MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet, iske parents ne band baja rakhi hai iski
maan hi theek krega isse😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice dear
is meera luv dev ????
n dev father is not accept her that y both look sad
maan is stalking evry where
geet copy maan
she is soo shy nature that cant speak her wish
waitng for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4 very nice love the tapori maan geet do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5

geet - hum garib (poor ) huai to kya hamari hrudaye (heart ) ki amiri (richness ) is aparampar( uncountable ) chalo hawa aane do

Mohinder - kaha se , hawa anne do kaha se , kya bhasha hai (language , kya culture ) just impossible you have to read good literature from tomorrow you have to go public library there is one book cinema ek shap ( crush)

next day poor girl just went to public library and aur majanno behind her when geet talking with librarian

maan sit next to one person and took book which is took that person it hve big name world dictionary

maan just took it and try to read word dics , disc

that unknown person say its dictionary

maan - wahi to pata pata hai tu apna pad na bhidu ( I know it you read your na)

that person look him like ye kaha se aa gaya

maan whose eyes on geet , when she try to look him he look in book jiska ek bhi word usko samje nahi aa raha that , English to uska sabse bada dushman tha nahi nahi hai

he again try to say disc disc but

that person laugh on maan attempt

maan - kya tera samman ter ko paayra nahi hai kya

person - kya samane

maan - ye teet Teri batishi jot u dikha raha hai

that peson just called lib- man look who come in liberary apke yaha aaise log bhi aate hai

lib -man - hey what are you doing hear it is not road romiyo , just outfrom hear , chal nikal yaha se ye koi nka nahi hai raste ka

maan - who boiling with anger want to say something but stop by sweet voice of geet

geet - ku rok rahe ho app unko wo panda hi chate hai na to acchi baat hai na (why you stopping him , he want study , that is good thing na ) geet just once look to maan and smile to him , maan just open mouth look to her it is big thing for him poor boy forget to closed his mouth

Rang Bavrya Swapnana... Sanga Re Sanga...

Kund Kalyana...Velina... Sanga Re Sanga...

He Bhas Hoti Kase... He Nav Othi Kunache...

Ka Sang Vedya Mana... Mala Bhan Nahi Jagache...

Mala Ved Lagle Premache...

Mala Ved Lagle Premache...

Premache... Premache...!!!

tale to colorful dream just tale

tlae to beautiful bud and tree just tale

why this illusion , whose name onmy lips

tale me mad mind why I don't have awarness of world

I become mad for love

I become mad for love

love ------love

maan going in rain he is on 9 cloud , she take my side , he is so happy just dancing in rain like mad person just he saw geet drench in rain her dress all drench in rain he first look hear and their like if anyone see he like this , he just run near a small hotel which owner is friend of maan and brought umbrella he just went near her and open umbrella for her

geet first scare with him , but his eyes ,she feel like she trust him , a smile come on her face , maan just pointed her for walk they just walking so near to each othermaan heart just sounding dhak dhak and poor girl she just feel so shy it is first time a boy so near her who care for her and brought umbrella for her

Nadavle, Dhundavle... Kadhi Guntale Man Bavre...


N Kale Kasa Konamule... Sur Lagle Man Mokle...

Ha Bhas Ki Tujhi Ahe Nasha

...
Mala Sadh Ghalti Dahi Disha...

this mind sometime crazy sometime intoxicated, when it this cray mind attached

don't know because of whom get beautiful voice in song

is this illusion or your intoxicated

this all ten direction just calling me

Mala Ved Lagle Premache...
Mala Ved Lagle Premache...
Premache... Premache...

I become mad for love

I become mad for love

love ------love

they just reach near her house and she bid him bye and run to her house , she so much lost in him , just run to her room and change in other dress she feel like it is new life for her , all are so new and fresh like flower his care make her mad she just lost in him

Jagane Nave Vate Mala... Kuni Bhetala Majhe Mala...


Khulta Kali Umlun Ha... Man MOgra Gandhalala...

I feel like I live with newness ...somone meet me who is mine

like bud blossom and my mind just blossom

Ha Bhas Ki Tujhi Ahe Nasha...
Mala Sadh Ghalti Dahi Disha...
Mala Ved Lagle Premache...
Mala Ved Lagle Premache...
Premache... Premache...!!!

is this illusion or your intoxicated

this all ten direction just calling me

I become mad for love

I become mad for love

love ------love

next day geet coming from collage and in middle of road she get that she lost her ear ring she is verge of crying she know she have to face anger from her baba she start to search with teary eyes , maan just passing from there ,pinky send him to brought sabji he saw geet and just went near her , with setting his hair

maan kya hua

geet just sheetered with his sadden entry

maan wo sorry sorry dena , dar gayi kya darne ka nahi

geet - just hold he bad tightly and say app aise achanake(suddenly) se samane aa gaye to ghabrahat (scare)to hogi na dekho hamara hrudae ( heart ) kitane zoro se dhadka raha hai jaise koi ashwa dod raha hai (like some horse running in full speed )

maan mouth open in O shape , he watch her like ye konsi country ki language bol rahi hai , he gulp hard mummer , kya bhidu ladki bhi acchi lage to Hindi ki teacher

geet - aapne kuch kaha kya

maan just nodded his head in full speed , itni saari hindi ek hi din main ye to baap ( father ) ke maar se bahi jada badi punishment hai bhidu


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan and his language..uff

that shakal is😡😡
what language...read good literature..
geet ko order de k chala gaya😡😡

geet going lib..
and majnu uske peechhe😛
disc...dics...still cannot sread dictionary🤢
🤣

bt geet taking his side...
n maan babu😳

geet ki hindi sunn k
maan😕🤢
"hindi ki teacher"😆🤣
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan is happy that geet took his side in library
geet is thinking of maan as he show care for her

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsssmmm update mahi geet hindi just awsssmmm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update maan ki side li geet ne aur maan khush ho gayea now maan come to known about geet language and he think its more difficult in compare of his father dant lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha..geets dad sent her 2 library
n maan follows her
geet supported him n he wasin cloud 9
maan talking 2 geet..lolz
both their language r alien 2 other
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
geet went to library and our majnu maan behind her!!😆

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