MG FF ~DIRTY REVENGE(PURE LOVE)~PART 16~PG 143~THREAD 2 added - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pinku04

part 14

it was just awesome... yaar geet is such a cutie pie... 😳😳😳 just love her...
here maan is busy to make plans to manofy geet.. 😃😃 but she is GEET HANDA ...😉😉 how can she let him go this easily...ohhh god... that mimicry part was too good... lolzzz😆
she cant sleep without listening bedtime story... sooo cute... maan uses this as his chance to talk to geet... coz he is getting restless...😊😊[/B]



ty dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1


simply awesome update 👏😃what more should I say that I am madly in love with this baby geet and this wonderful story 😊but the only fear I have is that will geet loose this chirpy innocent nature of her's due to maan's revenge 😭I really hope not...waiting for more 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

ty priya
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely parts
Geet is so cute nd childish
maan is falling for her
plz let not this revenge come in between them both
waiting for next part
thanku for pms
nd sorry for late
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CoolHania

lovely parts

Geet is so cute nd childish
maan is falling for her
plz let not this revenge come in between them both
waiting for next part
thanku for pms
nd sorry for late


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no need to say sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeyanthi123

nice update..
continue soon
hapie xmas..


thanks
Merry Christmas dear !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
MAAN WENT AND COOKED FOOD FOR GEET
EVEN THEN GEET HAS NOT FORGIVEN HIM - POOR MAAN
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Posted: 10 years ago
~ DIRTY REVENGE ( PURE LOVE ) ~

~ PART - 15 ~



Maan opened his sleepy eyes as sun rays hit the room brighting it . He lazily sat on bed but soon his laziness vanished in air as he looked towards Geet who was crying sitting on bed . He frowned wondering " why she is crying early morning ? " but then tension took over him..


" kya hua Geet..why are u crying " asked Maan worriedly sitting beside her..


" Santa didn't sent me gift this time " replied Geet sniffing..


" now who is this Santa ? " asked Maan confusingly..


" Santa..Santa claus..the one who brings gift a day before X-mas and today is Christmas..he didn't sent me a gift " told Geet crying loudly..


" hmm Geet..sometimes Santa brings gift on Christmas day so now stop crying..he wil send u gift today night " softly said Maan wiping her tears..


" pakka na " asked Geet not unsurely..


" haa Geet pakka " said Maan smilingly..


" toh phir thik hai..I will wait for my gift..Santa jaldi se gift send karna " said Geet closing her eyes while Maan shaked his head at childish Geet..


*****

Both got ready and left to finalise the deal . As usually Geet was giving him silent treatment while Maan was missing her cute talks and chirping . He tried to engage himself in mails but evertime he glanced at her he remembered their last car ride..

*****

After finalising deal , both come back to their hotel . Geet approached their room while Maan sat on sofa near reception area thinking ideas to manofy Geet..


On entering room , Geet grabbed paper bag containing gifts that Maan had bought for her to manofy her which she hadn't accepted earlier . Picking up bag , she quickly took out all the gifts from it and placed them in her suitcase securely and then filled that paper bag with lots of newspapers and kept that on the previous place..


" chalo yeh kaam toh ho gaya..kal se mein inn gifts ke baare mein soch rahi thi and now finally maine gifts chura liye..poor Maan sir soch rahe mein unse naraz hu par sachai toh kuch aur hi hai " spoke Geet . She was thinking about these tempting gifts last night when this scheme of stealing gifts come to her mind and now finding chance she did this..

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Maan was busy comprehending when he remembered Geet talks in flight . He recollected her words . She was saying that she will visit Golden Temple after their meeting . He smiled as plan of taking her to Golden Temple come to his mind . He stood up from sofa..


" I just hope now she starts talking to me after this surprise " said Maan to himself walking upstairs towards their room..


( Babaji half laying on bed eating grapes said non-chalantly " nahi manegi ")..


Maan entered room and found Geet half laying on bed sipping chocolate milkshake and watching cartoon . He was totally amused by her childlike habit of watching cartoons . She so much enjoys watching them totally like a kid..


" Geet get ready..we are going " informed Maan standing in front of her..


" kaha " asked Geet glancing at him..


" kahi toh jaayege..tum bas ready ho jao " exasperately said Maan..


" mujhe aapke saath kahi nahi jaana " told Geet twisting her lips..


" I said get ready Geet and I will not repeat it again " angrily said Maan widening his eyes..


" accha thik hai " meekly said Geet getting scared of his tone.. Both sat in car . Maan was driving the car as Golden Temple was just 15 mins away from their hotel . On reaching there , Geet got really happy and immediately came out of car..


" Geet tum jao mein yehi wait karta hu " spoke Maan..


" aap kyu nahi aarahe " asked Geet geeltting confused by his behaviour..


" I don't believe in God " replied Maan with straight face..


" okk as u wish " said Geet before walking towards temple . She was so excited..


Geet come back after half an hour happily . She sat inside car giving Maan a cute frowning look..


" now plz start talking to me Geet..see I even bought u to ur desired place " pleaded Maan . He is dying to hear her cute talks..


" but u didn't come inside " said Geet with strong tone..


" isliye I will not talk to you..u insulted my babaji by not going inside " said Geet with poutingly..


( babaji with baby face " good Geet mat kariyo iss nalayak se baat humesha mere saath aise hi karta hai " )..


" aacha phir tum hi bata do ki mein kya karu jo tum mujhse baat karna shuru kardo " asked Maan..


" hmm jyada kuch nahi aaj na mere fav singer Honey Singh ka concert hai..aap mere ko waha le chalo " replied Geet excitedly..


" okk madam " happily said Maan starting car..

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" plz help me brother..just dedicate one song to Geet so that she starts talking to me " pleaded Maan to Honey . He made Geet sit on VIP area and then come back stage to talk to Honey . He explained everything to him and Honey instantly got ready to help him..


" don't worry bro..ur work will be done..just relax and enjoy " Honey patted his back and left for his performance..


Maan come back to his seat and found Geet whistling on Honey ,'s entry . He shaked his head at her excitement..


Honey started singing and Geet was goung on gaga over him . She was jumping , clapping , shouting , hooting and dancing on his songs..


" now this special song is dedicated to Ms.Geet from Mr.Maan Singh Khurana " shouted Honey shocking Geet . She gave Maan her angelic smile and again started enjoying..


" Geet ab oh maan gayi naa " asked Maan stepping out of car..


" mein aapse naraz hi kab thi " replied Geet with naughty twinkle in her eyes . As these words registered in his mind , he gave her a angry look and Geet ran inside hotel giving him teasing look by sticking her tongue out..


" Geet tum toh gayi ab " shouted Maan running behind her..


" Geet open the door " exclaimed Maan banging their room door..


" nahi kholungi " screamed Geet from inside laughingly..


" thik hai mat open karo..I am gonna break this door " threatened Maan ..


" aap hotel ki property damage nahi kar sakte " said Geet..


" main kuch bhi kar sakta hu Geet " saying so Maan unlocked the door by applying force..


" haww aapne lock tod diya " Geet made a O shape mouth standing on bed with golu in her hands..


" ab dekho main kya kya karta hu " said Maan gritting his teeth . He strode towards her angrily while Geet was moving back on bed and she slipped but Maan catches her on time . He gazed at scared Geet who kept her head on his shoulder with closed eyes . Both come to their sense after sometime and immediately composed themselves..


Precap - Geet kidnapped


Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳


Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update ...
geet is so smart and bubbly ...love it
eagrly waiting fr nxt
also waiting fr dil ne jise... nxt update plz update soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chauhan1796

awesome update ...
geet is so smart and bubbly ...love it
eagrly waiting fr nxt
also waiting fr dil ne jise... nxt update plz update soon ...


will update dil ne tomorrow

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