MG~ FF~The Mist -2- Thread-10-UPDATED Pt 65 / Pg 121/ 15th Aug ....... - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
Loved the way maan took care of geet :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Babie
maan is realising his mistake for not understanding Geet
But now he is turning in to a caring person..he is n love with geet now
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 62
nice...
finally he found her...
poor Geet...
shes in trauma...
and Maan has come to know her past too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 63
awesome dear...
poor Geet...
Maan was with her throughout...
precap is interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
geet scared maan consoling and divert her mind
she full of disturbed in sleep
next day dadi asked him about her health
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear
happy independence day to u too dear 😊
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I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


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Part - 63


Part - 64




Maan wake up Geet lovingly but she jerk opened her eyes with fear nd going to scream but Maan placed his hand on her mouth nd ssuuhh her .

Maan: sssuuhhh,, Geet mai hu ,, daro nahi .

She looked at him nd he gave her a sweet smile mouthing GM ,, he was towering her nd Geet's hands wr on his half shoulder nd one in his hand .

Maan: jawab to do ,, GM Geet , aur utho , dadima humari wait ker rhi hei mrng coffee keliye .

Geet remembered that she made her nd Dadima coffee ,but how cd she reply his hand was still on her mouth ,, hum .

Maan: hum kya ,, meri GM ka jawab to do , kabhi nahi deti ho , very bad .

Geet gave a helpless look to him , but he was in his world .,, lost in her almond hazels,, Geet held is hand nd removed that from her mouth nd then he realized what he was doing ? oopps .

Geet: aap muh kholne doge to mai kuch bolungi na ,, kya kerty ho ? aur aap yahan kya ker rahe ho ?


Maan: sorry , wo mai tumhe jagane aaya tha .

Geet look around to check het alarm nd realized that she was in Maan's room nd on his bed ,, she started remembering everything again ,, how nd why she was here nd what had happened ystrdy , her face hung remembering all d incident nd eyes turned wet again ,, Maan sensed that spoke .

Maan: Geet , chalo na fresh ho jao ,, kab se coffee ke liye wait ker rahe hei mei aur Dadima ,, come move fast sona (he got up , held her hand nd made her sit on bed ). Wash room mei bhi drop karu kya ?

Geet looked at him O nd he gave her a naughty look ,, Geet turned her face shyly , Maan heart jump with joy seeing that shy-shy Geet .

Maan: Geet jaldi karo na .

Geet got up nd went to washroom nd finished her daily routine ,, she came after few min all fresh ,, Maan skipped his exercise coz he didn't want to leave her alone ,, both came down nd she went in kitchen .

Maan: where r u going ?

Geet : wo Dadima aur aapke liye coffee banane.

Maan: Ok mai bhi aata hun.

Geet : aap ku ?

Maan: sekhne ,, kabhi seva kerni padi to he again give her a naughty look nd Geet gave a glare in return.

Geet: kuch jyada nahi ho raha ?

Maan innocently: kya ?

Geet: ye sab ,, aap jaeye , koi jaroorat nahi sekhne ki ,, mujhe koi seva nahi karwani.

Maan: daro nahi koi charge nahi lunga ,, accha sekhne to do uss per ban ku ?

Geet : pakao matt ,, jao na plzzz yahan se .

Maan: not fair Geet ,, mai seekh bhi nahi sakta kya .

Geet nodded helplessly thinking what entered in him ? She started making coffee on 1 hot plate nd tea for her on 2nd ,, Maan was sitting on counter nd watching her ,, Nakul saw Maan there in kitchen nd moved back to finish his another work .

Maan: Geet ye kiske liye?

Geet : wo chai hei , mere liye .

Maan: mai aaj chai peeunga , meri bhi banao.

Geet: nahi , aap nahi ,, aapko acchi nahi lagegi .

He thought for a sec nd agreed ,, OK .

Geet poured coffee/tea in mugs nd few fiber biscuits for Dadima , prepared tray nd moved to go gesturing Maan to come ,, He passed a killer smile to her nd followed her ,, Geet felt a somersault in her tummy thinking inwardly .. Kya ho gaya inhe ?

Both entered in Dadima's room nd wished her , handed Maan a mug , but he took her chai nd sipped that ,, Geet was looking at him with wide eyes ,, he sipped 2-3 tims nd kept that back saying .. not bad ,, Geet took out d BP nd gluco meter nd checked Dadima's bp nd sugar then note down on pad with date nd time ,, Maan was admiring her efficiency how punctual nd perfect she is in every work ,, he felt an immense pleasure in his heart .

Geet gave Dadima's mug nd biscuits coz Dadima was sugar patient nd cn't live empty stomach then she took her tea nd sat near Dadima .

Dadima was relieved seiing her relaxed ,, Maan was planning inwardly to keep Geet busy to divert her mind ,, it was Dushahara nd he was at home , though he had work bcoz he was absent from KC from last two days but for Geet he had to manage ,, he thought nd expressed his plan .

Maan: Dadima aaj off hei , kun a Farm House chale , kafi dino se nahi gaye ?

Dadima (surprised): dino se ya salo se .

Maan shrugged his shoulders nd looked for a reply ,, bolo na .

Dadima: hum ready hei ,, accha hei wahan kuch arrange ker aayenge ,, kab se gaye nahi to pata nahi kaiise care ker rahe honge servants ,, ab to Geet bhi hei humari help ho jayegi aur enhe pata bhi chal jayega kya kaise kerna hei ,, ku theek hei Geet beta ,ab sab aapko hi dekhna hei humse ab nahi hota etna kaam.

Geet: FH wo kahan hei ?

Maan: yahan se thoda dur hei , city se bahar samjho ,, aas paas kuch villages hein.

Geet: farming hoti hei wahan?

Dadima: nahi open hei , but servants flowers nd Vegitables kafi laga rakhe hein ,, aap dekhna achha lagega , peaceful .

Geet nodded nd Maan was super happy atleast she didn'r remember those bad things ,, he decided to call Dr D to come early so that they cd go after BF.

Maan: Ok Dadima then get ready nd pack things for a day ,, Geet we'll take lunch there so prepare light BF nd fast .

Geet: nodded in a yes ,, took empty mugs ne went to kitchen ,, instructed Nakul for BF ,, it was Dushara so she made kada Prasad nd went to pooja room for morning prayer. Maan was in living room nd reading Newspaper but his one eye was on Geet ,, when she went for pooja he followed her nd stood behind her when she was arranging arti thali ,, she felt his presence nd looked back .

Geet: aap yahan ?

Maan: hummm , shuru karo .

Geet: fir mai Dadima ko bhi bula leti hu sab eksath ker lenge ,, aaj Dushahara bhi hei .

Maan: tum ruko mai le aata hu .

He went out to bring Dadima ,, both wr there after few min ,, Geet burnt diya nd all did arti ,, offered flowers to god nd Geet gave parasad to Dadima nd Maan ,, Geet touched Dadima 's feet nd she blessed her nd hugged her lovingly ,, this was d best start of d day for a family ,,


Precap - a day in FH...

Maaneet moments ...




Part - 65




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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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