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Posted: 11 years ago

Marvellous and emotional update.. Poor Geet.. Hope things are better for Maaneet soon..😃

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lovely update
maan getting to know more about geet through arjun nice
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that was very emotional ..
finally geet and maan are together
hope geet reacts to maan feelings
she can let all her fears down..
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now it's Maan's turn to show that he cares.
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Dat was really a emotional update...
i hope Maan ll let his emotions his love n care out to her.. hope she start to know d feeling he has for her...
lovly part..
eagerly waitin for next part..
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Part - 62
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4125567/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-10-updated-pt-65-pg-121-15th-aug?pn=58

Part - 63




Maan was stunned after knowing about Geet's parents ,, he felt a lump in his throat nd he was ashamed that he didn't know anything about her ,, she was right that I don't know her ,, Arjun was right she deffo drown in her past ,, she didn't say anything what she witnessed there nd how she manage at that situation ,, she was masking brave for Dadima hiding her fear nd pain .. Geet ,, he came in d study nd find her near d window watching outside blankly ,, he went close nd saw that she was crying ,, Maan placed his hand on her shoulder ... Geet .
He turned her nd hugged her tightly ,, she loosened her in his arms ,, tired nd broken ,, they remain like that for long nd then Maan parted nd brought her in his bed room ,, he cdn't leave her alone ,, made her lie down on d bed ,, Geet refused but Maan pinned her there .

Maan: No Geet , I won't leave u alone there , so no argument .

Geet: mai theek hu.

Maan: ro rahi ho aur kahati ho theek ho ,, sshh,, cup ab , rona nahi , beemar pad jaogi .

Geet: nahi sona , darr lag raha hei .

Maan: Geet tum bahot tired ho rest karo ,, mai hun tumhare paas ,, sone ki koshish karo .

She tried to close her eyes but jerk opened at once in fear nd she sat on bed .

Gaat started crying: wahi sab dikh raha hei .

Maan: Geet ,, kuch aur sochne ki koshish karo ,, uss sabke bare mei matt soco ,, accha mujhse baat karo .

Geet: M a a n ,, mom-dad ki yaad ,,,, ( she cried out loud hugging him tightly )

Maan: G e e t ,,,, no sona .

His own eyes turned wet seeing her broken ,, Aj was right ,, she was in trauma nd as well as remembering her parents death in same manner , she cn't sleep in this state nd need some medical help .

Maan: Geet ,, sona , ro nahi ,, it's life nd we have to face lots of ups nd downs ,, be brave nd try to think something else .

Geet: M a a n ,, mere mom-dad bhi esse hi ..

Maan: sshhh,,, chup nahi socho uss bare mei ,, meri taraf dekho Geet ( he cupped her face nd made her look at him ) hum sab hei na tumhare paas ,, aur hum akele nahi jisne kuch khoya hei ,, life aage chalti hei ,, bhulan mushkil hei lekin kerna Padta hei ,, life rukti nahi ,, u r my brave Geet na aur meri baat manogi ,, matt socho ,, ignore kerne ki koshish karo .

Geet (sobbed) : wo sab mind se nahi ja raha ,, mai kya karu Maan ?

Having no other option he settled near her having her closed to him ,, she was clinging to him clutching his shirt nd tears wr dripping from her red swollen eyes ,, Maan took his phone nd dialled Dr Das number ,, after few rings he replied .

Dr D: hello Maan beta , what happened ? how is ur Dadima ?

Maan: hello ,GE Dr uncle , Dadima is fine but Geet is very disturbed .

Dr D: Geet ,, what happen to her ?

Maan: uncle she was in LN mrkt at that time nd luckily survives ,, she witnessed everything nd now she is very disturb nd crying she is not able to sleep.

Dr D: she is in trauma Maan ,, don't leave her alone ,, for now do one thing , some time ur Dadima takes sleeping pills name ****** give 1 tab to Geet ,, peaceful sleep is must for her mind , OK ,,, i'll come TM mrng nd after talking her i'll give her some meds for a week .

Maan: OK .

Maan : Geet , mai ek baar Dadima ko check kerke aata hun ,, wo bhi pareshan thi na ,, mai abhi aaya .

Geet: huumm .

He got up nd went to Dadima's room ,, quietly opened her meds box nd checked d medicine in his mob light ,, got d tab nd came back to her room ,, Get was sitting on bed feared looking blankly at d door .,, he brought water nd gave Geet that tab ,, himself settled on d other side of bed ,, came closed to Geet from back nd held her close to him .

Maan: Geet ,, sone ki koshish kero ,, daro nahi ,, mai pass hu tumhare .

To divert her mind he started other talk .

Maan: kal off hei tumhara ? hummm ,, bolo na .

Geet: huumm .

Maan: kya karogi ? exams ki prep .

Geet: hummm,,

Maan: kal dushahara bhi hei , kya banaogi ?

Geet: pata nahi .

Maan: mai agar batau to banaogi mere liye ?

Geet: hummm ,, kya ? (Maan told few things )

Geet: aap ye nahi khaty ,, mei aur Dadima khatey hei .

Maan: mujhe bhi khana hei, kal banaogi .

Hummm,, hummm . Maan saw that her eyed wr dropping nd in few min her breaths became heavy ,, she slept glued to him ,, Maan pecked her cheek nd closed his eyes to sleep .

Whole nyt Geet's body jerked many times in fear ,, Maan felt her trembling body nd cocooned her more to him ,, d nyt was very hard for Maan .

Maan wake up early nd looked at Geet who was sleeping but d lines on her forehead showing that she was not in peace , she was sleeping in meds effect ,, he caressed her head nd Face lovingly ,, tuk her loose strands behind d ear ,, He got up after few min nd went to freshen up ,, came out nd sat near Geet ,, he saw her new phone on his side table with his ,, he knew that she didn't have phone , it means she got it few days back ,, Maan took that nd check d contact numbers nd there wr only 8 nos ,, AJ,An ,Dadi,insti ,Dadima,KM, broker nd Maan , that's it ,, he felt a pang in his heart realizing that d no which sd be on top was at d last ,, his no.

He dialled his number from her phone nd saved d number , then he saved his number nd coded that as number -1 then Dadima's as no-2 nd last KM as no-3 ,, now there was no need to search nd dialled ,, just pressed d no ,, he put d phones on charging ,, then called Dadima on intercom ,, she was up nd replied.

Maan: hello Dadima , GM .

Dadima: GM beta , how is Geet?

Maan: sleeping Dadima , but she was disturbed whole nyt .

Dadima : wo possible hei Maan ,, she faced nd bore d pain .

Maan: I called Dr D at nyt nd he advised to give her a sleeping pils which I took from yr med box ,, now he'll come to see her .

Dadima : Oh!! ,, chalo aane do , accha hei .

Maan: he said not to leave her alone .

Dadima : OK , no prb i'll be with her if u want go somewhere .

Maan: not now Dadima , did u have ur coffee ?

Dadima: nahi beta , daily Geet lati thi aur hum ek sath lety hein .

Maan: Oh !! ( he thought for a sec ) theek hei hum wahin aa jaty hei aapke pass.

Dadima: OK .


Precap --- Maan took care Geet nd planned an outing ...


Maan: humm kya ,, meri GM ka jawab to do , kabhi nahi deti ho , very bad .


Part - 64

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4125567/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-10-updated-pt-65-pg-121-15th-aug


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update😊
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haww... me 3,n 4th aayi.. i missed 1st place though priya is not here,..😭

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