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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 84


There in her room Geet was sulking ,, she always listened him but he accused her for not listening him ,, hamesha to uski hi sunti hu aur manti hu ,, ab kaise kahu ki bina shaadi ke KV mei kaise rahu ? kuch to time de mujhe janne-samjhne ka ,, mujhse kabhi nahi pucha ki Geet tum kya chahati ho ? Kaise chahati ho ? MSK,, monster singh khurana ko bas apni marji se sab chahiye * her intercom buzzed nd it was from Dadima who was calling her for lunch but Geet excused herself that she won't take lunch coz from last day all wr filling her forcefully so she wd take only light diner .

She came out in loby to collect her lappy nd other things nd heard some faint sound from pool side ,, Maan's gym was near d poll nd he was doing his exercise/tai-chi there ,, Geet went there nd peeped in ,, Maan was punching d sand bad drantched in sweat ,, his upper body was bare nd beads of sweat wr shining all over that ruffled nd wet locks wr covering his forehead ,, he was madly punching ,, Geet gulped hard she felt bad making him angry nd now he was hurting himself ,, he never came in gym this time , if he is here this time it means he is very disturbed ,, she sadly stepped back to her room .

Now her thoughts took a u turn she started cursing herself for making him angry ** Geet , he is doing everything to make u happy ,, saying sorry ,, some where he was right at her place that we need to spent some time together to understand each other ,, we didn't talk to each other then how cd he know about my wish ,, he honestly asking me for a date to spent time with me nd I too want this then why i'm avoiding it ,, when I had decided to go with this relation then nothing is wrong in this ,, he was still living in guilt but he expressed his feelings nd love for me, now its my turn to take step towards him ,, now i'll plan a date for us ,, Day after TM was weekend nd this wd be d best time to go .

Geet smiled shyly ,, thought for few min nd went to Dadima's room ,, she shyly cling to Dadima nd asked.

Geet: Dadima ek baat puchu aapse ?

Dadima patted her hand : haan beta pucho.

Geet: wo Maan ki kuch special pasand or na pasand ke bare mei batao na ,, kuch khaas jo use bahot accha lagta ho.

Dadima gave a surprised look to Geet nd then became senty ,, she beamed nd gave a pack on her forehead with a sweet smile.

Dadima: I'm so happy today beta ,, u think about Maan nd decided to give him a chance , God bless u beta .

Geet just passed a smile ,, she felt that she is not alone today nd she is with her family , her Dadima.

Dadima naughtily : to aapko Maan ke bare mei janna hei , kuch khaas , hummm,,, kuch khaas baat hei kya ? Hum bhi to jane .

Geet: Dadima plzz batao na ,, wo , I want to do something special for him in this weekend .

Dadima: accha , to uske washroom ke water tank mei color mila do ,, tum to perfect ho ess kaam mei ,, wo special dikhega ,, coloured Maan singh Khurana ,, waise bhi wo gusse mei laal hi rahaty hei.

Dadima nd Geet had a good laugh at this then Dadima told her many things about Maan ,, his fav foods, colours , hangout places nd many more ,, they talked for long nd then Dadima went to take a nap nd Geet came in her room ,, she was laying on bed nd making n rejecting plans in her minds .

On d other side Maan freshen up nd came down in kitchen ,, N&S wr taking lunch there ,, Maan asked about his wound nd recovery then searched things to make coffee for him .

N: chooty saab mai bana deta hu .

Maan: koi nahi , mai ker lunga tum dono apna khana khao ,, Dadima aur Geet ne lunch kiya ?

N: Dadima ne kiya bas Geet ma'am ne nahi kiya .

Maan: kya ? Geet ne nahi kiya , ku ?

N: pata nahi ,, Dadima ne pucha tha .

Maan thought that she was angry with him so she skipped lunch in anger ,, See Maan what u had done ? he thought nd took out many things from fridge ,, he took out a pizza base nd prepared that then put that in oven to bake ,,, in half an hr a delicious pizza was ready ,, he placed that in a plate , took coffee in mugs nd went out ,, N&S wr watching all this with a smile nd looking at each other .

S: saab bilkul badal gaye .

N: hummm aur ab khush bhi rahaty hei .

S: sab Geet ma'am ka asar hei , unkw aane se sab khush hei.

Both smiled nd started their remaining works.

Maan entered in Geet room shooting a quick prayer to Babaji ,, Geet was lost in her planning ,, he slowly went near d bed nd coughed ,, Geet turned nd find Maan there with a tray in his hand ,, she sat on bad nd adjusted her dress nd hair ,, she was shocked seing Maan there with d food .

Maan slowly sat on d edge of bed nd forward pizza plate to her with a smile ,, Geet gave him a confused look .

Maan: Geet kuch kha lo ,, don't pour ur anger on meal , u r angry with me than scold me , cribe me .

Geet: mujhe nahi khana , bhook nahi hei , tum hi kha lo ,, she looked down with a pout nd made face ,, but she was smiling inwardly that he came to manofying her nd asking her to eat ,, she decided to tease him .

Maan: plzz kha lo na ,, dekho ye maine banaya hei special Pizza for u ,, tumhe pasand hei na tomato,capsicum pizza with lots of cheese.

Geet gave a look to that hot yummy pizza ,, her mouth became watery but she was facking her anger to tease him ,, turned her face gulping her saliva .

Geet: tumne banaya hei to tum hi kha lo aur meri pasand ke bare mei aapko sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai ( she smacked her head inwardly again speaking like that ).

Maan: i'm sorry Geet ,, tum mujh per gussa ker lo lekin kuch kha lo na ,,plzz.


Precap - Maan tried again to woo Geet ...



Part - 85


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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hellooo frens... good evening!😃
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Originally posted by: mauaa

hellooo frens... good evening!😃


🤗 hi kiddo..
how r u today...??😃
kal kya hua tha,, mood off..??😲
but tum green thi bye bolne ke baad bhi..😊
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hai babie

babie new banner ka work place meine delete kar diya tha as u had finalised... ab line change thoda mushkil hain... acha nhi dikhega
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai babie

babie new banner ka work place meine delete kar diya tha as u had finalised... ab line change thoda mushkil hain... acha nhi dikhega


😊 OK..

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