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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Now for the writeup.
Kya bolu?

I knew you could create beautiful imagery, but I did not know that you could weave magic with your words too.😳

The kashish that is there on both the sides. Uff. You have managed to magnify the yearning that these two are feelings through your words

Two friends desperately in love... the only thing holding the back is their own fears of rejection.

The titli a magical link between them, if only they knew it.

I have become a fan of your writing Laxmi.😳

But I am putting in a petition of protest.
These two deserve a happy ending.

This cannot end here.
May be a couple more write ups with pics would be perfect.

Superb job on this whole updated, Laxmi.
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
congrats on the new thread!!!!!!
beautiful edits!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
congo for the new thread

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Wow Lakshmi, I love the write-up following your edits.
You should seriously consider writing, I think you will be great.


Wonderful edits!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
very beautifully written, don't let it be a os, please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Wow! Aapne toh kamal kar diya!!
Aap pehle bol rahi thi ki main nahi likh paungi par aapne "na, na karke pyaar tumise kar baithe"...aisa kar diya!!
Mujhe yeh chotu sa os bada achha laga aur siggies was awesome!!
Geet wala part jyada pasand aaya...
Aur naya kya aanewala hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
congrats laks
lovely pics
and loved the write up
kitna jaldi khatam hua
pl tell the titli to convey their message to each other
so next part will be confession...lol..
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
First off all..I want to tell you that I m fida on this bannner😳😳😳

it's amazing ..I lovvveeed it😳😳
congratulations for this new thread Lakshu

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


NOTE

Todays update has a bit of surprise content in it😃
Have tried my hand in writing too along with pics😳
Below u will get to see a pic and then Geets POV and
then another pic and Maans POV...






Falling in love is the most beautiful feeling ... I didn't knew when this happened or even when it begun... All i knew for sure was that I was falling hard for him and could now only pray that he is feeling the same way...His smile makes me shudder...His touch makes me shiver...My heart craves for him more and more...


If I had thought that falling in love was hard, I was wrong... Confessing my love to him is hardest... Though my heart yearns to go to his arms... yearns to tell him, how crazily I love him... yearns to know how he feels about me... Yet I couldn't do that... I couldn't as I fear of losing him...


What if he doesn't feel like I do? What if he hates me after this? What if our friendship is broken after this? What if he went far away from me, so far that i couldn't even reach? Just the thought brings shivers in me ... How could I even survive without seeing him? Without talking to him? Without his smile? Without feeling his touch? I can't... I simply can't...


As a child, I was always fascinated by the fairy tales told by my naani...Among the many stories she had told me, my favorite was one in which prince sends messages to the princess through swans... Though as a child I used to ask her how it can even happen that a swan was made to deliver love messages ... But secretly I had loved the idea and have always dreamt the same to do with my dream prince...


Kaash aisa ho saktha... That I could tell him my haal-e-dil like that... May be like a titli, I can fly over the heights and reach to him now ... and tell him how much I love him... that he is mine... GEET KA MAAN...




Geet... the name itself brings a smile on my face... my only friend...but now she is my love... I don't know when I started falling for her... I just know that I love her... I love her smile... I can do anything to keep her smiling... it seems that my world is restricted around her... I just want to be with her... I want to be the only one whom she looks for when she needs some one or some thing... I want to be the only one who can touch her, the way I always fantasize ... I want to love her like no one have loved anyone ... I just love her...


Though I can scream my love within me... but when it comes to confessing... I fear... I fear of losing her friendship... I fear of losing the closeness which we atleast share now...


I have always been a man of few words... and when it comes to express my heart out, the words seems scarce...Among us, Geet has always been the one who talks... she could even understand my unsaid words... kaash, she can even read my love in my eyes... Kaash , she comes to me and tells me that she do understand my love and she feels the same... I know for a gal, especially for a shy gal like geet, it's a hard thing ... but my heart yearns to hear her love for me from her own voice...


My heart yearns so much that, it searches for geet every where... Even the titli roaming around me, feels to be sent by her...telling the tale of her love towards me ... I wish to run and engulf her in my arms, Comfort her, kiss her senseless, tell her that She is my Love she is mine... MAAN KI GEET...


THE END


Special Thanks to JP (Jeevana) for proofing and also for the concept

JP ... jo juthe chappal milenge i will forward it to u😆


Thanks to Priya for the bg score..

BG: Bann ke titli from Chennai express


Both the siggies and the write up are in my lappy from the past few months... but posting here was really a hard task for me just like maaneet above who are struggling for confession😆... But today i vowed myself that jo hoga dekha jaayega...

My future updates wont be accompanied by writeups... so u all can relax yaar... ye tho aiweii

Eagerly waiting for ur commnets...






and what can I say about this update
it was beautiful..
you edited Geet's picture many months ago.. and now maan;s picture is complementing it perfectly

You know Inka confession padh karr mujhe aisa laga jaise ye mere Geet aur Maan hain jo PV me confess karne waale hain

JP.. thanks to help lakshu and
thanks priya for the BG score
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
loved all the picture/Edit⭐️
Beautiful writeup/OS..loved it so much n lovely BG score 😳
thanks for pm ..waiting for more OS like this 😉

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