THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168 - Page 10

Awesome and beautiful update and the song. so serene and so pure is their love for each other. no words to describe your imagination dear

Awesome n lovely part...its more of a cute n sweet SR rather than hot...but I loved it to the core coz its so tender n romantic

very beautifully written sr .

It was a lovely update. Finally Maan and Geet are one and their journey begins😃

Beautiful update.. Cant have words to describe it.. The poetry was awesome.. Geet was little nervous and maan did little nautanki to make her at ease then he remove her solah shringhar.. Then they move towards their ultimate goal to become one.. Thnks 4 18+ S.R...
N thnks for pm..:)

lovely update. at last they became one in every aspect. update soon.

A part of me always somehow knew that the day locket would be near its end I will be crying. But that amazing writing of yours di!!! It was so beautiful, as if It was a beautiful poem and not a part of story. your writing, the shayaris and pictures, it was like I was in some other world, their world of Maan and Giit. I loved their love right from the start and they finally were one in all senses... Loved how he eased her and cared for her even at the heights of his desire but then I don't expect anything lesser than that from Maan. It was beautiful but somehow incomplete. I mean that's the beauty of your writing that Dev and his I-star had become an integral part that even while reading about Maaneet I kind of miss them. I loved it a lot di!!! And do update soon...

wow Avi that was so beautiful so lovely

Beautiful... You holds the same tenderness and romance even in SR which is the best thing about your story... Totally Adorable

i loved it.oh my god the shayari.they gave me goosebumps.i am going to miss this story yaar.