MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 3 : PART 51 : pg 115 20th Nov2016 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mans22

i want maan to suffer more and understand what he has done with geet. this is not fair on geets part that she melts with his few words on the phone cuz she still loves him madly even after love maan should know what he had done exactly with geet in the past and how painful it is. no doubt he is a good father to ammi


sorry i don't agree with u i think geet herself was culprit for this mu, how on the earth person will think positive when some one close to his heart will blame him for child when he knew they never share physical intimacy? it was totally wrong on her part,but what maan did after that is also equally wrong so in my opinion geet and maan both are equally responsible for this mu and both has suffered enough so i don't want him to suffer more due to geet's fears.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful Update
Maan confessing and Geet also talking about her inner fears
Maan truely loves Geet even when he was married , he could not move forward with Pari .
I feel both Maan and Geet had suffered enough and its time that they get together .
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Posted: 11 years ago




Madhubala ji kaha ho aap...



Hume update chahiye...
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late again...month end on a weekend kept me busy 😳
Thnxxx sooo much for all your patience 🤗

Here is our update 😊

PART 44

Maan looked at the place where Geet was sitting few moments ago. He could feel her presence and it made him restless. Annie took Ami from him and they went to the crowd of little girls who were having cute flowers made on their little palms. Ami's eyes brightened as she saw that and sat obediently with Annie waiting for her turn. Maan turned around and saw Geet talking to some elderly lady, one of Pinky's buas he recognised. His eyes scanned her from top to bottom. She looked innocently seductive in that saree and her hands which she spread out unconsciously because of the mehendi. It was a sight that took his breath away. Unlike their earlier days, her body had grown fuller more like a woman and the sensuality oozing out was intoxicating. His eyes made no attempt to hide his desires and it made her restless even if she wasn't looking at his direction. Now and then she looked at him from the corner of her eyes and Maan was gaping at her shamelessly standing right in the middle of the crowd. It was so obvious that people were now noticing him and giggling amongst themselves. Geet excused herself and went upstairs. At the last stair she tripped on her saree and it came out a bit loose as her foot accidentally pulled the end of her saree. Geet slowly walked towards one of the rooms. If she didn't take baby steps the saree would have opened any minute. She stood in front of the mirror and tried to adjust her saree with her elbow but it was nearly impossible. She looked at her hands decorated with the mehendi . It was still wet; no way could she use her fingers even lightly. It would ruin her saree. She pouted just like Ami when her pajama strings get loose and she don't know how to tie it back. Then she looked at the mirror and froze as she saw him walking towards her in a trance. Geet wanted to hide somewhere. If it wasn't for her stupid saree she would have tried to go under the bed. Too late as he was standing just inches away from her. His hands aimlessly roamed around her bare waist and she sucked her breath in. He came in front of her and knelt down. Geet stood there looking away as he gently arranged her fleets and got up holding it. He paused for a moment and then tucked her saree in her waist sensually. Geet let out a gasp as his fingers brushed her belly button. He withdrew quickly and neatly covered her saree properly. He turned her towards the mirror and stood behind her, his body touching hers. His fingers grazed her arms slowly and he moved her waist-length hair to her bosom revealing her almost bare back to him. His fingers further towards her nape and down to her back. Geet couldn't hold any more and she moaned, "Maann..koi a jayega.."

Maan kissed on her shoulder bone and she arched her back towards him.

Geet : Please Maan..

Maan whispered in his sexy throaty voice, "you promised to talk today!"

Geet took a deep breathe, "we are not talking.."

Maan smirked and rested his chin on her nape, "that's not my fault. If you look so beautiful , how can I just talk, huh?"


Geet blushed and looked away from the mirror, "Mujhe jaana he.."

Maan : zidd mat kro Geet! I can make you stop!

Geet looked at him questioningly. He almost hurt her pride.

Maan gently whispered in her ears, " Phir se saree khol du?"

Geet looked shocked and then she closed her eyes tightly as her cheeks turned pink.

Geet : Don't you dare!

Maan : ok. Then sit back and lets talk!

Geet was already hypervenillating as Maan's hands were freely roaming around her curves. His intimacy was something that she could never resist. They craved for each other like mad always and today were no different. She never understood how he managed to get her undivided attention every time. She could feel his hardness and he pressed her closer to him. The warmth breath falling on her cheeks was making her mad. But reason had to take over now or she would never let him stop. She forcefully drifted her body away from him and stood a few feets away from him. Maan did not understand her rejection.

Maan : Geet, I didn't mean to force myself. I thought you wanted me...I mean it sounds stupid, but your eyes always tell me how much you need me. I thought you too..I mean..Geet..I thought you don't hate me anymore!

Geet : I NEVER hated you Maan! It was you..It was all you!

Maan :ok! Calm down Geet! I admit that I was terribly wrong and I didn't know what devil made me think about you like that. But Geet people do change! They learn from their mistakes. And I know very well what it is to lose you. I can't do that again! I have thrown away all my happiness once but now I won't let that happen. I want you and Mia! You two are my world! Geet, if not for me you need to come back for Mia! She loves you! You are her mother, for crying out loud!! How can you abandon her now?

Geet : I am not abandoning her in the streets like you. She is at home and I know she will be safe with you

Maan : be safe? And what about being happy? Or is it that you don't care because she is not your own!!

Geet : ENOUGH MAAN!!! Get out of that narrow mind of yours!! Look outside YOU and your WORLD!! Why is it always about YOU? YOU can't live without me! YOU care about Mia! Where was your love and care when you called her a bas***d!!

Maan winced painfully, "Geet.."

Geet : Where was your love or at least humanity when your wife pushed us to the streets!! You think its easy to get over all that and pretend that nothing was ever wrong only because YOU LOVE us now!! Just the thought that I would have been unfaithful made you act mad! You were angry because I was not loyal in our relationship, he na? And what did you do? You got married in front of me! You slept with her Maan! You threw me out of your house! You froze my account and left me starving with a kid whom you don't even care!

Maan listened to her quietly. Words failed him. The pain he felt was immense but he knew that he deserved it. It felt nice as if someone is trying to sooth their pain by hurting the same wound again. He could bear the deep ache in his heart if it meant that his Mishty was slowly and unknowingly breaking that huge wall built between them by pouring her heart out like that. It meant that she was complaining and that she thought that he was worthy to listen to her pain. It satisfied him to stand there as her convict and hear every curse that she would utter.

Geet continued her blast as he stood there his head hung low, "Just one question Maan! If I were you and I turned up after five years saying that Maan I still love you but yeah, I had a one-night stand with my ex-husband five years back. That doesn't mean anything and we can be happy together! Will you accept me? I know what you will do and I have lived it once! You called me a s**t and now what should I call you, huh?? Now after all this you are asking me that I don't care about Ami? Do you know how much I have sacrificed to bring her up in the standards of a Khurana? "

Now this was the point which shook some part of Maan's brain like an electric shock. He couldn't help but ask, "Why do you always want her to be a Khurana?"

Geet went quiet at his innocent yet relevant question. She didn't know what to say and how to say. But before he could ask more, the door opened and came a shrill voice, "mummaaa..papaaa.."

Both of them were startled and turned around.

Geet immediately ran towards her, "Ami did you come up the stairs all alone? Bacha why are you so careless?"

And she glared at Maan silently accusing him for leaving her alone. But Ami was cool as a cucumber.

Ami : Chill mom, I'm not alone. Lisa brought me here.

Geet : and where is she?

Ami : there

She pointed outside. Lisa came in with an apologetic look on her face.

Lisa : I told Mia that you two would be busy but..she won't listen

Ami looked at Geet and then at Maan.

Ami : Mumma you were crying? Kyu?

Geet : nhi re..wo mehendi eyes me gayi..

Ami got excited at the word mehendi ,"Mumma..see what I have got in my hand!!"

Geet looked at her little hand which had three beautiful sunflower shapes made.

Ami called out, "papa ap bhi dekho na.."

And so the parents sat holding Ami's hand and admiring her.

Ami : mumma papa come on, music has started there already!! Come on, you have to sing and dance!! Its first time we are all here for a party!!

Geet : Ami! Mumma is not well. I can't..

Ami rolled her eyes at her mumma's dramebaazi. She showed her walker and asked, "I am not well. So you two will sing and dance for me!!! Chalo chalo chalooo"

Ofcourse, the persistent kid got her parents downstairs but still looking at each other bewildered.

The music started playing and Maan looked at Geet expectantly. She turned away her expressions defensive and her heart beating faster at the contrast. And then he started dancing as the music played.


(This is a VM I found on youtube on this song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqbys_-nnY0 Its the best that I could match with the story. All credits to the VM maker. )

Suno Ik Thi Kaanch Ki Gudiya
Listen, there was once a doll made of glass
Suno Ik Thi Pyaar Ki Pudiya
Listen, there was once a love story
Sadke, Uss Pyaar Ke
Bowing down to that love
Suno Ik Tha Pind Da Shera
Listen, there was once a brave young man
From Pind
Aaya Kas Ke Baandh Woh Sehra
And he came putting a Sehra
On top of his head tightly
Sadke, Uss Yaar Ke
Bowing down to that love

Maan looks at Geet but she turns around and stands near Ami holding her hand. Ami oblivious looks at her dad all excited. Maan started dancing looking at Geet in her eyes while dancing around Adi and Pinky who were seated together on a well-decorated platform. Adi looked at Maan nervously as he had never seen him this jovial. Pinky blushed as Adi stole galnces now and then. But Maan could see none. His eyes were only on Geet who was looking everywhere but him.



Suno Ik Thi Kaanch Ki Gudiya
Listen, there was once a doll made of glass
Suno Ik Thi Pyaar Ki Pudiya
Listen, there was once a love story
Sadke, Uss Pyaar Ke
Bowing down to that love
Suno Ik Tha Pind Da Shera
Listen, there was once a brave young man from Pind
Aaya Kas Ke Baandh Woh Sehra
And he came putting a Sehra on top of his head tightly
Sadke, Uss Yaar Ke
Bowing down to that love
Saji Thi Doli Woh
The wedding palanquin was decorated
Chadha Tha Ghodi Voh
He had climbed on the top of the horse
Khoya Jaane Kahan Inna Sona Pyaar Baliye
Where did such beautiful love disappear, sweetheart

He walked down closer to Geet and danced around her this time.

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana

Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret


Geet tries to run away but Maan stopped her by holding the end of her pallu. He moved closer to her with the pallu in his hand.


Dil Thaame Hue
Keeping his heart on hold
Woh Tha Khada, Chup Ke Se Yun
He was standing, quietly in this way
Dur Baithe Hue
Sitting far away
Umra Gaiyaan, Jaane Na Tu
The years passed on, You don't know of that
He made her turn around to face him.

Deewane Ne Di Jawani
The lover gave away his youth
Ke Har Gham Tu Bhula De
That You could forget all the sadnesses
Deta Hi Raha Sadayein
He kept on praying
Ke Dil Se Tu Bula Le
That one day You call him with Your heart


Geet slowly raised her hand to touch his cheek but he moved back and danced.


O Chhad De Ve Zid Hun
O! Stop being stubborn now
Chhaje Uttey Aaja Hun
Come onto my terrace now
Dil Tuta Janda Sun Pyaar Dulya
My heart keeps breaks, and love keeps spilling out of it

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Maan spread his arms at her yearning her to come to him. Geet felt her heart swell with all those emotions.


Dholna Ve, Bolna
My dear, speak now

Jind Meri, Jind Meri, Hun Te Aaja
Come into my life now
Jadon Da Rus Gaya, Khuda Bhi Bhul Gaya
In Your being angry, I have forgotten even praying to God
Jindadi Jaandi Hai Dholna
My life is passing away so quickly, My dear


Geet now moved behind Maan and let her heart out as he looked at her with pain. She kept on walking as her mind replayed all that betrayal and abandonment.


Woh, Jaane Kahan, Gum Ho Gayi, Phir Na Mili
No one knows, where she disappeared and wasn't found anywhere
Jo Phoolon Si Thi, Rus Hi Gayi, Phir Na Khili
The one who was like the flowers, she withered and never blossomed again
Pyaar Maanga Tha Maine Rabb Se
I had asked for love from God
Woh Rehta Tha Yahin Pe
That was living here only
Maangun Mein Yehi Duayein
Now I pray only this
Laut Aaye Woh Kahin Se
He comes back from somewhere

Annie comes in and pushes Geet towards Maan.

O Chhad De Ve Zid Hun
O! Stop being stubborn now
Chhaje Uttey Aaja Hun
Come onto my terrace now
Dil Tuta Janda Sun Pyaar Dulya
My heart keeps breaks, and love keeps spilling out of it

Geet falls in Maan's arms and he holds her. They both look into each others eyes lost in them.



Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Geet tries to leave but Maan's hold is firm and she cannot do much with the mehendi in her hand.

Suno Ik Thi Kaanch Ki Gudiya
Listen, there was once a doll made of glass
Suno Ik Thi Pyaar Ki Pudiya
Listen, there was once a love story
Sadke, Uss Pyaar Ke
Bowing down to that love
Suno Ik Tha Pind Da Shera
Listen, there was once a brave young man from Pind
Aaya Kas Ke Baandh Woh Sehra
And he came putting a Sehra on top of his head tightly
Sadke, Uss Yaar Ke
Bowing down to that love

He brings her palm in front of him and shows her his name hidden in that design much to the shock of Geet. Maan had a smile as he had found out that deep in her heart she still loved him.


Saji Thi Doli Woh
The wedding palanquin was decorated
Chadha Tha Ghodi Voh
He had climbed on the top of the horse
Khoya Jaane Kahan Inna Sona Pyaar Baliye
Where did such beautiful love disappear, sweetheart

Geet withdrew her hands and her eyes filled up seeing the warmth in him. Ami went near them and Maan took her in his arms and held Geet with the other. They stood there like a perfect family. Geet's mind was revolting against her. She was supposed to be away from them and here she was dancing with them.

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Dholna, Bolna
My dear, speak now

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret

Jogi Mahi, Heer Raanjhana
Jogi and Mahi, Heer and Raanjhana
Sab Nu Ja Ke Main Yeh Bolna
I'll go and tell them this story
Baat Bol Ke, Raaz Kholna
I'll say this story and open up the secret


The music was piercing her ears and se couldn't take it anymore. She ran away from there. She didn't care what everyone thought or said. She had to escape. She shut herself in the lobby of the ladies room only to find a pale Pinky her face all tensed up.


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PRECAP : Pinky's problem 😲😳

Waitinggg for your reviews!! 😃

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Main bohut naraz hoon... kaha gayab hogayi thi... hum toh update ke liye taras gaye...😆


aur mera comment ka jawab chahiye mujhe😉


nice update...


I was wondering will geet be able to leave ami...


Maan toh geet ke peeche pada hain haath dhoke😆... usse kahi par bhi nahi chodta...



And geet outburst told her pain she suffered to some extent...


maan ne accounts bhi band kardiya😡...


Ami sahi timing... let maan wonder how she is a khurana... i think maan should take this as a hint...dekte hain uska dimag kitna chalta hain...😕



And the song is awesome... i liked the song ... but ab aur bhi zyada acha lagne laga hain... thanks for the VM...


Ab pinky ko kya hua...😕...


Next update jalsi dena plzzz...plz...




Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awwwsome part...loved the saree waala scene...glad that she shouted at him...he deserved more than that for being soo bad to her...now wonder what is pinky s problem..😕
Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

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awwwsome part...loved the saree waala scene...glad that she shouted at him...he deserved more than that for being soo bad to her...now wonder what is pinky s problem..😕

thnxx yaar 😃 😃
shouting is just a start... more to come 😉
Pinky's problemmm...keep guessing 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
wow loved geet queries dear
simply superb...
w8 fr d next prt
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-





Main bohut naraz hoon... kaha gayab hogayi thi... hum toh update ke liye taras gaye...😆


aur mera comment ka jawab chahiye mujhe😉


nice update...


I was wondering will geet be able to leave ami...


Maan toh geet ke peeche pada hain haath dhoke😆... usse kahi par bhi nahi chodta...



And geet outburst told her pain she suffered to some extent...


maan ne accounts bhi band kardiya😡...


Ami sahi timing... let maan wonder how she is a khurana... i think maan should take this as a hint...dekte hain uska dimag kitna chalta hain...😕



And the song is awesome... i liked the song ... but ab aur bhi zyada acha lagne laga hain... thanks for the VM...


Ab pinky ko kya hua...😕...


Next update jalsi dena plzzz...plz...




dekho me jawab de rhi hu 😃
last week kaafi busy thi...work bhi tha aur ek chota sa mandir darshan trip bhi tha
Maan toh geet ke peeche pada hain haath dhoke😆.. 😆

nd geet outburst told her pain she suffered to some extent...
u r right. that was the whole point of this update. See even now Maan does not know what she has done for him and his family. aur wo slow doses me hi de skte he warna wo jhel nhi payega 😆
ek chota sa twist aney wala he. mene khud plan nhi kiya but somehow it will happen jab likhungi tab pata chalega mujhe bhi 😕😳
I too like this song aur jab se ye part likhna shuru kiya I wanted to add this. 😊
Pinky ko kya ho gaya 😕 😉--janne ke liye dekhiye next part.. 😛😆
aur next part coming soon he.. hv started witing...pakka next sat tak update kr dungi. vl try to post before that agar time mila to..😳

loveddd reading your comments as alwaysss...
hamesha reply nhi kr pati phir bhi u knw I always refresh the page to see the comments. Wo feedback hi hote he confience boosters 😃

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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her words were like acid on his wounded heart but this is what he is going to face.
still maan didn't able to get y geet is so persistent of saying ami is Khurana's daughter
song selection was perfect. Depicting both of their emotion here.
now wondering what's up with Pinky that she is so pale?

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