(C4-season2)MG~ Mujhko..sab kuch pata hai..~Part1 -pg7/aug23.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi buddies...
missed u all so much. So here i am back with another OS.
Basically..Its Season#2 of my OS ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke..~
same theme with new story line... And here is the prologue..



A girl was sitting in her room, trying to do her assignment..but wasnt able to concentrate as her mind was preoccupied with something else. She was tried hard to control her uncontrolled thoughts and focus on the book in her hand.. But nothing was working.
She was busy fighting with herself when her mom called from the hallway.. "geet...am going to nisha's house..will be back in half an hour..u lock the door..ok..!" ..her mom shouted before leaving.
"ok..!" geet replied shouting back. As she heard the door being closed..geet suddenly realised that she was left alone in the house..as her mom just went out and her younger brother was already out playing cricket with his friends.
This realisation of being alone in the house did nothing..but provoked her mind furthur..and it again started to bring back the thoughts which she was trying her best to avoid!


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After locking the door, geet went back to her room to complete her assignment...but soon she accepted her defeat.. and now..she sat in the main hall...staring at the land line phone...thinking something deeply.

She looked at the phone unsurely...not able to decide, if she should or she shouldnt?? Her heart was beating so fast with a strange kind of nervousness as well as excitement. She tried to reason with her heart and mind...to which they fought back pointing.. That this is the golden opportunity she has got and no one will know about it!
Sighning she looked at her left palm where a 7 digit number was written..which by now she remembere by heart!
She had got the number two days back...but wasnt able to gether the courage to dail it actually. Now also her heart was beating furiously just with the thought of doing so. But the urge to hear that particular voice was too much to resist.
She still tried to argue..
"what if its someone else number?" ..she pointed.
"u can always say sorry..wrong number..!" heart replied.
"it isnt necessary that HE will pick up the phone..what if someone else did?" she asked .
"so? No harm in trying..atleast once..!" mind argued.
And after much fight..she finally dialed the number with shaky hands. Her hands went cold with nervousness and unsurity as she heard the first ring. She closed her eyes, holding her breath to control her crazy heart as she waited for the phone to be answered.
After three long rings..the phone was answered..
"Hello..?" the person on the other side greeted.
Her eyes shot opened as she heard the familiar voice and recognised it instantly. Ohh..its Him..its Him...her heart shouted in joy, beating ever so crazily. She was lost in the pool of emotions...nervousness, excitment, uncertainty and a little fear.. Her tarnce was broken when that person spoke again..."Hello...hello..?"
and at the same time the door bell rang..scaring the hell out of her. In the fear of being caught..she immediatly cut the call and ran to open the door.


so here is the prologue...do tell me how did u like it...will be waiting..
Shona..:-)



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kamnagupta7 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved d prologue of ur is.
waiting for part 1.
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Cute n sweet prologue continue soon
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hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats on season 2! lovely prologue! update soon! well written
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Hey shona...nyc prolgue...

Contu soon...Waitn ...
Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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interesting prologue...
Geet toh kafi daring hain...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am still waiting for Geet's mom to arrive at my house😆
That is exactly how I talk myself out of thing I don't want to do, including duty phone calls that I do not want to make.😛

Great start Shona. I am intrigued😃
Welcome back.
🤗

Edited by Susegad - 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue...the phone call depicts Geet's longing for Maan...waiting for Ist part...
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Intrstng prolouge wit whom geet is tring 2 talk???
waitng 4 d update 😃
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Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

Loved d prologue of ur is.

waiting for part 1.

thank u so much dear..will update soon..:-)

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