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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.
Maan is missing geet.
Its a lovely story dont end it soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice update

maan is missing geet
did he saw face of girl who come in his dream
ur writing in good going
i like what u write til now
write til ur imagination run
at the point when u feel u r not able to extend the story give it nice turn n end the story


No he didn't!
I suggest you read the part again
N thanks for leaving your view🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: chahat59

Nice update.
Maan is missing geet.
Its a lovely story dont end it soon.


Thank U!
Yaar phir se theak se pado n comment. .
Both for liking n leaving ur view!😊
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Dream 9 -
The girl in Maan's dream appearing as confident, with attitude and caring just like what he felt about Geet in real...but why did Geet leave suddenly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Dream 10

he lost her...

will she be back to him at least as the unknown caller...
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28



Hay people. ..
Though I started to write for my self but now u all r reading it
So without asking u all I don't want to take any decision. .

I want to discontinue it!

There is no super strong reason or something. ..
It's just that ..
Now I want to write a new story on a totaly different concept!😳
I will continue this story untill I get the views of all my 13 readers. .😃
Some of u may think I can write both but u c it's not my cup of tea. .in frustration imay leave both!😉😆

So please do respond!


I am not going to give my view...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest


I am not going to give my view...😃


😲 Y????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
I hope dis unknown caller is geet nd in dream maan lost her hope he ill c her face soon nd abt endng d story i request u 2 nt end it i enjoy readng it nw its upon u 2 continue or 2 end ill respect ur decision
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

I hope dis unknown caller is geet nd in dream maan lost her hope he ill c her face soon nd abt endng d story i request u 2 nt end it i enjoy readng it nw its upon u 2 continue or 2 end ill respect ur decision


Thanks for liking! N leaving ur views😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
MISTHI!
That's what I call her. .now a days she had developed this strange habit of calling me with different names. .. God she's totally crazy!.. After the news of my promotion she started calling me AGM sahab!

She made me realise how it feels to have someone caring n waiting for you...as I was alone since I don't even know when.. but then I felt this how God wants me to survive so b it!

I completed my education on scholarship n savings of my parents. . I was very small then even to understand the bank formalities. .. my neighbours were kind enough to help me with the basics. . From then I considered them as my family. . It was not just a particular family who stood by me but the whole colony. .. That's why they are all too much attached to me..

Misthi has become an integral part of my life. . Now.. I relate my every relation with her.. I secretly started wishing that she stays my me life long!

I didn't meet her or c her yet! When asked same she says what will u do meeting me??

I'll give u a tight hug n never let u go..

What if Im not beautiful??

No ways!I know my Misthi is the most beautiful girl. .

N she would bust out laughing saying dream on..

It's been more than 6 months since I went to the head office branch! Now I've been called to attend a meeting with sir! I have no clue of what the meeting was about!

As I entered the huge building. . I thought to meet mam first!

It's been a long time. . I was about to knock when someone from behind reminded me of the meeting in the conference room!

Sighing I entered the conference room to c it almost filled n there were very few people whose face I could recognise. .
As I took my seat I saw mam n sir entering discussing something serious. .

Every one went silent as mam started speaking..it was regarding the new venture we were about to start! But looking at her after such a long time couldn't help but notice she was looking pretty in her lavender colour saree. . N the grace with which she carried it added to the beauty!

I was feeling guilty for even thinking this way I feel like im betraying Misthi! As soon as the conference ended I walked moved out of the office in hurry. . N called her..but she didn't pick my call increasing my frustration. .. I walked back composing myself. . Only to bump in to her.. After having a brief discussion about the project we headed to the site. .n personal meeting with the client. .

While returning back the tyre got punchered increasing my restlessness. . So we walked to my house which was nearby to my disappointment as I was suddenly not liking the idea of bringing her to my home. .frowning I opened the door. .only to be soaked in colour as the kids wanted to play some stupid prank!

Seeing my anger shooting up they ran out side..I quickly went into the room n bought her a saree to which she gave me a puzzled look n I didn't bother to react! n went out giving her space. .

As I stepped out I got her call.. Though I was angry I couldn't ignore her call so I picked it up! Only to hear her soothing voice
Angry???

Won't talk. ..

Should I cut the call..

No!

So ...

I don't like her...(I cribbed)

Like whom???

My boss...

N y is that is she khadus like u??

Misthi! Sighing I thought to speak out to her..

Wo I met her after a long time she is the same warm n friendly person. . But ..

But??

I was admiring her looks in the meeting n wasn't able to concentrate ..on top of it I had to give her that red saree which I bought for u! ... I cribbed making faces. .

She bust out laughing saying it's ok n so funny! Composing herself quickly. . Sensing my increasing temper..

Do u like her?

What no! I mean yes as a person n my boss that's it ..nothing more misthi!

So what's the problem. . It's ok there's nothing wrong in appreciating what u like. .n about the saree hmm good u gave it to her.. as I would love shop with you!

Relaxed I entered only to find her picking her stuff n walking towards me..

Oh Maan ! It's getting late I better leave. . We'll catch up some other time. ..

Saying so she left in a hurry. ..



To b continued...




Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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