MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

part 13
nice...
poor Geet...
Dev is like that?
what happened to them?
Maan too saw them like that...

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#732

part 14
nice part...
Geet confessed her feelings but Maan gadha didnt understand...
when he started to learn the language did he try to remember her words?
cont soon dear...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#733

chalo get your Teacher ji Geet for Maan to teach him how to kiss 😆

Nice part

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

chap 13 n 14
amazing update...
whatever geet said to maan in shudh Hindi... convo between maan n his frnds.
damn it was hilarious...
maan come to know that dev is in hospital...
what's happening... hoping that maan will somehow find d truth...
nice update.

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tanubag

@tanubag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Awesome update. Maaneet's kiss scene was cute. Then Geet's shudh hindi and whatever Maan understood from that told his friends that was hilarious🤣 Maan came behind Geet and found Dev in a municipal hospital and Geet called Meera bhabhi. Hope very soon Maan wil find out whole truth.

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#736

part 15

adi - kya hua maan

maan - wo i want to lern this apun ko ye sikhana hai

adi - ask with scared tone

maan - ye mman show titanic kiss image and say aisa wala kiss

adi is verge of fainting he mummer ye kaha fas gaya he gulp hard and say maan aisa nahi hota ye to ho jata hai jab we are together

maan - with innocence isko sikhaya nahi jata kya

adi - ha maan ye to ek feeling ahi jab koi bahot acha lagta hai to ye ho jata hai bus kuch jada mat karna

maan mumer yaha thode ka wanda (Problem ) hai to jada kaha se hoga

Maan went near geet collage and say her he want to meet her near river area other side geet who feel so shy shy after her confession she nodded in yes and run away maan smile with her shy ...and mummer ganpati bapa smabhal lena wo kam ya jada wala kuch gadbad na ho jaye

Till evening both feel ke time going in slow speed jaise koi tortoise chal raha hai in sharp 6 o clock maan reach near river and start to wait for her and again and again mummering don't scare darna mat bhidu darna mat bas
Wo ek dusre ke sath chipka dena (girls don't get naughty he saying about lips nothing else )

Konsa bada kaam hai yaar kiss hi hai but next second his face turn pale YE KISS HI apunki waat lagane wala hai apunka mhoo ka smell to nahi aa raha na he eat mint so he smell nice

Kya yaar wo add main to aisaish dikhaya tha ke mhoo ki badabu nahi aaati

Maan start to imagine he bend for kiss and geet make dirty face and say ye pyyas (oninon ki ) babdbu kaha se aa rahi hai maanji

Maaan called loudly nahi nahi aaj to apun onion ko chuha tak nahi

Same time he found geet coming there in white dress looking like angel maan mummer aa gayi meri pari

Geet come there with slow speed her heart doing sound dhak dhak dhak she feel today different like kuch hone wala hai bahot bada

She come near maaan and stand in front of him with bending head

Maan wo job hi tumne apunko bola kuch samje nahi aaya liken ek baat samje gaya ke teri aanke bol rahi thi ki tu apunko love karti hai

Geet look him with shock it is true na ke love never need word ye to eyes kaphi hoti hai sab kuch bolne ke liye

Geet try to look down but maan stop her and took her face in his plam and say mere se kabhi aankhe mat churana ku ke teri aankhe sab kuch bol deti hai sachi sachi

Geet blinked her eyes in yes and maan bend near her face and softly mummer l love u and softly pick on geet lips soft pick like he is scaring usko scratch aa gaye to geet eyes winded in shock his three word and this pick on her lips

She is speechless she press himself more to him there lips touching each other they want more and before they do anything geet pull by someone and that place acco with sound of tight slap a tight slap

Maan want to kill that person who slap geet like this and he grown ye kon hai tu but next second froze in his place it is geet father mohinder handa

M. handa - pointed to maan and say ter ko to main baad main dekhata hu smaja na and pull geet hand with him and start to took her away maan feel like His soul going away from him bahot dur jaha wo nahi pohach sakta

Mohinder took geet in his house and closed door and start to bit her with Skell

That what are she doing with that lafanga what r she doing ...

Geet who always scare for mohinder first time look in his eyes and say pyyar karte hai hum unse pyyar

Mohinder hand froze for second how her girl giving answering like this he go away from geet and called someone to his house

Next hour his big bro along with their wife come there and start to allegation on mohinder that he fail to look to his own daughter they also called maan there

Maan come with some fear is geet ok or not his eyes searching to geet but she is inside other room and geet uncle start to talk him so rudely insulting him

On his education , on his economic condition all using harsh word but maan eyes searching his geet

Just than his uncle say u try to misguide her na its true na u boys of that slum area try to catch innocent girl

Uncle - geet geet come out

Maan all life come in his eyes and geet come out marks on her cheek on her hand he want to ask them but he know if he say something now they will more torucher her he keep quit but his eyes on geet face

Uncle - geet isne tume fasane ki koshish kin a ye one side hai na tum nahi karti na pyaar usase

Geet once look to maan and nodded in yes and say ha wahi mere pitch laga tha our jabrdasti kar raha tha geet died 100 death when she say such things to maan

Sad smile come on maan face geet main bola tha na that tum log smile bhi aise karte ho jaise dusre par bahot bada ehasssan kar rahe ho tumara dam nahi ghuta jaha tum saas (breth bhi apne mann se nahi le sakti

I know u saying all false sab jhoot bol rahi ho an dapunko ye bhi pata hai ke kon timko ye bolne ko bol raha hai maan look to mohinder first time mr handa scare with gaze of maan eyes

Maan - mere baap mere ko kuch zada nahi de sakta likin na usne apunko ek cheez di hai freedom jo tere ko kabhi nahi mil sakti ye logo ke beech ha lakin ye ghar se baahar main tumara abhi bhi intazzar karunga geet ku ki teri sachai teri aanke bol rahi hai muze kisi aur ke words ter mhoo se nahi sunene hai muje sunana hai such tere wala na ke tere baap wala

Maan went near mohinder handa bacho ko marna wo bhi geet jaise sidhi ladki ko he smirk like tonting bahot bada failior ho app baap ke naam se ...

Next part
past

geet slap maan hard on his cheek and ask to wo meera ke pass konsi training lane jate ho maan wp bhi raat ko

present

maan grab geet and feel her maang with sindoor all stood there frozen

next part may be in night or eveing or after two hour 😉

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago