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awesome update...👍🏼...Maan tries everything to woo Geet but it flops his plan......Maan sees his photo in Geet's room...👏👏👏...that means I think Geet loves him but is scared to express...😕😕...Maan all set to make Geet his......He called Paddy Aunty to make up his plan...😉😛...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...can't wait 4 the next update......pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part,geet hv put a heavy shield to ptotect her heart..now it is up to maan to break it with love n trust..
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lovely update. poor maan uska sab plans utter flop hogayi hai. Maan sees the pic n the frame n realises who her dream man is! She tells him 2 leave! Maan leaves n analyses! Maan knws wt to do! Superbly written! update soon
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haha maan n his preparations
to impress his wife
all went flop
he came inside her room or first time
n came to know a new geet
the photo frame at her side table made him guilt
what is he planning now
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for the next update already
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part 11
awesome...
hahaha that was so funny...
all his attempts went down the drain...
well its all coz of him that Geet is like that now...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear...maan trying to win geet heart...and his ideas...omg..too funny!!! continuee soonnn dear..
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Ch#12


Maan fixed more than necessary attention on the file as Geet marched inside his cabin.
"tumhare P.A ne btaya kal tum office nhi aao ge"Her challenging tone was proof it was more question than statement.Maan kept down the file lazily & with a surprise face inquired:Realy? Usne aesa kaha?
Geet confused:haan.
He leaned back in his comfortable leather chair & announced:men to parso bhi nhi aa paunga,aur shayd us k next day bhi nhi.Aur usne sirf "Kal" bola? Koi kaam theek se nhi hota us se.
When his words finally made sense to her,her lovely eyes narowed:kis khushi mein?
She wrapped her arms against her tempting bossoms:beemari ka excuse to ho nhi skta kyunke tum mujhe buht fit lg rhe ho.

He stood up,his eyes twinkled with mischief as he replied"thank you" wid a loop side grin.
Her arms dropped to her side,she rolled her eyes but couldnt able to hide da rosy heat of embarrassment spreading on her cheeks.She was looking so lovely in her light-purple sari.No doubt da sari was beautiful,but da fact was too true he desperately wanted it to tear away.Because of the darkness his eyes were not blessed by her view but he had feel it.Her each curve & slope was securly memorized dt he can eaily imagine her without a shred of thread.
She pointed her finger at him in warning to make him stop his teasing game:tum.
but he walked closer & in a whisper added:mein..?

His one word contain so many things.It was a reminder,plea,question,suggestion.Maybe she too was sorting out da complicated meaining of this 'simple' word because like him she too remain frozed.

She punished him.Yes it was punishment,a very cruel one.Last night she didnt stepped out of her room,leaving him alone in a long night.Which after knowing da heavens of her arms felt horribly long.His gaze full of questions hold her eyes"Did u Miss me?"Did u too tossed & turned in empty bed? Or u hug da cushions to ur bossoms imaging me?

He desperately wanted to claim those soft parted lips.Maybe his desire appeared on his face because in next moment she stepped back & looked away.

And he instanty missed it,the beautiful feeling of seeing himself in her beautiful eyes.
The determination gt more stronger & clear"He wants to claim her.all of her".

Last night God blesed his dear heart,there waa no "Other Man" photo was beside her bed.But it can be in drawer or perhaps under her pillow?damn da photo...da real,bitter truth was standing between them.
Her heart belong to some one else.She had been loving that man for years.His blood grew hotter with jealousy.His hands ached to throttle his neck till death.


She kept her hands on da head of one of chairs,to emphasize her impatinnce:Explain.
Maan acted annoyingly patiend:Its simple..jb men Goa men hunga to men office kese aa skta hun.
Geet surprised:Kya?pr tum Goa kyun ja rhe ho?
He sat on da edge of desk:for a break..for a change.sb matters ko ek tarf rkh k,ghoome ka,enjoy krne ka dil kr rha hai..aur.
The queen announced:No,tum nhi ja skte.office men itna kaam hai,Shefali ki shadi ki preparation hai Aur...


"tumhara promise" She didnt utered those last two words but it was clear in her hurtful eyes.

She stubbornly added:apna ye shoq phir kbhi pura krna.abhi time nhi hai.
With that she turned to walk away but had to stop because he grabbed her wrist.

He acted casually ignoring her shock:schedule mene settle krlya hau.Shadi ki preperations function hi ki reh rahi hein..jo last days men hi hong.Aur... tum mere sath aa rhi ho.
Geet in disbelief:Kya?
He let go her hand & got up.Geet:par kyun?
Maan:reason zruru hota hai...time nhi hai.

18 days remaining,ofcourse da real & undenieble reason.

Maan:meri meeting hai.

With that he left.


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There was so much to watch..Lovely dancing waves,da beautiful surroundings,flirting girls,full of fun boys but his eyes were set only on her.Even dressed in casuall white pants & lose yellow shirt she was looking magnificient.Her lovely hairs flying with cool breeze,her pinks lips were pressed together but her eyes seemed smiling.Eyes which were fixed on children who were struggling to make sand castle.Maan took juices from drink corner & walked back to bench & sat beside her.She took it from it & inquired:itni jaldi wapis aagaey?ho gai swimming?
She was happy,da taunting was proof of it.The end of october was quite chilly weather for spending beneath da water.Maan:ofcourse irada tha..I love swiming.jata to ghanto k lye gayb hojata aur tum bor hoti.
Geet added da info:mausam k sath ye side bhi swimming k lye appropriate nhi hai.I know...Because I know swimming.
From da time of their arrival he had imagined her bikni nearly of every colour,planning da comming summer noons together in their pool.

Only if she will accept his love.

They watched together da effort of children.Girls shrieking on da boys for their clumpsy actions.Geet:boys ka bchpan zyada adventourous hota hai.
Maan smiled:khud bhi bhagte hein aur sare ghar ko bhi sath bgate hein.
Geet smiled as a boy pulled out her sister clip in revenge & ran away.
Maan too laughed remembring his own childhood.Noticing her interested gaze he asked:u like baby boys?
Still staring at them she nodded in yes:bachpan men mein hmesha sochti thi agr mera koi chota bhai hota to ghar men itna snata naa hota aur shayd...
She became quite but he could hear da rest of words
"dad ka behaviour mom ki traf bdal jata,shayd u se pyar krte hue mujh pr gussa krne ka time km milta."

Her next words surprised him:But I want a baby girl.
The worst thing in falling for ur bestfriend is u know her to well for ur own good.He mocked:oh? So you can keep her all to urself?
Like an ideal wife she nodded without any fear or regret.The irritation became unbearble so he stated:I am not like your dad Geet.

Her face became pale,still staring away from him she remain quite.He ran his fingers in his hairs in deprssion.His choice of words were too harsh but he wanted to make it clear.Gender of their child will matter nothing to him.He will love her or him because he will be a piece of her,of him.Why cant she see him?

After a pause she looked at him & spoke:ofcourse...he was more handsome.

There was smile on her lips but her eyes held appology.How much he hated da trace of sadness in those lovely ocean.He too join in act & repeat da phrase:No doubt,arrogant dads have arrogant daughters.

She brust into laugh just like she did years ago.He still remembered that rainy night clearly when they had taken shelter from rain under an old tree.In their long chat he reveld her first impression.He loved her laugh dt night.He loved her laugh right now.And he wanted to hear dt musical laughter for da rest of his life.

Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah Tu
Zara Sa Apna Le Bana
Zara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja Tu
Zara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa


To her surprise he grabbed her arm & lead to da group of children.The childrem welcomed da big-uncle help heartedly,unware it was too his first attempt.She had bent near him but kept her hands to her.Like other children Maan hands were covered with sand,matching his messed t-shirt.The wrong pressure caused da prepared block to broke but before it collide down Geet hands hold her in place.

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri Jaan Bepaanah
Fida Hoon Tujhpe
Meri Jaan Bepaanaha

Wooow O Oo O O


He looked at her,she looked at him.She waa about to pulled her hand back when his grabbed it in place.And to assire her to act childish is not such big crime he innocently:You can join..koi nhi dekh rha.
She looked him stunned while the children arround them giggled.He gt a murdereous glare but she didnt withdrew.Her neat clean fingers covered with sand seemed so erotic to him..love is realy a crazy emotion.
The castle was about to complete when Maan one wrong move destroyed all.

Maan instantly stood up to save him from da angry childre.Geet too followed them as dy ran behind Maan.As dy finally gathered him Maan grabbed Geet waist to maintain her balance.Her face was glowing wid da hard laugh.To her surprise hs arms wrapped around her waist & she was raised in air.The children clapped in joy as he swing her in da air:Maannn...bs neeche utaro.mujhe chakkar aa rhe hein.


Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah Tu
Zara Sa Apna Le Bana
Zara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja Tu
Zara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa


He dropped her down on soft blanket of sand he offfered her hand for help whih she grabbed & pulled him down next to her in revenge.He offfered money to laughing children & pointed toward ice cream stall as his sorry.They happily took it & ran away to other side.
When their breath stable they again brust into laugh.Maan breathlessly:you are so beautiful.
On his sudden words she ceased her laughter & remember her messed state.She tried to arrange her hairs but her messy hands made da situation worst.Her cheeks were equally rosy like her tempting lips:A woman can be anything but beautiful when she is sticky & messy.
She tries to wipe away sand from her neck.And gasped when his hand replaced her.His knuckles delicately dusting away da traces of sand from her neck.Wid a confident gaze he assured is:Yes..She is.When da man himself was reason of it.
The way her lips parted he realized she gt da second meaning of his words,which opposite to beach & sand related to bed & passion.His eyes were challenging as he teased her in a breathless whisper:You dont trust me?
Her breathing speed grew but she remain quite.He leaned close so close:trust me Geet..trust me.
And than his lips captured her.

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Pushing da curtain aside Maan asked Geet to come oustside on terrace.Geet who had just come outside from washroom changing in her night attire shook her head in no.Her feet nearly swollwn after shopping,eating & strolling through da roads of Goa.When he again called her there was threat attach dis time:tum aa rhi hoya mene lene aaun?
She went to terrace & her tired face instantly lit up wid joy:telescope?
Maan proudly:zameen ki to hogai,socha thodi aasmano ki seyr krleyn.
She sat down beside him on da blanket,too eager to grab da telescope.He slipped it away from her approach:set to krne do.
After setting it he look through it & dn asked her to look.There was no words to express her joy in words:these stars are so beautiful..dy look so close so real.


Mein Tere Mein Tere
Kadmon Mein Rakh Du n ye jahan
Mera Ishq Deewangi

The snatching of telescope lens continued as dy looked through da beautiful world of sky.But Maan was lost in da magic of her closeness.The way she had restesd her hand on his arm in excitement.Geet:it is so beautiful.
Maan dreamily looking at her:this one is more beautiful.


Hai Nahi Hai Nahi
Ashiq Koi Mujhsa Tera
Tu Mere Liye Bandagi

Geet still looking through it:which one.
He bent his face closer,inhaling her scent:this.
Geet confused:mujhe kyun nazar nhi aa rha.
In the next moment he slipped his arm around her waist & made him slip on his lap.She felt her shiver as their body mold against eachother intimately.In reply to her widend gaze he almost hide his face in crook of her neck:men dikhata hun.

Mein Chahun Tujhko
Meri Jaan Bepaanah
Fida Hoon Tujhpe
Meri Jaan Bepaanaha

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She happpily hold cage of pigeon in her hand & dn in one swift motion she unlocked it & da bird fly away.Her delight was price less so he handed her another one,a pair of colourful sparrows which too in a moment flew away.She didnt remembered how many times she did dis act.When her hand remain empty for a long moment she finally turned her head.Maan pointed toward all da empty cages in shop & show her his empty wallet.Her surprised replaced by a shy embarassed smile.



Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah Tu
Zara Sa Apna Le Bana
Zara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja Tu
Zara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa




Geet stopped at da entrance of church,amazed by da christian wedding going there.Maan grabbed her wrist & to her horror took her inside.He took da seat near to bride & groom so she can eaily hear & see da whole ceremony.Her heart was pounding in horror of getting catch..bt no doubt she enjoyed it.


Keh Bhi Di Keh Bhi De
Dil Mein Tere Hai Jo Chupa
Khwaish Jo Hai Teri


When dy strolled through da park Geet was still scolding him:aese hi kisi ki shadi men ghuss gaey..agr hum pakre jate to?
Ignoring her questiin he gave da man ticket & climb on swing dragging her along.Ignoring da surrounding around she kept scolding:kitna embarassing hota agr pkre jate to.
Maan offered her chips to eat while suggested:neeche mt dekhna.
As universal law she did da opposite & just dn realized she was not in any random swing but in a Parachute.The rest of time passed in her face pressed in his chest with da continued scolding.

After too spicy food & too romantic movie dy decided to tk boat ride.The colourful lights were reflecting in dark waves of water.The motor boat was beautiful decorated with kind of drinks & deserts.Maan stood up for da extra ice,kept away far away from him.As he looked around ,he bent his hand down to touch da water.Geet warned him:raat men pani men hath mt dalo,kuch khath lega.
But as his eyes had caught a thing of attention he refused her order & bent down more.She got up in worry,unaware she need to maintain strong balance on da narrow moving boat.But thankfully he turned at da right time & hold her in arms.Her arms wrapped around his neck & his was wrapped around her waist in supporting her balance.He could feel all da ripness of her curves in her purple silk dress she was wearing.She tried her best to stood up her own but each time she tried she fall on him even more hardly.


Rakh Nahi Rakh Nahi
Parda Koi Mujhse Aye Jaan
Kar Le Tu Mera Yakin

Mein Chahun Tujhko
Meri Jaan Bepaanah
Fida Hoon Tujhpe
Meri Jaan Bepaanaha


His one arm slided to her bottom as he made her stand firmly:Have a dance with me
Geet like always made him realize da logic:I think we are already dancing.

When dy finally seated she inquired:kya milla tumhe pani men?
After a long pause he with drew an oyster from his pocket.Geet in excitement try to hold it but he made it out of her reach.Geet brows knotted:mene oyster kbhi nhi dekhe,I want to see one.
Maan tossed it between his hands:pearl bhi dekhna hai?
Geet in surprise:is men pearl hai?
He kept it on his palm:weight se to aese hi lg rha hai.
Geet desperate:to kholo.
Maan still lost in thoughts:soch rha hun wapis dal dun..
Geet annoyed:tumhe interest nhi hai to mujhe de do.
He moved his hand to her but dn again pulled away:sari mehnat meri aur men itni asani se de dun?
Geet raised her brow & extended her palm:ok than I ll purchase it Mr.Maan.tell me your price.
He hold her hand & kept it on it.Her eyes shined feeling it.Maan:so it is yours...in exchange of a kiss.
She was shocked,maybe on da suggestion or maybe hearing da word from him.
She turned her face away:tumhe nhi dena to naa do.
Inspite of her resistance he didnt let her hand go but leaned more closer:men de rha hun tum le nhi rhi.
When she turned to face him,their noses were almost touching.
The pulse of her neck was visibly throbbing:mujhe nhi chahey.
He whispered with equal assuraty:tumhe chahey.Kiss can be use in bargain just like dy are used in baby-making.
Her voice had reduced:pr mujhe nhi chahey.
The distance between them reduced to hair breadth:kuch aur hi mza hota hai to Open it on ur own & discover da hidden treasure.
Her voice was breathless:pr mujhe
He didnt let her finish:tmhe chahey..Kiss me.
She reduced the distance between them.


The oyster had fallen from their hand,lost in some corner of boat.Her fingers were pressed on his both arm as she kissed his lower lip.Her innocent attempts were undoing him.He hold her wrists & placed her hands on his neck.Unable to bare any more he parted his lips,nibbling his inner lip her tounge made its way.Pulling her in arms he joined her too,their passionate switching of leads continue.


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In Shimla

She marched inside his room:Maan buht bdi problem ho gai hai.neeche Shefali k sath Paddy aunty aai hein.
Maan who was busy in keeping his dressing table stuff in bag.Maan:aunty ko problem bolte hein?
Geet rejecting critiizing on her manners:mene unhe problem kb bola?Wo yahan rehne aai hein..Shefali ki shadi men help krne k lye.
Maan zipped da bag:how sweet of her.
Geet annoyed:tum smjh nhi rhe ho.
And dn she noticed his bags:aur tum ja kahan rhe ho?
Maan:tumhare room men.
To stunned Geet he explained:Aunty aunty hein..yahan rahngi to ghar ka koi corner nhi chodengi.agr unhune ye 2 rooms system dekh lya to...
He looked around da now empty bedroom:bags servant room men rkh denge..tum setting krlena.neeche chlte hein..bdo ko zyada wait nhi krate.


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Shefali:meri skin specialist ne mna krdya tha mujhe out door activities se..vrna men bhi sath zroor jati.
Padd aunty:tumhe kya kbaab men hadi bnna tha..tum Jay k sath jana.
Shefali giggle while Geet kept chewing her toast.Maan:Geet chaey dena..
This time she realy glared at him.Sitting next to Paddy aunty he was asking for everything from her,just like a typical husband.Geet kept the teapot more closer to him.And da aunty again interrupted:arey us ko chey bna kr do naa.
Geet looked at her & dn him but quietly started adding milk & sugar in cup.Paddy:tumhare uncle ko to itni aadt ho gai hai meri hath ki chaey ki..men naa hun to wo chaey hi nhi peete.
Maan boasted:mein bhi.
Still glaring at him she kept adding sugar in it & finally forward it to him.He took one sip & it tk all ounce of energy to gulped down da too sugary tea.
Maan wiped his mouth wid napkin:meri meeting ka time ho rha ..I have to go.
The ladies looked at Geet:tum bhi ja rhi ho?
Maan interrupted:nhi.zyada kaam to nhi hai.
Paddy:to phir aaj hmare sath shopping pr chlo...hum.wapsi pr drop kr denge.
Geet slowly nod.Maan got up:ok bye everyone.
He walked away while Paddy ordered to Geet:wo ja rha hai..usko darwaze tk to chod aao.
Placing her cup down she walked to door where Maan was waiting wid a sexy smile.She didnt speak anything but her eyes were reflecting her anger:have a good day wifey.
With that he leaned closer & kissed her cheek.He left while Geet remain frozed.Paddy voice pull her to present:chla gya...kya aane tk wahi khdi rahogi.
Geet gave her fake smile & joined them.


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