THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mayyo

😃


Ik baras puraani ye baat thi
Dil ko chhoo jaaney waali
Ik khubsurat daastaan-e-hayaat thi...

Wo begaani si ladki aur wo deewana sa ladka
Inki beintehaa mohabbat ki
Kuch anokhi hi shuru'aat thi...

Chand qadam wo aagey rehti
Aur peechhey wo khhicha chala jaata
Kitni haseen wo raat thi...

Bepanaah ulfat thi maujood lekin
Judaai ka gham bhi sehna pada
Qudrat ki kuch ye bisaat thi...

Izhaar-e-ishq jab kar chukey wo
Taaro'n ki baraat thi
Ik dujey ki baahon mein nijaat thi...

Dil ko chhoo jaaney waali
Ik khubsurat daastaan-e-hayaat thi
Ik khubsurat daastaan-e-hayaat thi...



👏

am going to post it inside the update now.

Thank you Mari🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: dqno1




👏

am going to post it inside the update now.

Thank you Mari🤗



It's for you, so post it wherever you wish. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
The most beautiful sr ever written, so much putirty and sensuality yet not vulgar .will miss ur writing style
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




CONGO AVI FOR THE NEW THREAD

GRAND WEDDING CONTINUES😳



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Good one Lakshmi 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Deelight

<font color="#000099"><font size="6" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">tat was sooo damn romantic.. totally luvd it..

it was a mindblowingly freakishlyawesome update
luv is in d air

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dis update l b d most unforgetable update!!

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Thanks so much

Glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: fict

mind blowing update. Sooo romantic. loved it.perfect👏



Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: swatikgupta

lovely update...
no words to describe about ur writing...
its simply awesome...
continue soon...
not sending any crying picture... hehe...
take care...



Thank u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: achu66

Loved the update
Thanks for the PM
Wow maan makes geet's all dreams reality and geet also give surprise to maan by sitting as a bride and also by writing her name as giit in mehandi
They are really made for each other ...
Thanks for giving the details about solah singar. Waiting for the next part



Thanks so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: bbindu

Awesomeupdate!


Finally, the wait of so many years is over and they became one.

very beautifully written.



Thanks Bindu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Deepabhargav

The most beautiful sr ever written, so much putirty and sensuality yet not vulgar .will miss ur writing style



Thank you so much 😃

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