THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168 - Page 115

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaan

such a cute happy ending for a story
loved the rain connection btwn maaneet n the line u mentioned
** The rain, a way for the
sky to meet the earth and
become one with it.**
thats really awesome u included many of the ppl here in this ff
loved each n every bits n parts of this stry
n thanku fr writing this wonderful ff dear
lots of ❤️ n huggs

thanks Sneha 😃
I am glad you mentioned that line 😃 I liked it too
Do read the next story too
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Posted: 11 years ago
yayyy u started a new story..
link kaha milega [:D/]
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Posted: 11 years ago
is there any thread fr all ur wrks
Edited by snehaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i want to read this awesome story of yrs. pls give me links
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 100

sorry to late reading...i was met a minor eye surgery n was under eye rest...

its really a dreamy morning...all the passions...naughty khuranans n poor bua...
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Posted: 11 years ago
its such a beautiful epilogue...i think i cant justify it as words...n th last para...ur own words abt ur characters...really awesome...its really a wonderful jorney wth this ff...great work...great characterizations...each n every character..loved thm all...n th new characters also...shachin my favourite as well...laughed most to read named by dev his own children...he is indeed something...missed them all...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Avi 🤗...how are u?...hope you are having fun with family and friends...missing u here...the summer has officially started ...it is super hottt...is it nice and rainy there?...left a couple of comments for you...do check when u have time....





Enjoy your vacation...love uuu...tc 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366cc">Hi Avi🤗...how are u?...hope you are having fun with family and friends...missing u here...the summer has officially started ...it is super hottt...is it nice and rainy there?...left a couple of comments for you...do check when u have time...</font>.





<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366cc">Enjoy your vacation...love uuu...tc😊</font>

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Having fun but melting like ice cream in the heat 😆
Very limited net inthis area so I'll catch up soon
Thanks dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avii🤗...awww it is hot there also...glad u are having fun...come here when u can...will be leaving notes for u...lot's of hugs and kisses...tc😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This would be the first time i m calling Maaneet SR as beautiful n passionate instead of hot. If their journey was perfect their becoming one by soul was no less too with only love overflowing through their gestures n actions. This couldnt have been described more beautifully. It was blush-licious totally. And i have never written so long long comments on a passionate Maaneet ever in any story, this is first where i dint hesitate to write essays on them n their desire, you made me a besharam like Maan, LMAO.









The first morning after their fist wedding night felt real n no fiction. I guess i never read scenes which felt so realistic n so natural. Rain was the witness of their whole journey, it made them friends, even when they had expressed their feelings it was raining, when the MUs were cleared n he came to HP to win over her again it was raining n even now when they have become one n are going to start a new life as a married couple its raining again. Rains had always been a companion to their journey from becoming friends till their togetherness n will always be there further in every moments of their journey. I super loved the update, Wonderfully described every damn scene.










Awwwieee Sachin was the cutie pie n the way he cares for his Gith was so adorable, so Maaneet are pregnant again that is why Mrs.Giit Khurana was frustrated warna i was really thinking Geet and frustrated yeh kab hua? But giving her pregnancy i get her mood swings. And cant believe Dev-Tara had 3 babies already with 4th one coming n 5th one on planning? Cricket team banana hai kya? Anyways that putting of bindi on Geet n filling her maang was one thing i always wanted to see in GHSP after their marriage done daily by Maan. I remember there was the scene too before marriage where Maan puts bindi on Geet n says he would be doing this everyday but that scene never happened ever in the show, i so hate when CVs dont remember such small detailing of their own scripts. Chalo choddo the show has ended long back n still here m talking about my dream scenes which are now just impossible.


So its Pinky-Adi's Manav where as Sujal-Kashish's Kajal (loved the mixing of their names they had for their daughter), Megha-Kabir's Bindu, family has grown so big in this 4 years with some more members coming soon. But in all these names my favorite were Karan and Jenny since m a big DMG too but more of a KSG phankha. And yippe at Teji-Pari engaged, now this story is complete with everyone being so happy happy with also Maithili n Sid being just friends.

I so loved to read the glimpses you gave of Maaneet's past life in those 4 years after their marriage. The perfect n passionate Honeymoon seeing the world hand in hand going to destinations after destinations n fulfilling dreams. But Switzerland wala destination which they had in one of their honeymoons in past was of course the best since Maan had dreamt to get his Geet here even before they started their journey n also cos Geet confessed her dream of having a little Maan here. Their life couldnt be more perfect than this sacchi for the hardship n hurdles they went, this life was pure heaven n blessing them with another baby girl Sur n seeing them so happy n content just made me happy. And at last i had tears seeing that Maaneet pic at end in hosipal carrying their baby, that pic/scene still manage to bring teary smile on my face, i guess thats Maaneet magic.




How much i have loved reading this FF Avi, i guess i told that in my long essay types comments already but still for the last time i would say its one of the best FFs i have read so far. The beauty of the FF is you n the way you have penned down every scene which touched my heart so deeply. You made me fall in love with every positive characters n hate me every villains. But of course my most favorite were Maaneet n Dev-Tara. This is the first story where side characters were also given so much importance n were connected to leads in some or other way which makes it so unique n special in its own way. This story definitely comes in one my favorite Maaneet FFs. And Thank You for writing such a beautiful piece of story n sharing your creative imagination adding with some amazing songs n shayris with us.






-Sanjana!

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