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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Awesome update
Geet now in KC with maan
Maan trapped whom?? :\
Maan marked her there itself :P
Well lift pe geet ko kya ho Gaya?? -_^
Itni besharmi :P ;) o.O

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Ni u stopped at the wrong momemt😳
and by the way was maan dreaming this😉

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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Can't believe u stopped here,uff now how much we have to wait to get an updt of dis to know wat will be happening.,anyways d updt was jst awesome,so geet has joined maan,waiting for nxt part jaldi updt dena pls

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

chalo maan tohkhush hogaya hoga geet ko pakar...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

awesome update! Geet wid Maan in KC! She is giving in easily! update soon, well written

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Is it Rahul? Or her dad?

God now maan won't be able to control

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amreenshameem

@amreenshameem

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

I am sure defo maan is dreaming...

Geet isn't like despondent type so it's a dream...Let's see if m ri8 or not

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

thanxs for such a long and amazing update. Waiting to read more of it.

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

hii.. hw r u? i m reading yr story after a longg time.. after love and hate.. i love that story..

coming to this 1.. v thrilling name of the story.. and must say v good banner..

wohaa.. what a prologue.. yes it is sounding like a Paranormal Love Story. It is dark passionate and intense with secrets within it.

umm.. must say its not easy to digest this kind of story v easily.. dnt get me wrong.. but tillnow we have been reading all those sweet n salty lovestories.. yah some of them have dark sides.. hate revenge anger n all that stuff.. but jumping from human life to a fantacy world is not so easy for me... so bear with my comments..

v thrilling starting.. geet is maan's mate but hes also her protector.. woww.. its tough for maan i m sure.. poor aadi.. wo to naina mom se bhi zyada bechara hai..lol..

btw rudra kyaa rangrasiya se inspired hoke liya hai? i also like him in that serial..

omg.. geet's father is a real devil.. poor geet.. ..

so part 1's 1st half was full of tensn.. but 2nd half was quite funny.. like the way geet ans'ed back.lol..

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mauaa

@mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

part 3

wolf bhi coke peete hai.. blood nahi?? lol..

was that rahul who was taken away by aadi n rudra? maan is too smart.. he really loves geet aloy..

omg.. geet to apne boss pr sawaar ho chali hai.. 1se bd kr 1 gaaliya 1st day hi derahi hai.. lagta hai aaj hi job se haath dhone ka irada hai..lol

not only maan but geet is also full fida on him.. or say on his body..

raat ko ghar se bhaagte time darr nahi lagta.. pr din me thode se andhera hote hi geet ko darr lagta hai.. baat kyaa hai? maan ko pakdne ka bahana chahiye tha?

wohaa.. ending was very very.. i dnt know.. ye geet ko ekdam se kyaa ho gyaa? black magic or smthing..

really interesting.. waiting fort he next part...