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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 46


Part - 47




After having his satisfactory dinner Maan went back in his study for further pending work nd Geet spent some time with Dadima , gave her meds nd came back in her room ,, she prepared her lesson plans for her classes nd then made some her notes ,, she looked once at d open glass door , he was not there means he was still busy with work .. Kitna kaam hei ,, aaye hei tabse busy hein ,, she lay down on her bed nd remembered how they slept last night ,, shared a bed having a wall of cushions nd how she went close to him in her sleep ? Even Maan was too sleeping comfortably like they wr habitual ,, she went in deep slumber thinking about him .
Maan came late , he peeped nd came in her room , adjusted her blanket which was hanging down ,, adored his sleeping beauty for few min nd went to sleep ,, he was also remembering his last night , how her closeness was affecting him nd his beautiful morning ,, he slept having a smile on his lips with a satisfaction that at least she agreed to open d door.

Next morning was as usual ,, Geet did her daily works,, check Dadima's sugar(fasting) then went to prepared tea/coffee for both , spent morning with Dadima ,, Maan came for BF ,took arti nd Prasad , had his Bf too with cont. calls regarding work .

Dadima: Maan beta BF to araam se karo .

Maan: have some imp meetings Dadima which wr pending from last two days .

Geet served d BF nd went back , she was fearing that he wd stop her again for having BF ,, Maan didn't say her anything nd quickly finished his BF nd went biding bye to Dadima ,, Dadima was better now , she nd Geet chatted for few min nd then both retired for their respective works * After lunch Geet went to her classes nd came back late eve , Dadima was in living enjoying movie ... Devdas ,, she sat near her , asked about her day nd health then went to make tea for her nd juice for Dadima ,, she too started enjoying movie with Dadima ,, both wr reacting nd commenting on acting nd dialogues , songs nd dresses ,, they forgot d track of time ,, Nakul came to ask for dinner.

Nakul: Geet ma'am dinner mei kya prepare kerna hei aapne bataya nahi ?

Geet: Oh sorry (she slapped her head playfully ),, ye Dadima ke Paro aur DevDas ke chakker mei sab bhool gai ,, mai chali Dadima aap milao inki Jodiyan .

She laughed nd got up to go nd Dadima also smiled nd said ..ku mai kya Chunni babu hun , jo paro gai to candramukhi ke paas le aaya Devdas ko.

Geet: CB,, she laughed ,, waise ho bhi sakty ho abhi to expert comments de rahe thy dono ko milane ke.

Dadima: wo to just enjoying d movie with u .

Geet went to kitchen to prepare dinner ,, she was in a very light mood ,, she selected dishes for Maan's choice nd started preparing ,, Nakul nd other servant wr helping her ,, she was preparing nd thinking about d movie whose song's wording wr lightly audible in d kitchen .. paro -devdas..kya cheej hein dono ,, wo shaadi kerke chali gai fir bhi pagal hei uske peechey ,, are pahle drama kerta to shayad mil bhi jati paro ,, ab uske bare mei soch ker kya fayada ,, CM ko bhi essi devdas se pyar kerna tha jo pahale hi kisi ke peeche pagal hei ,, kya bewakoofi hei ? next moment her hands stopped at d track nd she became serious thinking about her ,Maan nd his lady love..Pari .

A smiled painfully thinking ... kisi aur ko kya kahana , ye story to mere samne hei in real ... yahan bhi ek DevDas(Maan) pagal hei apni Paro(Pari) ke liye ,, aur ye Dadima to sach mei Chunni babu nikli, mujhe le aai apne ess Devdas poty ki life mei ,, wah ! kya story hei ? she left a smile shaking her head ,, she finished her work nd came back Dadima who was now in her room after finishing d movie.

Geet sat near Dadima with a smile to check her BP ,, Dadima was trying to contact some one on phone .,, she tried 2-3 times but that person didn't response.

Geet: Aaiye chunni babu , I mean Dadima aapka BP check ker le .

Dadima: Geet , majak nahi , hum pareshan hei .

Geet: pareshaan , ku ? Kya hua ? she became worried for her.

Dadima: Geet,Maan phone nahi utha rahe , tumhari baat hui kya unse ? tumhe phone kiya tha kya unhone ?

Geet startled with Dadima's words .. Maan ka phone mujhe ? per ku ?

Geet: nahi Dadima , pahale mei insti thi aur ab aapke pass hu , land line per to koi phone nahi aaya ? Nakul se puchu ?

Dadima: nahi tumhare peeche se nahi aaya ,, hum kabse try ker rahe hei lekin reply nahi ker rahe ? abhi tak ghar bhi nahi aay,, na kisi meeting ke liye rukne ki information di ,, agar Maan rukty hei to hume bata dety hein.

Geet: aap tense ku ho rahe ho , shayad abhi meeing mei hi ho aur phone bhi to silent mod per ho sakta hei ,, aa jayenge , relax .

Dadima: nai beta , humne Adi ko call kiya tha office se to nikal chuke time se ,, kahin aur jana hota to hume inform jaroor kerty .

Geet: aap pareshaan matt ho Dadima , aa jayenge , traffic mei bhi to phas sakty hein ,, aap driver ko call kerke dekho .

Dadima : haan ye theek kaha , hum kerty hein wo to sath hoga na .

Dadima called Maan's driver and asked about Maan but his reply made her more tense nd she cut d call after few talks .

Geet: kya hua Dadima?

Dadima: wo to Maan ke sath nahi hei ,, last 3 days se Maan ke sath bahar tha to aaj afternoon mei leave leker ghar chala gaya .

Now Geet too became tense she is worried for both .. Maan nd Dadima ,, she tried to console Dadima to wait for few min .

Geet: Dadima thoda wait karo , ho sakta hei phone silent per ho , apka miss call dekhenge to phone karenge ya ghar hi aa jayenge ,, aap shant ho jaeye.

Both waited for half an hr then Dadima tried again but no reply ,, hrs passed nd it was near 12 :00 , but there was no sign of Maan nd his call ,, now Dadima was hell worried , pacing in d room nd praying for his well being ,, Geet was equally worried , she was trying to pacify Dadima , giving her water nd consoling her , requesting her to sit for some rest but Dadima is Dadima ,, she saw many loses so fearing in her heart ,, her eyes tured wet when she didn't get any reply ,, she was trying Maan's number again nd again , she was on d urge of crying .nd looked at Geet with wet eyes.

Dadima: Geet kahan hei humare Maan ? wo ku reply nahi ker rahe ?

Geet: Dadima , plzz aap shant rahiye , wo aa jayenge , phone kharab bhi to ho sakta hei .

Dadima: per wo ghar bhi to nahi aay abhi tak , hum kaise pata kere wo kahan hein ? humara dil ghabra raha hei .

Geet: nahi Dadima , wo theek honge ,, aa jayenge , kuch der aur wait kerty hei fir police ki help letey hei, aap shant rahiye , mera dil kahata hei wo theek hei , aap himmat rakhiye ,bas .

Geet hugged Dadima from side nd made her sit in d sofa gave water to drink ,, all d servant wr also worried for Maan nd Dadima ,, Geet was very worried for Maan but having a brave face to console Dadima ,, she was feeling a pit in her tummy nd her palms wr sweaty , she clutched her Mangalsutra nd prayed to Babaji for Maan's well being only one thing was in her mind ... Maan kahan ho aap , plzz jaldi aao ya koi msg do .


Precap ---- Maan is back ..


Kahan thy aap , pata hei humari kya halat thi , ek call ya msg nahi saktey thy ?


Part - 48


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