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Posted: 10 years ago



Thanks priya... For the lovely banner...





Hello friends... Thanks a lot for liking and commenting... 😃... I have replied to all the comments this time...😳... Don't spect it every time... I am still a lazy bum...😆... And I have added those who commented to my buddy list... If any one want PM... Send me a buddy request... Thanks for the patience... And sorry for the inconvenience...😳



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Part # 34



Maan returned and Rohan was waiting for him...


He checked on geet ... She was sleeping in THEIR room... Maan felt happy and went to study... Rohan slept full day and very much awake by the time maan came back from airport...


Maan and Rohan discussed about Anu and meera... And SM...


MAAN - what do you what Rohan... Anu is hesitating Becoz me... We can talk to Malika and prepare meera for the truth by the time of marriage...


Rohan - I know maan... But is it worth taking risk now... What happens if she lost her memory permanently... That will be trouble for you and geet...


Maan - but we have to take risk if ram uncle insists... We have no other choice...


Rohan - I talked to dad... He said to take a couple of days and then say our plan...


Maan - what do you think...


Rohan - I think... We can make the engagement public and have a roka ceremony with close relatives... That might satisfy my dadi... And marriage I can wait for 6 more months... What do you say...


Maan - idea is good... If we go by this we need not tell every one about my marriage...


Rohan - yes... Even if they question about geet we can say she is gayatri dadi's granddaughter and no one will question about it then...


Maan - but there is a problem... If gayatri dadi comes...


Rohan - why...


Maan - meera... She is not ready to accept meera... She is not even ready to hae meera's name... So we have to some thing if we are planing roka ceremony... And what reason We will tell her... It's obvious that she wants to attended the roka ceremony... Even she is designing your dresses...


Rohan - what ... It's not even decided and meera is designing our outfits...


Maan - it's a small attempt by geet... So that she can do some work rather than sitting ideally at home and may be like this she may remember something...


Rohan - umm... So what now...


Maan - there are too many situations... We have to plan very care fully...


Rohan - have got the information about SM...


MAAN - not yet... Sarath didn't call till now...


Rohan - so what We'll call him... He called Sarath...


Sarath attended the call... They had their usual chat and Rohan came to the point...


Sarath - I am sorry maan... I couldn't personally do ur case... As I am still stuck up here... But I gave the responsibility to some one and he will be coming to you in a weeks time...


Maan - what... Sarath ... How could you assign the work to some one else... This is very confidential and I had faith in you... But you gave it to some one else...


Sarath - maan relax... You would be more than happy if you find the person whom I gave the responsibility... The person is very intelligent you know... To get this type of information... He has his ways... Even some times I take his help for solving cases...


Maan - Okk... If you are confident ... But who is the person...


Sarath - that you'll know in a weeks time... I will follow up with him and will tell you about his visit... Ok bye... I have to some where... My job is calling...


He hung up the call...


Maan - what do you think... Who could be the person...


Rohan - I don't know... But I think we know the person...


Rb called and told him of his safe landing in b'lore ... He wished him good night and hung up...


Maan - ... Ok... Good night... I am sleepy... What about you...


Rohan - I have some work... I'll sleep after some time... As I have to go to office as dad is in village...


Maan nodded and left from there...


As geet guessed... After talking with the elders they planned an official engagement and roka for Anu and Rohan... And even Rohan's dad also agreed with that... Anu is also happy as their is no pressure on tension now...


A week later...


Maan came late from a site visit...went to his his room... He entered and saw geet in the dim light... She is sleeping... He made a small sound to know whether she is pretending... But geet made no movement .. He looked the door and kept his mobile on the side table and joined geet on the bed... He slept close to her... Geet was very tired .. She is trying to manage every thing and even angel started to ask geet for every thing... And Sundays or holidays... Geet's is totally in kitchen... Making something or the other of angels choice... And this happened today also... And even every one has become fond of geet's cooking... And she too loved to cook for the family... And even Rohan started with his demands...


Maan kissed her lightly on her forehead and slept holding her close to him...


It's 5.00 in the morning and the alarm sound woke up geet... She switched of the alarm and tried to get up... But maan was holding her and she couldn't move... She saw him sleeping and postponed her plan to get up... She slowly caressed his face with her palm... She is feeling immense happiness waking up beside him... A small part of hair is falling on his forehead stopping her to capture his full face in her heart... She slowly moved the hair.. She moved a little and kissed him on his forehead... Maan moved a little and pulled her more close hiding his face in her bosoms... Geet shivered when his warm breadth fell on her cold skin... She clutched his head more close unknowingly... Maan rubbed his nose and she moaned... Maan... Maan opened his eyes, lifted his head and saw her face... Her face is glowing ... With a cute smile and red hue on her cheeks... He slowly started kissing her starting from her neck... To her cheek .. To her earlobes... Geet just went in with the flow... she loved this feeling maan is awakening in her... Every time he touches in a close way or they get intimate... She is completely drawn into his world of passion... Geet shied... Maan has now become expert in undressing her...


Some time Later...


Maan and geet are still in the bed...


Geet - Maan... Do we have to go to office... I am feeling lazy...


Maan - why geet...


Geet - actually I want to out with you... I really missed you yesterday... And I want to spend more time with you...


Maan - sorry mishty... Now or even till next week it's not possible...


Geet - it's Okk Maan... I can understand... You were in Amritsar and here work must be pending...


Maan - we will go out geet... As soon as this new tender work is completed...


Geet - new tender...


Maan - yes... Govt is planning to build a new stadium ... And is inviting tenders... And we are one of the bidder... So once the work is completed... I will take you out...


Geet - ohh... How much is the govt offering,..


Maan - not much ... I came to know through my sources as the amount is not revealed... ... But it's a challenge for us to do the construction in that cost without losses... We have to prepare everything before hand... So that the cost doesn't cross the budget...


Geet - umm... What about design...


Maan - that Sasha will do and I will finalise...


Geet thought for a while... Maan .. I have a small suggestion...


Maan - yes geet... Tell me...


Geet - I think we must prepare more designs not just one... I know Sasha is capable and experienced... But I think you should give chance to other also...


Maan - it's a huge project geet... I can't take risk...


Geet - where is the risk maan... The final decision will be yours only... I am just telling you to give chance to others also... Sasha is not the only architect in KC... right...


Maan - what is ur suggestion...


Geet - you just tell all the architects on the board to design the stadium keeping the budget in their minds... and the best one will be finalised and they will we be assigned the project... ... In this way you will know the efficiency of each and every architect... And they will also get a chance to show their talent...


Maan - umm... Idea is good... I will discuss with veer ...


Geet - Okk...thanks for the consideration... I was not sure where u will like it or not...


Maan - where do you get this type of ideas...


Geet smiled and said... It's just my collage experience... Our professor used to give us same task to everyone and used to reward the best one... In this way he could estimate out potential... We used to have a competitive spirit and every one of us tried to be the best... I just applied it here...


Maan - you r right... I must give chance to every one equally... This way I can also know about their capabilities... Nice suggestion...


Geet - Okk... Now let's go... Some one will come...


Maan smiled... She was about to go... He pulled her kissed her taking her lips into his... And said... Good morning mishty...


Geet - good morning maan...

...

Meera woke up early... She couldn't sleep after her dream... It's was a strange dream... In her dream... A teenage girls was shouting on other girl... And the smaller girl is crying... Calling her di... She wondered who the girls are...

She couldn't sleep after that... So she woke up and made some designs... She wondered how does she know all these... Might be she studied this... She made some designs for the lehenga ... She thought of showing it to Anu and finalise the design...


She got ready and came out... The dining room was calm... Usually at this time every one will be present... She saw geet taking coffee tray to the garden... She followed her...


Geet took the coffee to the garden where maan, veer and Anu were present... Maan was with his Lappy... Veer and Anu are seeing some file...


Geet gave coffee to veer and Anu and sat beside maan... She handled maan his black coffee... He smiled and thanked her ...Maan showed her something on the Lappy... She took his Lappy and started doing while maan is telling her what to do... And maan moved close to see her work...

Meera felt odd... It should be her... Giving coffee to the family and sit beside maan... But geet is doing everything... She doesn't know what she is feeling... They all are seriously engrossed in their work to notice her...


She saw how maan very casually turned the Lappy into his direction and started typing with one hand and showing geet... There was no awkwardness between the that usually exits between a boy and a girl... They were very casual... As far as she remembers... Geet came recently... But with maan she is casual and close... .. How is it possible... Maan always keeps distance with every one... Even with Anu... He doesn't touch her unnecessaryly... And here geet is ... And being maan's wife she is not able to make that bond... And get close to him...

She silently went away from there with a determination to know more about her and maan's relation... When and how their marriage happened... And whether maan is happy with her or not... She need to know more to make her marriage work...



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Here is the next part...over to you now... Waiting for ur reviews...😳



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Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi indu
nice update
maneet doing wonderful ..
hope maan gets entire detail abt meera and meera soon gets her memory before she create more trouble for geet
want more maneet moments
meera want to know her husband ..

well meera woh to geet ka hubby hai ..


thank u for update
waiting for next
Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oye me first ..
kya baat hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. nice part.. especially Rohan n Maan discussing what to do in future.. hope koi clue lag jaye abt Meera's past... Geet tried on her level to help meera's memory to come back.. Meera feeling odd.. I wonder what will be her reaction after she got to know truth..
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Posted: 10 years ago
meera noticing the closeness btw maaneet... so is the prologue part coming soon 😉
but then still many suspense is yet to come na...
Nice update .. update sooner IA...
waiting for more...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

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use phele kyun nahi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
lovely moments between maaneet
rohan n maan decide to do agement n roka
marriage after 6 months
maara thinking about maaneet causal behavior with each other n geet is doing all work which meera must do as wife of maan
meeara decide to find out how they get married n is maan happy with this
how she will get her memory back soon so maaneet can live their married life with out any hurdle

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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm
nice update loved it so much
meera is making designs for anu and rohan
want more with maan and geet
meera want to know about her marriage life with maan
waiting for next update


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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update... Maaneet sharng a lovly bond... Meera dreamt abt past... Meera shd get her memory soon so she wnt hurt geet n future.. Vl b waitng update soon

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