehna band keejiye. Aap hume dadima keh k bula sakti hai. Parth apke sath itna khush hai. You are now like a family member,so you can call me a dadima.' she asked to her call her dadima. She tried to make her comfortable with her too.


Geet smiled and shook her head. Meantime Path by mistake poured his juice on Geet's dress. Her eyes wodened with shock but she wont react. Parth apolozise. 'sorry aunt,its fall by mistake.' he scared might she too shout on him.

Geet caressed his hairs. 'its ok Parth. I know apne jaan k nahi kiya.' her smile vanished his all fear.


'Geet bete aap ise change kar leejiye.' Dadima suggest.

'its ok mam'... Dadima stared her. 'i mean dadima.'


'thats better.'


'dadima i am getting late to main isko saaf kar k office pahunchti hu. Late ho gai to Maan sir gussa honge.' Geet told her problem.


'Geet bete gussa hona to Maan ki hobby hai. So what new in that. Aap fikar mat keejiye hum baat kar lenge unse. Aap chaliye pehle change kar leejiye.' Dadia assured her that there is no need to scared of Maan. She went and brought one saree for her. 'ye leejiye or change kar leejiye.' she commands peggy,maid of Parth,to show her washroom. Geet went with her.


Maan is getting hell angry on Geet. He is fuming because Geet dis obeyed him. Se wont come yet and this reason is enough to raise his anger. He dailed her no to scold her. Geet's phone is laying outside on the table. Parth took and glance the screen. Saw Maan's name he quickly handovere the phone to dadima. 'dadima chachu ka phone aaya hai aunt k mobile pe.'


Dadima ans the call but befoe she opened her mouth Maan strt showring his rage on her. 'what do you think of yourself? Tume maine kaam diya tha use pura karna to durr tum office wapis aan b zaroori nahi samjhti. Then fine. No need of coming from tommarow.' he burst on her thinking Geet will on ither side.


'Maan bete agr aapka scolding session ho gaya ho to let me tell you something.' Dadima felt annoyed and talked rudly.


'dadima aap.' hearing Dadima's voice instead of Geet,Maan's anger replaced by shock. He never expected hat his call was answer by his Dadima.


'ha hum. Kitna chillate hai aap? Jaise khud to kabi koi galti nahi karte.' Dadima said wryly.


'what do you mean? What i had did?' Maan was confused with dadi's sarcastic talk.


'humara muh mat khulwaiye. Hum behas k mood me bilkul nahi hai. Apko pata hai Meera hospitalised par unka haal puchhna to durr ulta apne Parth ko daanta.' Dadima was annoyed with Maan's rude and selfish behaviour.

'dadima wo meeting ko disturb kar raha tha.' Maan argued.

'rehne deejiye Bete. Hume aapse koi excuse nahi chahiye. Waise b aapne humari baat na maane ki kasam kha rakhi hai. Tabi jab ki harkato k liye hum apko tokte the to apne ghar hi chhod diya. Alag jake rehne lag gaye.' Dadima was so upset with him already and his today's behaviour greened up all her wounds.


'Dadima please dont start all this again.' maan holding up his irritation asked to change the topic.


'fine i wont say anything. But have to make promise to me that you wont scold Geet. Unki koi galti nahi hai humne unhe yaha rukne ka order diya hua hai.' Dadima protect Geet and commands him not to threatend her.


'but why? What work she have there?' Maan argued.

'she is taking care of Parth.'


'what? Dadima she is my secratary. I wont paid her for Parth's baby sitting. Where is peggy? It was her job to take care of him.' now it was beyound his control.


'Parth Geet k sath comfortable feel kar rae hai isliye humne unhe yaha rok liya hai.' Dadima said strongly.


'dadima use abhi k abhi office bhejiye. Yaha bahut kaam pada hai.' Maan getting impatient.


'aap hume order de rae hai?' Dadima was also not less. She too snap back.


'no dadima but...' Maan lower down his voice.


'no par war. Wo nahi aayengi. Or waise b kafi der ho gai hai ab konsa kaam hai? Sara staff to ghar ja chuka hoga na?' Dadima argued and defends her.


Maan wont get words to argued with her. 'dadima where is she. Baat karni hai mujhe usse.'


'baat karni hai ya daantna hai? Dekhiye apko jo b baat karni hai subah office me kariyega. Abi hum rakhte hai.' dadima told her decision and cut the call,and he threw the reciever in frustration.


Meantime Geet come out after changing. And same time Dev arrived with Meera. Parth rush to her and she mbraced him. Both Dev and Meera loved Parth to calmed him. 'i am fine baby.' she kissed him as he was worried for her.


'thank you Geet. You did alot for us.' Dev and Meeera gave thanx ro show thier gratitude.


'no mam i have done nothing spl. Infact i am happy that you are alright. Dadima now please allow me to go. Maan sir gussa ho rae honge.' Geet is now worried for herself.

'dont worry Geet main tume office drop kar deta hu.' Dev offered.


'nai sir aap mam k sath rahiye. She needs you. I will manage.' Geet dont want to trouble anyone.


'nai bete aise akele nahi jae denge. Or Maan se baat ho gai hai. Aap office nahi ghar jaiye.' dadima told her to go home not to office.


'nai dadima ek baar to office jana hi hoga. Or else i lost my job.' Geet was so scared of his temper. So she insist to go office only.


Dadima wont argue and send her with driver. But she instantly call Maan. 'Maan i called to inform you that she is coming to office. But hum tab tak nahi soyenge jab tak Geet safly unke ghar nahi pahunch jati. Isliye ab ye apki responsibility hai ki aap unhe safly ghar drop karenge. And mind it,its my order not a plea.' Dadima instruct Maan that he wont keep het at ofice for so long and also took promise that he drop her at home safly.


Maan bowed down in front of her wish. He locked his cabin and come out leave from there. He is stepping towards lift when she come out from there. 'kya museebat hai. Mujhe meri hi secratart ka driver bana diya dadima ne.' he was cursing Geet and Parth. Due to both he had to bear Dadima's scold.


Geet come out and both glance each other. 'i am sorry sir.' she apolozised. Before she gave any explainantion Maan signaled her to move back in lift. She nodded and step back.


Inside the lift both were alone. Maan look here and there and suddenly noticed her. He scanned her from tip to toe. For the very first time,as she looks different in black net saree,from her formal wear of shirt and jeans. She tied her hairs in bun,but right now leaving them spinning over shoulders. Her perfect sculptured body appering tempting. She was struggling with her flicks coming again and again on her beautiful face. His fingers are flicking to play against her locks. Her perfect shaped curves are hardly hiding under her tight blouse. Maan wants to turn his sparkled gaze but he was mesmerised completley. Gradually his gaze shifted to her sleek waist. His arms were weltering to filled her inside and explore what she is hiding till.


But sson his trannce broked when lift's door opened with loud noice sound. Both come out and he asked the driver to bring his car. Driver obeyed and came. He quickly come out to open door for him. Maan signaled her to sit inside. She saw him in confusion. 'Get in the car if you want to go home.' Maan said rudly and Geet sit inside but her heart is pounding sitting next to him this close. Driver drove fast. Maan asked about her address and she told meakly. Maan avoide glancing her. Meantime his phone buzzed.


'i am coming sweetheart.' he confimed shortly to the other person on phone.


Geet smiled secreatly as she is aware of his habbits. Soon they reached to her place. 'thank you sir.' she showed her gratitude.


'thanx mujhe nahi dadima ko bolo jinki wajhse aaj tum bach gai ho. But it doesnt mean k tumhara kaam koi or karega. Wanna see you at office sharp 9. Or ha dadima ko phone kar lena. She is worry for you.' Maan again come to his rude mode and threatened her before he left.


Geet nodded and went inside her home. Maan too left from there as soon she vanished from his sight


Precap : same

Note: guys what happened? Why likes and comments are decreasing 😭 😭

Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

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