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Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have got another jhatka for you! Shall I tell you?
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

I have got another jhatka for you! Shall I tell you?



will i be able to take it
well tell anyway
or you might not be able to sleep
just kidding
Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am thinking of starting another story! And before you start shouting please note that I am just thinking! Not decided! 50% not doing, 50% doing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
so another story
not bad
i wont say anything
who am i kidding
i reallt would have jumped down your throat
are you insane woman
as it is your wrist is in pain
and you wanna make it worse
what were you thinking
ahhh had to get that off my chest
sorry for being so mean and rude

you are never gonna speak to me again arent you
oh well it was fun while this lasted
take care

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok! Lets see your reaction for my next few lines!

This story is not for readers! it is for me! I want to see if I can write such kind of story! It is realistic and not at all filmy like my stories till now. It wont have banner or songs or VMs or anything like that! It will be my first attempt to write story realistic and emotional. It is for me! I will think of banner later on but right now my mind is against banners and all! The story is too painful and heartbreaking to have a banner as banner means commercialising it and I dont want to commercialize it. If you want songs and all, read my other stories!


First thing first, every story of mine has been planned from start to end. This one is not! When a story comes to my head, I sit and plan it. This one refuses to get planned. It just begs to be written and promises that once I start writing it will take its own shape and give me a wonderful story! I dont know what happens next, I only know that it will have happy ending!

Also most of the time I take readers' ideas and suggestions into consideration, this one will not have that! No never! This is my story! I dont care if I have readers or not! I just want to see whether I can write it or not! It is a challenge for me! So this will be the way I want it! If people dont like it, they can stop reading it! I wont try to please every one of them!

It is on Maaneet and Arshi! It will be called Haunted Eyes and Broken Souls!

And this will be updated once in a while as I am writing this for me and not for others, I dont care about when I update or whether others want an update or not! I will update it when I feel like it, whether once in a month or once in a week! Keep on demanding for update, I dont care!

I generally try to reply most of the reviews but in this one I wont do that! I will Just press like and only reply when there is a question! No teasers or games to woo readers! I dont want readers! I just want to write it down, readers will be more like bonus!

Phew! Now tell me your views!

P.S. It will have happy ending though! Pakka waala promise! I cannot bear sad endings so will not write it!

P.P.S I know the tone of the post is angry but I am not! Just trying to show what I think about it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so another story
not bad
i wont say anything
who am i kidding
i reallt would have jumped down your throat
are you insane woman
as it is your wrist is in pain
and you wanna make it worse
what were you thinking
ahhh had to get that off my chest
sorry for being so mean and rude

you are never gonna speak to me again arent you
oh well it was fun while this lasted
take care

Not at all angry at you! Just took time to reply! As you can see kitna bada reply likha hai!😆
I am just thinking! Not sure! And it will be on my pace, mood aaya tab likhungi, not when I feel guilty for making readers wait! Most of my updates are fast, because i feel guilty in making readers wait! here that wont happen! Will write when I want to write!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god she is still talking to me
bless the lord
emotional matlab tears running down from face
chalo yeh bhi try karte hain
i never said you wont be able to deliver it
just worried about your wrist
rest i know you rock just about anything
so no worries from my side
but careful for the wrist okay
that you musnt compromise on
kya baat hai shorter than dh dh
well you are convincing me more and more
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Also each update will be short and have only one or two scene in it! Some updates might be shorter than Dh Dh updates!
Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

thank god she is still talking to me
bless the lord
emotional matlab tears running down from face
chalo yeh bhi try karte hain
i never said you wont be able to deliver it
just worried about your wrist
rest i know you rock just about anything

In the serial, Khushi was naive simple girl, Maan was a strict guy, Arnav was the broken one and Geet had a horrible past but in my story, all four will have horrible pasts, broken life, and haunted eyes. The story is about how all four heal each other and move forward. But that does not mean there will be no dramatics in it! It will have lots of dramatic scenes but the story about their pasts especially the girls is something that many girls in India face! It will be realistic and very drab and dreary compared to my other stories. And dont expect comedy at all! It is simple sweet story about four people who have been broken by betrayals and hurt in their life and how they become each others' support! It is truly beautiful story basing on the idea but I want to know whether I will be able to write it as beautifully as I thought of it. That is the challenge for me! If I did it, then I will gain more confidence and write my first original story called "THE SIX SEATER" which is drawn from my college experiences and has the same realistic emotional feel that this story has!
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
just to let you know with these am bad at
realism and me dont seem to go together
if it doesnt make sense to me can i ask you to clarify please

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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