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Nice update.
Hope maan find her soon.
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hello di's
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

where is todays update


yes missing mist geet ...
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waiting eagerly to read nxt update di...plzzz update soon...
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jhappiieess to all my dear friends 🤗
Updating...




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part 59 + 60
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4125567/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-10-updated-pt-65-pg-121-15th-aug?pn=16


Part - 61



Maan nd Dadima wr on breaking point ,, there on land line Aj called nd asked about Geet ,, he too saw d news nd called Geet in a gen way but she didn't pic his call nd most of d time her phone was coming busy tone ,, then he tried KM number ,, Nakul pick d call nd blurt out everything ,, AJ forgot to reply in shock ,, Nakul cut d call ,, hr passed nd there was no reply from Geet's phone ,, her phone was ringing nd ringing .

There Geet was walking along d road not even she ,many more wr walking ,, all wr panic nd wanted to reach at their home ASAP ,, everyone was talking on phone nd assuring their family nd friends for their well being ,, this terrorful act horrified all who wr there or near by area ,, d news of serial blast spreaded nd ppl wr in fear * Geet's phone was in her bag which was hanging on her shoulder nd coz of loud voices of crowed ,horns nd traffic she didn't hear d ringing of her phone even she forgot about her phone ,, her mind was clouded with fear nd horrifying sight which she witnessed ,, she was walking nd walking didn't know how many miles she covered in an hr ,, then a car stopped near her nd a girl slide down d window glass nd asked her .

G: hello , do u want lift ?

Geet looked at her ,, there wr 2 girls in d car ,, well dressed , one was driving nd other was asking to her , they saw a girl walking alone so stopped to help her .( they wr priya nd Lakshmi who wr going to their home 😃)

G: do u want lift ? We cn drop u near K *** sarai , we r going that side . Geet nodded in a yes nd she opened d back door for her , Geet sat nd d girl started to move ,, their car FM was running to get d current news ,, both d girls wr talking about d blasts ,, Gr1 who was driving d car asked to Geet where she was going nd Geet hardly replied SU******* F*** H*****.

Gr2: OK , we'll drop u at XYZ red light nd from there u can try to get any thing ,, though it's tough to get easily in this situation there wr traffic diversion nd blocking many places ,, with in 10 min they wr at d red light nd they told Geet that from here their route was diff ,, Geet came out from d car thanking them ,, they moved on nd Geet saw d bus stop lil away ,, now she was at a less crowded place ,, she checked d time in her wrist watch 9:40 pm nd she remembered Dadima .. OMG!!! She held her head with one hand in fear nd mumbled .. Dadima pareshan hongi mere liye .

She was alone on d road nd heard a faint music tone ,, she looked around but ppl wr at fair distance from her ,, she heard again nd realised that that was coming near her ,, she stressed her mind nd got that,, it was her mobile ,, God ,, she forgot about that ,, she put her bags down nd opened her bag , took out her mobile which was showing Dadima's name ,, she replied at once .

Dadima , hello Dadima ...

G e e t ,, Geet , where r u ? R u OK ?

M a a n ... Maan ,, plzzz mere paas aa jao ,, mujhe le jao yahan se .

Maan( gulped hard): Geet , tum theek ho na ?

Geet: haan ,, Maan plzz aa jao .

Dadima heard Geet voice nd took d phone nd asked .

Dadima: Geet beta , ap kahan hei ? aap theek hei na ?

Geet: Dadima , haan ,, mai theek hu ,, mujhe le jao yahan se Dadima (she started sobbing)

Dadiam: aap kahan ho beta ...

Maan: Dadima , plzz mujhe phone do.

Maan took d phone and reapeted d same Q worried .

Maan: Geet where r u ?

Geet: ye H*** k**** ke paas koi red light hei ,, pata nahi .

Maan: Geet aas -pass dekho aur batao , koi board ya bus stop ?

Geet: stop per kuch nahi likha , aur shopes kaffi dur hei ,, Maan mujhe darr lag raha hai plzz jaldi aao .

Maan: haan mai aa raha hu ,, tum ab phone cut matt kerna , mujhse baat kerti raho Geet ,, dekhne ki koshish karo , kuch nazar aaye to jisse kuch mujhe idea mile .( he took d car keys from driver , start d car nd drove out still talking to Geet)

Geet: wo jin 2 girls ne mujhe yahan choda wo hauz khaas keha rahi thi aur kaha ki yahan se mai khud chali jau per yahan kuch nahi mil raha , ek bus aai wo over crowded thi ,, maan aap aa jao na .

Maan: Geet mai aa raha hu darro nahi ,, tum batao to exact kahan ho , mai kahan aau tumhe lene ?

It was night nd she was out of home at this hr ,, this thing was fearing her more ,, she never go out alone nd always acompanned Annie ,, this was d 1st time she came alone nd faced this disaster ,, she was fearing to talk to any ppl ,, there wr few gents nd boys who run nd hung on crowded bus door nd went , few in a pvt cab in which all wr male ,, they looked at Geet nd she stepped back in fear talking to Maan .

Maan was on d way to that side ,, he got that he was talking with Geet on Dadima's phone ,, he took out his phone nd opened map .

Maan: Geet , meri baat dhyaan se suno darro nahi , aur wahan se hilna matt mai aa raha hun , OK .

Geet: huumm .

Maan: Geet bina phone cut kiya apne phone mei Google open karo .

Geet: kaise , mujhe nahi aata .

Maan: phone kaun sa hei tumhare paas?

Geet: iphone .

Maan: OK , ab jaise mai kahu follow karo ,, call cut matt kerna .

He instructed her steps by steps nd Geet followed them nd there was map of her area which was locating her place .

Maan : Geet , jahan tum ho wahan se apne ghar ki side ka route read kerke batao .

Geet: kya bataun ? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha ?

Maan: Geet jo road map hai wahan ek arrow hei , wo tumhari location hei , ab wahan se ussi road se aage apne ghar ka route follow karo aur mujhe side ka read kerke batao kaun se places hei tumhari location ke paas.

Geet tried to read d map with few tries ,, she was doing this 1st time on mobile so not getting everything quickly ,, after few tries she was able to read d map nd told Maan ,, Maan was quickly check d route nd got where was she ? ,, he got lil relief but he was fearing thinking that she was alone on d road at this hr ,, he wanted to reach there in a blink ,, only he knew how he was controlling himself ,, Dadima called in between nd he said that he got where was Geet nd he was very near to that place ,,, Dadima too got a breath of relief .

Not only this Aj too called KM again after composing him ,, this time Dadima talked to him nd informed that Geet was fine nd Maan went to take her ,, he took d sigh of relief thanking God to keep her safe ,, he talked to dadima for few min , consoled her nd then cut d call saying that he'll call Geet later.


Precap --- Maan got Geet ...

G e e t ,, u almost kill me today ,, don't do this again sona ,, i'll die .



Part - 62
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4125567/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-10-updated-pt-65-pg-121-15th-aug?pn=58


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update waiting for next update
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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wow di...just now said that i am eagerly waiting and u r posting😆
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this is glitter falling objects na..
its not coming for me..tried 2 times..
kya galthi ki mein..
c whats coming for me
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aaj gappa gang kahaan hai..

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