MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139 - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 5

geet just took paper for sine and just say Pasta , and all just burst in laugh , geet herself so surprised that why she say pasta because she hate Italian food than she just ignore adi somehow control and say sorry to maan who giving glare to him adi say wo kya hai maan love this food and we just hated that we always tease him on that and you want same so please don't mind


all somehow control their laugh and geet all thought vanish in air when she smell of hot pasta , she just grab her dish and start to eat like she eating after ages all give look each other sasha want to tease her but maan just glare to sasha and poor girl just zip her mouth geet just eating with so much noise but all know maan glare means no tesing geet just finish he dish just than klick her that her GF waiting for her she just stand on her place and oh sorry sorry babaji she look upward all start to search what is upward she just say


sorry sorry sir I have to go my gf waiting for me all mouth open with o shape GF but only maan give confused look without getting permission she start to walk speedily and she just collided with chair foot but maan just hold her by her tummy and say easy miss handa easy geet feel something with his touch but she ignore and say sorry again and went from their


maan tomorrow sharp 9 am miss handa and please read contract once again

geet went from their and all give look to maan


sasha - maan she have GF


and all brust in laugh maan give confused look


sasha - common maan like gay and all


maan- called out sasha kya uski bath ko seriously le rahi ho she is kid dekha nahi tumare dress or kiss pai kaise reaction diya


sasha - maan not fair you have to impress by me not her iam behind you from collage and you like kid

maan - hey don't called her kid that is my copyright ok

adi - hey stop it yaar now you become kid , who say you are md and she is head architect of KC oh come one grow up yaar and maan you want to discuss something na

maan - ye sasha ki bacchi iwill say after wo adi you put condition and instruction in contract na



adi - yes boss , want to ask why



maan - yaar she struggling for edu and living yaar I inquired about scolership amount it is so little you forget what she say she cant afford two time meal , but I know she don't want charity from us so we will tell her na that it is Kc policy what say


adi nodded in yes and say ya its good idea sasha give just confused look them than adi narrow all to her , sashsa just imp with her and say wow nice girl yaar we have to help her



maan ok guys you carry on I have one mitting in xyz after that I will went to home or dadi will shoot me ok



maan just come from his office and when he crossing to her car he saw geet and dadi in ice cream parlor , first he thought really this girl is nave or she pretending after sam he get bad experience , but same time he don't want to jump on conclusion he know his dadi well how much she noughty and some time just act like child


he just went near them and sit near their table his back toward dadi and geet she so much lost in talk se don't note him


geet - dadi you are such darling


dadi - dadi make puppy face DADI


geet - ok ok mY GF ok


dadi giggle like kid , maan get soft smile on his face


geet - ok gf it is your last bite , after that no icecrem


dadi - please geet


geet- no dadi you already have attactin morning no or iwill not talk with you



dadi - no no look it is last bite


maan want to just run to dadi he so much tense but he want to hear all talk and want to dadi herself tell all this so he just sit their



geet - dadi you know that DD dadima give confused look, that md gf Dust danve gf he called me kid , am I kid gf tell me , but in last iam so wrong he is nice person and geet narrow all to dadi in her style maan so much shcok that she give so many name hin in this little time



geet - ok dadi I have to go , just than with serious tone geet ask wo gf wo gf


dadi what happen beta just tell me



geet - I want to meet any lady doctor



dadi just put hand on geet forehead and are you ok what happen to you


geet hold hold dadi , I cant say anything now but I will tell you after some time I need some day because it is difficult to me also ti digest fact gf geet say in painful voice

maan also feel tense with geet talking why she need doctor , and why she is in pain , this girl really mistry please god dadi sugges meera name please



dadi - will trust you dear , iwait to your talk and about doc yes she is like my granddaughter she is my grandson fried doc meera , you just went her and say dadi send you ok



geet - sorry dadi I taking your favor like this but I don't have any other option


dadi just stand from her sit and took geet on her hug , geet sob out thanks dadi thanks , it so much painful cry both maan and dadi get disturbed with that

precap

meera and geet face to face

maan inquired about geet to meera

maan and dadi talk

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i am the first one so happy
update is so nice
if maan now the truth he can help her
dadi is so nice to geet
waiting for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
amezing update maan to abhi se geet ki care kar raha hai hreat vaise bhi karna hi padega varna agar geet sherni ka roop dharan kar legi tab maan ka kya hoga love in this ff ki maan is friendly with staff but yaha bhi shasha fir agar sam se divorce ke baad agar maan ne geet se shadi ki to fir se shasha ko jealsouy hogi n fir probls create karegi vo maaneet ki life main eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
main to pahle part ke comment kar rahi thi dusra part bhi padh liya wao maan ne geet ke iye ek clause bhi daal diya god is ff main abhi ye wala part padh ke to shasha possitive lag rahi hai n maan geet ko child bulana is ur copyright kab se hua uske liye register bhi karna padta hai par humare maan ke liye to kuch nhi namumkin nahi hmm to maan ne dadi aur geet ki baat suni acha hua varna geet ke baare main galat soch leta i hope ki geet meera ko sach bata de taki meera maan aur dadi ko sach bata de aur maan ko pata chal jaye aur vo geet ki help bhi kar sake aur unka pyar bhi aage badhe
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan cares for geet😊
poor geet..


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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5 on page 55
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Part 6

geet - sorry dadi I taking your favor like this but I don't have any other option

dadi just stand from her sit and took geet on her hug , geet sob out thanks dadi thanks , it so much painful cry both maan and dadi get disturbed with that ,dadi just mistake to judge but she judge people very well she know this growing child must be suffering from big pain and try to control her life till than she get it that geet don't have family because till now she will talk about that and dadi want to give time to geet she trust her she just weep geet tear and say rote nahi baccha to to meri sharni hai na dher ko rote hu dekha hai , geet just weep her tear with back of her plam and her teary eyes and red nose ...

geet you go today itself said dadi meera is best in her field and I will waiting to I want to hear all your problem ok and I juge people rightly bas ek bar dhoka khaya and punishment get other person but I tust you so whenever you feel to share me just called me this is my number ,do you have mobile geet just nodded in no ...and again hug dadi

don't know how but some tear come in maan eyes


geet ok dadi I will go now itself ok

maan just turn away so both lady cant see him and he just called and consul his meting and start to follow geet he know he act like stupid but he really care for her and her painful eyes just hunted him



geet just went to doc meera which dadi give her address , for her luck there are only two number before her she just sit their and relax and put her head on wall with closed eyes , maan looking her from away he feel like that kid vanish anywhere and this is big geet more than her age


his heartbeat just running like marathon it is like his life most imp part which is related to geet he so many time try to went away from there but cant just cant like some power stopping him to went from their


just than geet name called and with shaking legs geet entered in merra cabin , maan saw her , he just want to hold her give her courage but with so much difficulty he stop himself it is more than half hour but geet cant come out and maan cant hold himself every second is like year for him he just march in meera cabin and called meera but meera cut him and point out to geet who is laying of sofa and she is unconscious or sleeping he just run to geet and called meera what happen her say meera


meera get shock with maan act he is so mature never act like this and now meera just glare him and pull him out from his cabin and just took him to her room personal room



meera - what the hell was that Mr MSK you don't have manners you just disturbing my patient , you very well know I don't like this



maan sorry dost wo tension main sorry meera know that he called dost means he is vey tense , she just give him water and sit on sofa maan just finish water and ask


is she ok , what happen to her ,please tell me meera


meera - maan she is just sleeping and why iwill give her detail of her to you you are not her closed one


maan very well know that meera is so much loyal to her patient , maan just took deep breath her all from his first encounter to convo with dadi


meera we lie very sfe life I lost my parent but there is dadi for me always who in every step give me right direction , who help me in struggle time from study to prank she always with me and you all adi , you sasha , pinky all with me from childhood

But you know she is orphan no one to her side meera big gasp come form meera mouth and meera face tale maan that there is big one than he imagine big one maan just took meera hand in his hand and say softly you think whatever for me but my heart mind saying that she need us , our help am I right meera

meera just nodded in yes tear are coming to her eyes , this doc meera other side that she is emotional person cant look other pain and upon that she also be orphan and she very well know what is orphan life

meera took deep breath and say maan itelling you as friend my doc profession don't give permission but it is face that she need help a big help maan

maan hand turn cold in second

meera - she is she is pregnant maan she is 1 month and 3 week pregnant


hammer start hit on maan brain it is big blow his face showing so many emotions hate , disgust , pity meera got it that he mistook geet



meera - no no she don't have boyfriend maan , maan confused look fear come on his face and he mummer softly ra rape for this one word his throat went dry

meera nodded in no now maan get more confused


maan she is big trouble she is pregnant and she is virgin , maan head start to get pain he feel life land taken away from his feet he sit their numb


meera just took his hand in her hand and say it is just some bloody doc mistake B****** and punishment get geet this will be destroy geet physically as well as mentally only 18 year old girl caring forced pregnancy without any fault and without any physical relation maan when she start to narrow her story , I hate myself as human someone mistake and this ...she don't say that she is orphan she try to hold her self respect she just broke down in front me just begging to give her virginity test report so she proof that she is innocent

and you know maan she just cut me when I say her about abortion , gasp come from maan mouth ...she say babaji send baby for her so she got her own family so she can't live alone in world maan I have another fear if anyone claim this baby than she will be di... maan just put hand on meera mouth and nodded in no meera say maan she already start to involved with that baby maan and her age , her body it is just critical maan just critical

preacp

maan and geet in mandir


(Bebasi dard ka aalam

Tum mujhe de do apne gham

Bebasi dard ka aalam

Tum mujhe de do apne gham

Khaamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do

Bechainiyan bhi de do de do naa)-2

Bheegi palkon se churaa loonga nami

Rehne doonga na kahin koi kami

Bheegi palkon se churaa loonga nami

Rehne doonga na kahin koi kami

Tumko daaman na bheego ne doonga

Ab kabhi tumko na rone doonga

Uljhane gham ki parchhaayi

De do mujhe apni tanhaayi

Gumnaamiyan bhi do, nakaamiyan bhi do

Viraaniyan bhi de do de do naa

Tere honthon pe sajaa doonga hansi

Teri raahon mein bihaa doonga khushi

Tere honthon pe sajaa doonga hansi

Teri raahon mein bihaa doonga khushi

Tum mujhe apna maanti ho agar

Yun khafa hoke na jhukaao nazar

Mushkile apni majburi

Ho, de do mujhe saari be-nuri

Pareshaaniyan bhi do, hairaaniyan bhi do

Nige-baaniyan bhi de do de do naa

Bebasi dard ka aalam

Tum mujhe de do apne gham

Bebasi dard ka aalam

Tum mujhe de do apne gham

Khaamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do

Bechainiyan bhi de do de do naa

De do naa...



Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so much sentimental-is maan will guess that it might be his baby?
update soon
poor geet she is suffering for no fault of her.
and maan has got natural instinct to help her without knowing she is carrying his child.
i don't understand how come one can plant embryo without knowledge of her?
how come doctor mistook her for some one else?
many ques.answer is u ...?update soon
bitch mein chod mat dena.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ud
maan went behind geet
and found her daadi
daadi is her gf
geet going meera clinic
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Posted: 11 years ago
2 updates lovd it mahi so only maan hv d copyright 2 cal geet as kid nd daadi nd geet's bondng is great in 2nd part maan comes 2 knw abt geet's truth bt only half jab pura sach patha chalega tab kya reaction hoga maan ka waitng 4 nxt part

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