Punarvivah .# 29 - Page 14

Originally posted by: -indu-

Nice update...iske alawa kuch kehna hi Nahi deti...

I loved the way u wrote about their inner turmoil and their fight with their feelings towards each other...

And the twist......goons😲...

Geet has a very good presence of mind...and it helped them in coming out the situation...

I wanted to know...maan ko gun chala a aata hain Kya...😆...

All is well at the end...they reached home...but yeh Kya...Inki story toh age hi Nahi badhi...mujhe laga ki iss incident ke baad thoda toh sage badhega...but dono ke dono hi stubborn hai...

Lots of love and hugs to u...for the update...

Do continue soon...

Ps...tu ek action ff shura karr😉

Originally posted by: shikha_guta25

Kya solid update hai.😉👍🏼
bole toh ekdum DHASU.👏
Maaneet vs goons thn its obvious ki harna toh goons ko hi padega n woh bhi geet ki special wali training ki waje se😆
ab dono ek dusre ki dressing karte hue bhi apne-2 khyalo me busy hai.
geet has sprained her leg, toh ab somehow she is dependent on maan for her work n sone k liye bed perfect hoga na geet k liye😈 so no couch for her😈
isly jo feelings geet ko pareshan kar rahi thi us feeling k sath maximum time deal karni pad sakta hai geet ko , kyuki being a nice husband cum friend maan geet k aas paas hi rehne wala hai.🤣
waiting for more
do continue soon
loved this phase of story😉