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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Aur kuch log punctuation marks bhool jaate hain! Phir aadha time samajh nahi aata ki kya likha hai! Have to read it two three times! Phir link tootta hain aur mera interest chala jaata hai!

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

but i never have punctuation marks in my comments
but guess as writer they are needed for sure
okay am gonna disappear for a while
paneer time peeps
enjoy with one another
sorry have to go
or will be hungry otherwise

will still be online though
just wont be able to reply to your comments sorry

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Woh toh hai Di!

Aur ek sachchi sachchi baat bolun, bura mat maanna!

Yahaan ke most of the stories mera dhyaan pakad hi nahi paate! Aur kuch mein toh MG itne out of character hain ki mujhe hazam hi nahi hota! FF ka main point kya hota hai, ki lead characters mein thode change karo but main points ko maintain karo! But yahaan woh toh bahut kam jan karte hain! Ek FF mein toh maine Maan ko womanizer ke role mein dekha! Aur uske dialogues aise the ki mujhe laga hi nahi ki Maan aisa bol sakta hai! Some people write them too out of character aur woh mujhe nahi achcha lagta! I cannot imagine MG at all when I read them!

bura manne ki kya baat hai BB sab ki writing alag hai aur sabki choice bhi
even mujhe bhi sari stories achi lagte hai aisa nahi hai

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

main 10 mins me aayi

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Pata hai English serials ke FFs mein agar writer thoda bhi Out of character jaata haina toh readers use bahut daante hain! isliye mere stories mein koi bhi character OOC nahi hota! I cannot imagine them in any way other than the serial ones!

But you dont worry! Maine Castle, NCIS La, Mentalist, Criminal Minds, aur Sherlock ke bahut saare stories book mark karke rakhe hain! Toh timepass ke liye woh padh sakti hoon! Bas un sab mein ek problem hain! Aur woh yeh hain ki sab ke sab itne badhiya hai! English main language na hota hue bhi itna achcha likhte hain aur plots bhi itne awesome hote hai ki ek baar padhna start kiya toh main stories khatam hone tak rukti nahi! Ek baar toh main DFL ko likhna hi bhool gayi utna badhiya stories hain wahaan! Aur phir raat ko baithke DFL likha!😆

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

bura manne ki kya baat hai BB sab ki writing alag hai aur sabki choice bhi
even mujhe bhi sari stories achi lagte hai aisa nahi hai

Kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai ki main unhein bol dun ki kyun main unke stories nahi pad rahi phir main sochti hoon, main hoti kaun bolne waali! Mere FFs ne kaunse teer maare hain! Itni bekaar writing style hote hue bhi usko mujhse jyaada readers mil rahe hain! Toh iska matlab yahi hua na ki mere story mein hi kuch gadbad hai jo itna achcha likhke bhi itne kam readers hain! Phir main chup ho jaati hoon! Aur kuch uss writer ko bolti nahi hoon!

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Pata hai English serials ke FFs mein agar writer thoda bhi Out of character jaata haina toh readers use bahut daante hain! isliye mere stories mein koi bhi character OOC nahi hota! I cannot imagine them in any way other than the serial ones!
But you dont worry! Maine Castle, NCIS La, Mentalist, Criminal Minds, aur Sherlock ke bahut saare stories book mark karke rakhe hain! Toh timepass ke liye woh padh sakti hoon! Bas un sab mein ek problem hain! Aur woh yeh hain ki sab ke sab itne badhiya hai! English main language na hota hue bhi itna achcha likhte hain aur plots bhi itne awesome hote hai ki ek baar padhna start kiya toh main stories khatam hone tak rukti nahi! Ek baar toh main DFL ko likhna hi bhool gayi utna badhiya stories hain wahaan! Aur phir raat ko baithke DFL likha!😆

castel sherlock k ff kaha mile????mujhe bhi padne hai

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai ki main unhein bol dun ki kyun main unke stories nahi pad rahi phir main sochti hoon, main hoti kaun bolne waali! Mere FFs ne kaunse teer maare hain! Itni bekaar writing style hote hue bhi usko mujhse jyaada readers mil rahe hain! Toh iska matlab yahi hua na ki mere story mein hi kuch gadbad hai jo itna achcha likhke bhi itne kam readers hain! Phir main chup ho jaati hoon! Aur kuch uss writer ko bolti nahi hoon!

m nt a writer so kiski writing style kaisi hai aur kyun kisike readers zyada hai nahi pata
bt ye sach hai yaha kuchh bohut achhe ff hote hue bhi unko likes nahi milte...ff's ka promotion badi baat hai jisse ff sabke pass pohuche

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

castel sherlock k ff kaha mile????mujhe bhi padne hai

Fanfiction.net pe! Main toh saalon se wahaan HP ke stories padhti hoon! Awesome work! Mazaa aata hai! Wahaan Tv Shows ke section mein jaao aur show ke naam ko choose karo! Navigation bahut aasaan hai! Aur wahaan filter bhi hai! Jise click karo toh filters select karke aapko jaise chaahiye waise stories dhoond sakte ho! Jaise completed ya WIP! Castle ke ya Alexis ke? Romance ke ya mystery ke? Filter mein sab option hai! Awesome site hai! Main toh wahaan pe 2004 se hoon! Aur kuch samajh na aaye toh mujhe bataana! Udhar mere account mein maine mere favs mark karke rakhe hain! Aap wahaan se bhi direct pad sakti ho!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

m nt a writer so kiski writing style kaisi hai aur kyun kisike readers zyada hai nahi pata
bt ye sach hai yaha kuchh bohut achhe ff hote hue bhi unko likes nahi milte...ff's ka promotion badi baat hai jisse ff sabke pass pohuche

Par promotion aur kahaan karun? Sab jagah toh bata diya! Aur mera Index dekha hai, kitna informative rakha hai! Phir bhi khaas response nahi! Chaddo! I have stopped thinking about it! Jisne nahi padha uska loss hai! Aur yeh main ghamand se nahi keh rahi! Jitne bhi log ne late padhna start kiya sab ne yahi bola ki maine yeh FF ab tak kaise nahi pada? Woh sunne ke baad ab toh mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai ki loss unka hai mera nahi!

So forget the topic and lets move on! Aapne FF.net check kiya?