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Posted: 11 years ago
part 86
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet is such an entertainer...
and wow she has arranged an awesome surprise for Maan...
and Maan is so happy and satisfied...
and this chudail can go to hell...
cont soon dear...

PS - post the link in the new thread
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geet arranging date for mam
awesome update
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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 87


It took few min to get back their normal breaths ,, they remained like that lost in their passionate moments ,, he caressed her lips with his thumb which wr lil swollen due to his hard kiss nd gave a soft pack there ,, she was blushing hard nd not looking at him directly ,, these new feelings nd desires wr making her vulnerable ,, he hide her in his embrace sensing her condition ,, Maan too was forgot d taste of his breezer his mouth filled with diff taste ,, strawberry ,, a smile crept on his lips ,, it was d taste of her lip gloss .

Maan: Geet ur LG took over my breezer's taste .

She shied hiding her face in his neck ,, he chuckled nd nuzzled her playfully to make her ease.

Maan: i' want to talk u Geet .

She parted nd looked at him thinking that she too wanted to talk him ,, she nodded in a yes.

Maan: Geet , if I didn't make that mistake ...

His words remained in his mouth when Geet placed her palm on his lips to stop him .

Geet: Maan , plzzz , don't repeate that things again there is no use of talking about that if u want to move on with me .

He held her hand giving a pack on her palm nd looked at her with a painful smile .

Maan: but that was a bitter reality Geet ...

Geet: Maan , do u love me or pitied me ?

Maan startled with this question : I love u Geet , I love u .

Geet : then come out from ur guilt ,, I don't want this new relation nd life in d shadow of past ,, Maan a relation needs love nd trust to flourish not sympathy, guilt nd grudges.

He nodded with a weak smile accepting her words ,, he lovingly adjusted her loose strands nd said..

Maan: fir tum apne dil ki baat mujhse ku nahi kahati ?

Geet gave an annoyed look to him : tumne puchne ki koshish kab ki?

Maan: agar mei puchunga to kahogi ? Kuch chupaogi to nahi ,, kuch bhi?

Geet nodded in a yes : aur tum ?

Maan: promise ( he kissed her hand which was in his), Geet ek baat puchu ?

Geet: hmmm.

Maan: Geet jaise sabhi apne liye kuch sapne dekhte hei , tumhare bhi to dreams honge na apni future life ko leker? Tum kya chahati ho ?

Geet looked at him painfully nd thought ,, pahale jo sapne dekhe wo to sab bikhar gaye ,, ab to ek nai shuruat kerni hogi.

Geet: Maan peeche kya dekha aur socha wo ab koi mayne nahi rakhta ,, yahan aaker to is duniya me survive kar saku essi ki koshish ker rahi thi ,, ab tak to apne aane wale kal ka hi pata nahi tha to sapne kya dekhti ? sapne dekhne ke liye ek peaceful sleep chahiye ,, jo mere pas nahi thi .

Maan's heart cried sensing her pain of loneliness nd insecurities ,, he caerssed her cheek nd cupped her face.

Maan: to ab dekho Geet ,, I want to fulfill all ur dreams ,, u r secure in my arms .

Tears twinkled in her eyes nd gave him a weak smile ,, he was right she felt secure in his arms.

Geet: lekin ab mere sapne sirf mere nahi rahe Maan?

Maan: ku ? (he gave a confused look)

Geet: mera har sapna ab mujhse hi nahi tumse, Dadima aur ess ghar se bhi juda hei Maan.

He was so touched, overwhelmed nd chocked with emotions listening her reply ,, God!! She is really an angle,, he beamed nd placed his lips on her forehead for a deep kiss ... G e e t ,, to humare liye dekho Geet , dekhogi na ? aur apni Geet ka har sapna pura kerna Maan ka sapna hei ,, haan Geet .

Geet: tumhari Geet?

Maan: haan meri,, Maan ki Geet ,, sirf ess janam mei hi nahi balki agle saat jamno ke liye bhi mai tumhe pana chahata hu ,, banaogi na meri Geet?

Geet melted down with his pure nd loving aspire ,, overwhelmed with emotions nd love for him, she cupped his face with her palm , raised her face a lil , gave a soft pack on d corner of his lips nd said with moisten eyes ... I love u Maan.

Maan was staring at her awed nd after few sec whispered .. fir se kaho Geet.

She blushed nd spoke again .. I love u .

He instantly hugged her in a bone crush hug groaning nd moaning her name.. Oh Geet!!! Overwhelm with love nd joy he gave her numerous feather kisses ,, few drops fell down form his eyes in happiness ,, at last he got her love ,, he parted after satisfying his quenching heart for love,, there was an unfaded smile on his lips nd his wet eyes wr brightening with happiness .

Maan: thanku Geet .. filling my life with ur love nd happiness.

Geet: no , thanks to u ,, u gave me everything .

Maan: plzz Geet, don't thank me ,, plzz,, never ,, I don't deserve ...

Geet: sshhh ,, bas ,, not again . she placed her finger on his lips to shut him .

Maan just blinked his eyes nd kissed her finger which was on his lips ,, she shied removing her finger nd tried to escape

Geet: diner lagau?

Maan: bhook lagi hei ?

Geet: tumhe nahi lagi , lunch bhi nahi kiya ?

Maan: tumhe kaise pata ?

Geet: jab aye thy na to tumhahara tummy bata raha tha.

Both tittered nd she got up to serve diner ,, opened hotpack nd served in a plate ,, he noticed that all wr his fav dishes ,, he was drooling over her ,, she gestured him to eat nd took another plate to serve for her but he held her hand nd nodded in a No with a sweet smile ,, made her sit ,, took a morsel nd fed her gesturing her to eat.


Precap --- lovey-dovey Maaneet...😳

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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bahut dino baad mein first...

and torment ka ab tak ka parts update pad chuki ... so aaj comment pakka😃

sorry for irregular comments yaar

ab baaki update padne ke baad😳


that was an awesome update dear
kisses ki baarish ho rahi hain aaj kal yahaan ... and am so much loving it😉 i loved the whole "sapna talk"... what a lovely confession...👏

precap padke tho maza aa gaya😆
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



bahut dino baad mein first...

and torment ka ab tak ka parts update pad chuki ... so aaj comment pakka😃

sorry for irregular comments yaar

ab baaki update padne ke baad😳


😆😆 etni kahan busy thi ..??
thanks .. 😆
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😆😆aaj free lagti ho...cool
avi's banner is awesome lakshu..😳
kal maine nahi dekha tha...😊
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hello babie and lakshu


Hi priya..🤗
wow!! aaj tum aa gai...😃
nyt shift hei kya..??😆
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lakshu avi ka banner yeha pozt karona waha nahi dikhrahi hai

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