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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 24...


Part - 25


Maan finished all d work nd packed his bags ,, he talked to Dadima ,, Dev nd NT too talked to her , they wr feeling low coming back defeated ,, NT was feeling insulted , she felt that Dadima nd Maan r ruling them nd treating them as a looser ,, MSK is showing his authority on them ,, in her views Dev is d 50% owner of KC nd they have equal right on whole property ,, she saw only figure amount of KC's profits not d hard work which Maan nd Dadima wr doing from last many yrs .

Geet nd Arjun met with d concern person who owned d dealership of d company ,, he had two more showrooms in NCR but here he was making his service point with showroom ,, all terms nd conditions wr discussed * It was 5yrs deal with 10% of increment every yr with 2 months security nd I month rent in advance(6 lakhs + 3 lakhs) ,, d tenant bore d construction charge of shade coz they wd make that according to their requirements ,, after maturing d term they cd sign d deal for next 5-10 yrs OR if wanted to vacate d area both d party wd give 2 months notice ,, tenant didn't have right to sign any paper nd agreement regarding d land ,, there wr some more terms ,, Geet sign d deal in local registration office ,, now she got 9 lakhs rupees in a go nd a fixed income of 3 lakhs every month for her ,, Arjun teased her .

Ar: Geet i'm fearing to losing u ?

Geet: why so?

Ar: now u r getting a healthy income for u , so cd leave this small job of teaching in my insti.

Geet: plzzz, Arjun don't think this again ,, this job gave me a lot which I can't describe in words ,, it's more precious for me as compare to this deal ,, u trust me that day nd consider me worth for this job so I never leave this job , if u want to kick me out then that was a diff thing .

Ar: no , never ,, u r like my lil sis nd u can come to me any time .

A&A gave grup hug to her ,, this was her 1st business deal ,, all went in a well known place to take lunch ,, d dealer wanted to gave some part of his profit to Arjun but he refused that politely but requested him to develop s rest of land in a beautiful lawn with fence ,, he agreed nd all went back to their work .

Far away Maan was getting ready to come back india after all most 10 days ,, he inserted his hand in his coat pocket nd find something there ,, he took out that to see nd that was d Taveez which Nakul kept in his pocket ,, he was confused to see that nd thought that when he got that but didn'r remember ,, he thought that may be Dadima kept that for his well being ,, he touched that with his head nd kept back in d inner pocket of d coat with a smile ,, he didn't know that he was smiling after many days ,, they came to airport nd boarded for India ,, he was feeling relaxed at least now on wards he was free form Dev& NT's demands ,, their in India he nd Dadiam kept them in tight noose nd taught them how to earn ?

Maan slept through out d journey ,, he was hell tired ,, there was no routine for his sleep , meals nd rest ,, he worked day nd night which exhausted him ,, after a long tiring journey they wr at IGI airport ,, he called Dadima nd she informed him that driver was waiting for them at airport ,, Geet woke up with d buzzing of Dadima's phone in wee hrs but Dadima gestured her to sleep back ,, Maan , Dev&NT came out after collecting their bags ,, his driver saw him and rushed to him ,, they wr in KM after half an hr ,, Dadima was waiting for them with a Arti thali ,, Dev nd NT wr back in KM nd it was a big thing for Dadima ,, she did their arti , put tilak , made them eat some sweet nd then welcome them ,, Dev hugged Dadima dearly , NT touched Dadima's feet nd she blessed NT nd hugged her too ,, Maan too touched Dadima's feet nd hugged her lovingly asked about her health ,, all came in d living room ,, driver kept all d luggage in their respective rooms,, Maan body was aching nd he was not feeling well so he excused himself to take some rest then he had to go KC where he had a long list of pending work ,, Geet was sleeping nd Dadima didn't disturb her sleep ,, she sent Dev-NT to take rest .

Dadima: Dev beta take rest for few hr then we talk at BF table ,, ur room is ready .

NT nd Dev came to their bful room ,, Dadima re arranged that for them ,, they threw their hand bags , shoes nd coats here nd there nd hit d bed ,, d warm cozy room nd bed charged them nd they slept after making out .

In other room Maan entered in his room ,, his body was aching nd head was heavy ,, he opened his cupboard to change ,, took out his vest nd track pant ,, his eyes fell on d gifts packs nd remembered d day he met Pari nd all d things but he didn't feel any sadness which he felt before , even in last 10 days he didn't remember Pari for a moment ,, he gave a weak smile , changed his dress nd peeped in d study room finding d door half opened but that was empty ,, Geet was not there .

Maan felt an urge to see her but disappointed he took a tab form medbox nd slept quietly hoping to meet her in d morning near pooja room with Arti thali nd prasaad ,, a smile crept on his lips remembering their silent meetings .


Precap --- Maan missed d chance ... Geet ,Dev nd NT's 1st meeting...



Part - 26

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 aaj update du ya chutti maroo..😃



aaj achaanak ye sawaal kyu?? 😈

tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hain😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 aaj update du ya chutti maroo..😃

I have no problem with either of the option
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

I have no problem with either of the option


manmohan singh hei kya..??😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



aaj achaanak ye sawaal kyu?? 😈

tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hain😈


😆😆 hehe chutti ka mann tha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


manmohan singh hei kya..??😆

story ka a bhi nahi maloom na 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳😳 shrthe ka kamal hei kya..??
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳😳 wow!! its so bful..😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 hehe chutti ka mann tha..



mona ka new thread and her pm check ki?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

story ka a bhi nahi maloom na 😛


😆😆 ffir to koi prob nahi...enjoy..

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