MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Nice update, geet's father came to know about maaneet , and he beated geet too and her family insulted him but still their love is intact, precap shocking past mei it look like geet misunderstood his relation with meera. Present wala precap is awesome!!!

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

awesome update dear, waiting for update..

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Nice update dear how can a father tourer geet like that Mann asked right cont soon dear

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Nice update maan confess his felling to geet but geet father come to known about maaneet waiting 4 next part

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

part 16

Maan - mere baap mere ko kuch zada nahi de sakta likin na usne apunko ek cheez di hai freedom jo tere ko kabhi nahi mil sakti ye logo ke beech ha lakin ye ghar se baahar main tumara abhi bhi intazzar karunga geet ku ki teri sachai teri aanke bol rahi hai muze kisi aur ke words ter mhoo se nahi sunene hai muje sunana hai such tere wala na ke tere baap wala

Maan went near mohinder handa bacho ko marna wo bhi geet jaise sidhi ladki ko he smirk like tonting bahot bada failior ho app baap ke naam se .. mohinder saw smile on geet face , maan went away from there next few days hell for them dev also try to make him understand and all went in drain

mohinder dont allowed geet to go any wear alone only music calss she alon for three hour

maan went near class and try to talk but no use meera di s top him and say tum bahot chote ho ye sab baat ke liya

maan - chote hai naa samze nahi hai hum

meera - usko aur maar milegi maan

maan bas ek baar dur se hi dekhane do

meera pointed to window and maan eyes turn teary his love in so much pain lost somewhere it hurt him he is so helpless first time he feel eduction money kya hot hai life main he first time feel geet ke liye sahi wo serious hona chiye tha study main

pream ki yaatana

next few days hell for maaneet he only watch her from distance he look how she turning pale day by day some time he want to run to her took her in his hug and hide her from all
world away from aall sabko sirf society , statute iski hi padi hai ...

Maan want to hide her from all this world it is so painful to look your life like this a away from all happiness feel like pata nahi kitane dino se bimmar ho a lifeless body without soul

Maan want to burn all world he feel so helpless and cant share his problem with anyone in between meera and maan start get comfortable with each other maan always feel some pain big pain he try to ask her but she cut maan and change the topic

One day maan returning back from geet house area he stop near meera house he saw a man entered in meera room he get tense who is going in meera di room at this time he went near her house and try to look from window and land accept from maan foot its its DEV HANDA geet big brother

Dev try to hold meera hand and she push him and next moment dev push meera to wall and kiss her with so much force maan want to hit dev but stop in his place when he heard meera word ku dil tod diya tumne mera ku chod gaye muje aise ku why should u went away why

Maan get all pitcher clear it means shakal first target is Dev and Meera truth is so nud* one person zid making other life hell now maan get pain of dev and meera eyes ...

Maan silently went away from them he is in deep thought dagdu house near by di house maan went there he can watch meera house entrance from there and dev come out from that door at 5 am in morning dagdu word make him alert

Dagadu - lagta hai maan di aur dev ke bitch main bahot kuch ho gaya hai

Maaan look him with question mark

Dagadu full confused ke what he say to her ye dada banke area main ghoomta rehata hai lakin pata kuch bhi nahi iske baaramin maan he say main sirf itna hi blounga ke jo bhi hua acha nahi hua hai wo shakal chup nahi baitne wala muje dar lag raha ahi meera di ke liye

Maan - mummer hu ...

Dev enetered in his house and found his parent waitng for him along with geet and his state handa get what happen with him ,mohinder handa march to dev and slap him hard

M. handa - bas apni hi padi hai ma , baap , sister kuch farak nahi padata na
Us dayyana ne apne rang dikha diya na dosh to uske khoon main hi hai

Dev - roraared in hig voice BABA wo meri honewali biwo hai to bolne se pehale soch liygiye ke app kya bol rahe ho

M.handa stunt with dev ans he first time talk with him in this harsh tone ,dev just went from there he don't want to creat any scen in front of geet

M handa cluth his hand it is big insult for him and all because of that maan he look to geeet and call ager aj tumane main bola waise nahi kiya to tu apne maan ke sath apne ma , baba ko bhi kho dogi tum

Geet land skip with her baba word ...she cried out na baba aisa mat karo wo mar jaayega , chiye to hum yaha se dur chale jaayenge kahi dur bhai ko bhi main smja dungi lakin aise mat karo she cried her heart beg for maan in front of her baab and ma but mohinder don't change his attitude he say geet now u have to decide what u want your love or your parent

Geet fail in foot of mohinder and cried app jo chiye hoga alkin maan ko kuch mat karma kuch mat karna

Maohinder took her to maan house and start to aligance against maan in front of door of maan house he make big tamsha of maans baba and sis and last blow from geet when maan come fornt and ask geet ,stop her baba or eles

But geet ans make him dead in his place

Geet - sach to bol rahe hai mere baba ek taraf muje pyyar main fasate ho durse side us meera ke ghar raat bhar kya sikhane jate ho maan

Maan - dead that time when geet say those word maan father come closed to him and shake him maaan maan kya bol rahe hai ye log bol do ko ye sab zute hai please bol do maan father start to cry please maan meri izzat ko aise mat utaro ek wahi cheez hai mere passs mera self respect please bolo maan ye sab zute hai

Mohinder - wo kya bolega kuch nahi uske pass bolne ke liye ask him wok aha tha kal raat bahr maan look to mohinder with sigust maan get that mohinder get know about meera di and dev so he is here...but why geet saying such things why ...ek baar apun ke ankho main aanke dale ke dekho geet ek baar sirf ek baar

But geet don't look to him till her father took her away

Maan father and sister went inside without any word

Adi , Vicky dagdu all gather there they scare with maan and his father silence adi thought today they took maan with them but that is big mistake of adi life big mistake maan who lifelessely follow adi and sit like ston in house

Next day dagdu come there with pinful face his face saying that something big happen and maan run to his house like mad person and stop near his house there are police and so many people

Maan mummer ganpati bapa nahi ye mat hone dena but maan bad luck his ganpati bapa turn back to him maan with shaking leg entered in house and found his baba and sis dead body ...on floor he slup on floor one tear not coming from his eyes his face and eyes turn cold emotionless like dead body

Prem ki yaatana

Adi try to make him cry but he not cried once once

Other side geet walk lifelessly to her house where big strom waitng for them
In her house dev packing his cloth he going away from them ...mohinder try to stop him and run behind him and both reach near door mohnider say geet ask your bhai to stop

Geet look to dev and say bhai jaldi jao apne pyyar ke pass ku ki hamare baba ne meera di ko batchalan girl banya maan ke sath sath

Dev eyes winded in shock and he look to maohinder with pure disgust ,ha bhai main bhi unke kehane pe aisa waha bol diya alkin ap jao apne meera di ke pass please mera pyyar to khatam ho gaya app apne pyyar ko bacha lo bhai please

Dev in shock start go back he is in so shock and don't know when his back touch to railing of galiary and next moment dev on floor with thud from 4 floor

He fail down geet run to him but it so late so late dev all in blood on land ...bolte hai upper wala jab justice deta hai to wo puri tarah deta hai usne sabse badi saza di mohinder ko jo apen bacho ki zinda hoke bhi zinda nahi paayega ...bezaan jinda lash dev and geet handa

Geet come out in present with shock all she look in sleep her dark past she drench in sweat she look around she is in hospital near dev bed

She took deep breath and look to dev same time she found hand on her shoulder and she closed her eyes in pure disgust

She stand and push that hand say how many I tale u don't try to touch me mr Brij

Brij is office staff of hospital who have lust ful eyes on her he bagging her for marriage but she hate him

Brije say with smirk hum nahi to kon chiye wo raat ka labhi gaadi wala
Geet get confused with his talk what he saying she say ..please live me alone

But brije hold her hand and before geet slap him brije on floor with powerful punch he saw who hit him that is same last night man who standing near geet yesterday brij march to hi oyye kon hai tu

Maan - who r u usne bola na don't touch her

Brije ku tu kon hai bolne wala teri kya bolu biwi to nahi hai behane to ho nahi sakti to kya rakehel hai kya ...till now so many people gather around them

Maan again puch him hard but brije next word arre itna bhadgta ku hai main 3 saal se uske pitche hu tuze chiye to bol pehale main enjoy but next word dided in his mouth because maan hit him hard maan found small mandir their he march there and took sindoor in his hand and feel geet maang with that before any one get maan announced she is MRS GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA SO aage kuch bole ne se pehale 100 baar souch lena

Geet who all frozen in her place put her hand on head she is in so much shock don't get how to react kya hai ye ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

me first

part 15

well written.

Maan adi se poocha titanic kiss seekhna hain...😆...

Geet ko onion ka smell while kissing😆 thankgod wo dream tha...😳

Geet came to meet Maan, lekin geets dad😡

Geet told what her dad ask her to do...😕

Part 16

Geet ko uske papa ne ghar main jail ki hain😡

Geet put all allegtions as er dad told...

Maan ka father and sis 😭...pst is so pain ful...

maan ne geet ki maang bari😃 geet shocked

Edited by svani - 10 years ago

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

awesm part mahi maan is watchng geet chup chup ke nd cryng 2 c her like dat😭

maan came 2 knw dev nd meera nd wrried 4 meera😭

mohinder playd his dirty game nd made geet 2 tel all those things which she didnt wantd 2 tel he such a🤬

maan's father nd sis is dead

geet tld dev abt mohinder's plan nd also tld 2 go near meera👍🏼 bt dev fell down😭

brij troublng geet bt maan came der😃

when brij askd abt maan nd geet's relation maan filld geet's maang nd made her as his👏

ab geet Geet Maan Singh Khurana ban gayi😳

waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

wow mommy... kisss season chkl raha kya 😛
pehle yodha me firr yaha... hayyyeee
me 😳

the kiss was so innocent...

I hate geets papa from starting... par uska name tho shakal tha na... suddenly mohinder hanada kaise hua

geet lied... but I know it was to save maan...

loved the scene where maan mocked geets papa for hitting geet... MSK ka fist sign... me

awsm upd 👏

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icskwt

@icskwt

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#749

both the parts are wonderful mahi...oh so much happned in the past just because of geet father...hate that man how could someone can do these to his children...oh felt bad for maan also he lost his father and sister...

and geet maan singh khurana????wao...great...

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

Awesome update mahi👏
it is really very emotional update mahi...
past
ho god yeah sab kya hogaya maaneet ke saath😭
maan geet ko chup chup ker dekh raha tha😭
ho god maan came to know abt dev and meera...
ho god mr.handa itna gir kaise sakthe hai yaar...
he made geet say all those to maan and meera 😲😡
ho god maans dad and pinky died 😭
ho god how can this man handa being a dad can do that 😡
ho god poor geet cant do anything helpless yaar but she still said dev to move on..
OMG dev fell from 4th floor...😭
present this brij ha 😡
how can he talk abt geet like that..
but happy that maan came at the time
😲 maan filled geets maang👏
thank u sooo much for this super update mahi🤗
love u dear...
continue soon...😃

Edited by gunjar - 10 years ago

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