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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
aaj thread ki maalkin kahaan gayab hain

friend ke ghar gayi hai
friend ki mother ki death hui hai iss liye

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

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<div>her friends mother passed away... so maalkin is away to console...

haan abhi tak nahi aayi

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: priya111111

hi lakshu fine lunch hogaya sab ka

mera nahi huva hai

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

serios question yaaron... and dont answer this as my freind... teek hain

mck ka hoshiyarpur session is going to end soon...

do u really think i should continue?

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

mera nahi huva hai

mera bhi nahi

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
serios question yaaron... and dont answer this as my freind... teek hain

mck ka hoshiyarpur session is going to end soon...

do u really think i should continue?

aapki marzi Aunty...

if you are not able to be spend time on that...n if you are not happy with it... then what is the use of doing it...

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
serios question yaaron... and dont answer this as my freind... teek hain

mck ka hoshiyarpur session is going to end soon...

do u really think i should continue?

yes di MCK hai puri geet ki kahani chahiye bur agar aapko time nahi mil raha ya interest then u can finish it di

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

aapki marzi Aunty...

if you are not able to be spend time on that...n if you are not happy with it... then what is the use of doing it...

there is a lot of diff beween mck and lpw,,, lpw i make what i like ... and mck i have to do as per the structure ...

and i do undrstnad that the story is not new .. so readers may not be much interested in reading the same again and again...

when others are not happy ... i think y to continue

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

there is a lot of diff beween mck and lpw,,, lpw i make what i like ... and mck i have to do as per the structure ...

and i do undrstnad that the story is not new .. so readers may not be much interested in reading the same again and again...

when others are not happy ... i think y to continue

I think you can end with Geet punishing her family...