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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

'A glimpse n miss!'


For me Jenkyll n Hyde holds good for both Maaneet
as both r trying to mask their past affections n putting up an appearance into reformed persona!
This is close to what I said in reply to Avi's comment. They're both Jekyll and Hyde in terms of how they switch from one personality to another when they're close to each other.
But there were so many instances in this update where for a moment their emotions surface out n in a jiffy it vanishes😕
Be it Geet's wound, her haircut, the last convo in the car and ofcourse it was sealed by the direct declaration of Maan😳

Their awkwardness, their effort to appear normal and indifferent towards their past actually ends up exposing the farce they r trying to maintain.
The pull for each other they experience n the push that both try to give themselves is giving away the whole story😉
Exactly! They're trying hard not to be driven into their feelings or to drown in them... But qismat pe kiska zor hai? 😉
Is Mrs Khurana trying to rekindle the relation by bridging the gap between the 2😳
Maybe! We're with her if that is the case, aren't we! 😃
I thoroughly enjoyed this update
Haaye! I had a faint smile plastered on my face all throughout😊
Maaneet may have sleepless night but these encounters surely sooth us😉😆
Thanks a lot Maari
Already waiting for the next
kab milega😳
Thanks so much, Heytal! It means a lot to me that you're enjoying it! 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 37 - loved the loonngg part...oh...loved vyan again...so much taking care of her...now he is more open to show his feelings towards her ...like pain on his face seeing geet's injured hand or saying he had already has eye on other girl...hope geet could stop him at right time...

aur pata nahi ye maan-geet ka kuch aage hoga ke nahi...mai to kahu geet aur vyan ko mila do...lol..
vyan didnt liked her haircut but he didnt agree or disagree with it...but maan ...he was totally apposit what i thought...he liked her haircut and started flirting too...does he just want to hide his real emotions or want to show what she had thought..
mrs. khurana to dono ko milane ek bhi koshish nahi chhod rahi hai...
oh...again sleepless nights...she always feels intimidated around him
loved the part
already waiting for next


Glad you noticed it was a looong part 😆
It's about time now that Geet talks to Vyan and clears the air.

@Bold: If I act on this advise of yours, you and I are dead meat. 😆
Don't worry, Maan Geet ka aagey bohat kuch hoga. 😉
Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

maan rly so unpredictable...vyan likes her..


Yes, he is unpredictable. Let's see how Geet deals with both of them...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Mari 🤗...how did i miss this update? 😲...so sorry for the late comment 😳...awww poor Geet hurt her hand ...Vyan is all caring...he noticed her haircut but did not give his opinion about it...hmm should we assume he did not like it 😛...they go for lunch and meet Maan... Vyans comment about Maan ...so true 👍🏼...Vyan had to leave and Geet is left to oversee the work...she updates Maan about the progress..how indifferent Maan pretends to be even then the way he was concerned about her hand...the phonecall from Mrs.Khurana...the lady so wants Maaneet together again and she is trying everything to make that happen😃 ...a pleasant evening spent with his family...he is such a different person when he is with his loved ones...the ride back home and their convo about cars and Ryan ...he finally complimented her haircut...the way he said it....ufff no wonder Geet was all flustered 😳 and was sure about another sleepless night...i so love this Maan ❤️...already waiting for the next update...thank you so much for this awesome story 😊



🤗 You didn't miss it, didi! Isliye, no sorry, okay?

It' really pleasing that you're here and enjoying the story! Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

Wat is going in Maan's mind... Wen u wll update his POV


I'm sorry, but I will not be updating Maan's POV. This is the way this story is and you will have to wait and see how it plays the way I have planned.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Update after a long time, and I was about to miss it. Loving this Maan who has different shades and each has its own attraction.


Indeed after a long time. I'm glad you're enjoying it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: farzu3008

lovely update. like always vyaan is a sweet heart. hope he won't face a heartbreak in future.

hmmm yaar i think Mrs khurana is trying to play cupid here.

i thought that maan will not like her new haircut but ye to ulta hi hogaya.

geet still has her hidden feelings for maan thats y she still feels intimated around him. waiting eagerly for more


Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for Vyan, he will not be given injustice, I can assure you. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Ahh... Di u actually gave poor geet another sleepless nite... :-D & I m glad u did... Haaye yeh dono kitna act krte hain professional hone ka, friends hone ka, normal hone ka bt still d tension is so visible at tyms... Vyan ka sochna doesn't matter much to her abt her hair style bt maan's no reaction was somewhere disturbing her... Bt wen he actually commented it made her flustered, rise in heart beat & way to long sleepless nite...

We can give them some kind of awards for all their acting. 😆
Bt Di me sad ek chotu sa glimpse of maan's past ke baad or koi chotta hint nai diya aapne... U see I m always curious & eager & u know it perfectly... Don't u... ;-) well Nw na I hv a question... Maan is totally diffrnt wid geet wen she is wid anybody at all along wid him bt wen dey r alone it seems totally diffrnt maan not old one bt still much sweet & relaxed one wats it??? & is d old client actually can be a real love interest in vyan's life...??? Well I hv quite a lot of questions & only u & ur updates will give me d answers so plzzz jaldi se update kro aapi...
Yes, I know exactly how much of a curious cat you are!
Hmm, something very subtle has been pointed out here. Let the story speak for itself. I can only tell you to read along. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

it was a long and a lovely update mari... thank u...
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Lakshmi!
vyaan ko ithna sweet bat banaaooo... nanne munne bache hum, confusaa jaayenege😆...
Confuse karna hi toh maqsad hai mera 😆
when vyaan went out and maan entered, i was doing a bhangra here😆
Balley balley! 😆
i have always loved maans mom a lot... now her efforts to bring both close is making me love more😳... koi moka nahi chodthi woh😆
I knew it! And don't we all support all her efforts! 😳
if u hadnt put the last portion of maan geet and her curls... mein patha nahi kithne red smileys se attack karthi tumhaare upar... uff from the time geet cut her hair, i was waitting for his reaction... and his no reaction mode was making me definitely sad... but the end... hayyeee too good... wrapping his finger on her curl he was jaanlewa ...
Bach gayi main! 😆 But I'm glad you liked that scene 😃
loving this more and more... will be waiting for the next one... waise howz the wedding preparations going on??

Wedding preparations are fine. So many things to do and so little time on hand...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bina_a

hmm... i read the sequel. i can't believe i finished reading it till the last update!!! i must say wow... I've become your fan now mayyo :) I'm loving the tom n jerry show between maaneet. other than the reason geet gave for rejecting maan is there another reason to it which is yet to bad revealed!! I'm loving the bonding between all the characters. i would here after read this one regularly. Thank you for writing this superb story. I'm loving it :) :)


Thank you so much! I am very glad that you like the story and the characters. I hope you'll continue to enjoy as the story goes on. 😳

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