Nice updates...
Sorry for not commenting on earlier updates... Kya kare... Mujhse bada lazy bum tumhe if par Nahi dikhe ga...😆
Coming to the updates...
Superbly written... And I like the pace... You incorporate the past in present so well that I didn't feel like I am reading past...👏
Geet slowly and steadily falling for maan...
Maan's surprise is wonderful... Apn mishty ko khush karna khoon aata hain maan ko😉
And geet reactions towards pari... 😕... I don't know whom to support... Geet kept denying... And pari too should have left her alone for some time than pestering her... May be she would have shared it later...
With geet's words pari felt bad... Of course anyone will... It's very difficult to digest when u r compared with ur bf's ex... But I feel even though geet is close to pari she never directly shared anything to her... Mostly her heart... What ever she knows about geet is through yash... And we would share our heart to someone close not with someone whom we just made friend... And pari and geet's friendship is different... I think pari should know about meera's reaction... Then she will understand geet's stance...
Do continue soon...
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