Till daddy comes home - Part 4 (Final) updated pg 15

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lena

@lenageorge

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow nice concept

waiting for d update 😃

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice concept

Very good start :)

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ..Twinkle..
Thanks a lot Cid 🤗 Was waiting for your feedback 😳 Will update soon 😃

phir se thank u😡 u r 4getng ur own rule no sry no thank u abhi update type karo im waitng😳

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congrats Nishi for d ss.

concept is very interesting.

waiting for d first part.😊

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

hiii nishi,
congrates for ur first ss
you vl rock dear
well coming to update
it was fab!!
Maaneet & their little family...i loved it
geet is very understanding wife!!
Aw so little sneha is upset on maan!!!
Can't wait 4 next part

Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 11 years ago

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hi Nishi dear !!!!!!!!!!

First of all congrats darling for ur new start as writers i wish u reach heights of sucess and become
A very marvelous writer
sorry dear for not being there when u started writing...
i told i will not give comment boring one without pictures...but i dont want to keep u waiting for me
i want to support my frnd in her work...so couldnt stop my self

Now coming to OS its a wonderful concept

U rock baby!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww so sad for sneha...maan was not present for award ceremony 😡

I agree he is nd will be busy but his wife and children too is his priority right...

Geet character is understanding ...missed maaneet...hope in next they will be solving their issue
maan should spend time with them...money,gifts any lone can give but love and warmth only parent's time spending with kids can give

Last but not least love u soo much dear...

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awwwe love u sooo much nishi dear 😃

U dedicated for ur frnds 😲 👏

Thanx a lot and love love love u sooo much dear

Desperately waiting for next!!!!!!!!!

Love

Uma

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome concept dr...👍🏼...Maaneet are married with three kids...👏👏👏...their eldest daughter Sneha is angry with her father 4 not coming in her school when she got the award for best student...😡😡...Geet understands her husband's job and encourages him...Maan is a surgeon and Geet an ex-journalist...😎...loved it...❤️❤️...can't wait 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

interesting Start!

loved the feelings of a kid n expectations from her Dad...❤️

would love to read more...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey Nishi 🤗
Wow!! aate hi New SS..balle balle
Loved da concept..Very intresting⭐️
So Maan is Doc n Geet Journlist😛
aww feeling for Sneha..she missing her dada😔
want to spend sum time with him but being doc maan is alwayz busy cant give time for wife n daughter
loved Geet n Sneha's scene..GEet s very understanding Mom😊
waiting for next...continue real soon
Thanks for pm 😊
and Congrast on Ur First Story 🥳n All the Best 👍🏼