MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 3 part 42,43,44 on 117,129,135 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
i just luv it dear
veer pinky ohhh god plzz dosro ki sun liya karo
bended queen
pinky is soft by heart
talking about geet
maan understand her point
n apply bhi kya
geet get j from nurse
luv their nok jhok n shy shy romance
geet remember her past
well maan is their not to fear
veer now he faer from pinky name also
poor naina
muskan is cuteyyy pie
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update
geet n maan kiss ke chakar main sponge bath rah gaya
loved it ki maan ne geet ko past main jane nahi diya n geet ke backing out ka galat matlab bhi nahi niakla
veer kuch to sharam kar kahi bhi shuru ho jata hai muski pe iska kya asar hoga dekh usne tuje dekhne ke liye maan ko kaat bhi liya sudar ja veer varna maan ke thik hote hi vo tuje bister pe jarur kar dega ohhh sherni has given morning to ready little sherni ab maan ka kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for the wish ery much me forget
ok fine na itni bari bari eyes matkaro
me dar jao ge devil mahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it maaneet moments lovely veer nanina part also lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
its good that geet is trying to move on from her past fear
awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry dear frieady ke baad aj update de rahi hu

mahi fix with net and guest
mahi have birthday on 5 july
and my devil along with apaarna , farya cristipi , and ratna
make it beautiful and more beautiful
with thread celebration


they all make me senti with their love

so guys big hug from mahi
along with dhamka
which i want to give on my birthday
but this net 😡

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 38


geet just smack her head nahi to kya , she will angry on you now bro kuch bhi karte rahe te ho now go jao mano usay and poor veer just make baby face and run to naina

geet just mummer sab devil mere hi pitche ku hai

geet just glare to maan , maan mummer main kya kiya

maan you have to make your daughter ready for bath or else maan just mummer day day she become fearless , but love her in sherani mood and adi who heard this just giggle geet look to adi and maan glare to him , adi just mummer beta nikal yaha se nahi to agala shikar tu hoga just than rano ma come along with dadi and adi stop for while

maan - you both hear together kuch pak raha hai kya

rano - just went near maan and kiss his forehead and say ku aana nahi chiye kya

just than muskan start to pull maan face and maan bend little in front of her and that devil just kiss maan forehead where rano ma kiss and give glare to rano ma and rano make baby face and say dekha dadiji ab to apen bete ko pyyar karne ke liye ise chote devil ki permission leni padegi

just than dadi make serious face and say ha rano hame to maaaneet ki chinta ho rahi hai inka kya hoga , hume aur koi great grand child milega ke nahi , dadi say all this with so much serious face all just get confused than burst in laugh and maaneet turn beetroot red , maan just cried to dadi , dadima please

Dadi awe mera MSK sharma raha hai and maan just hug dadi like small kid and rano ma just open her hand for geet and geet just hug rano , adi just pray bus god in dono ko asihi kush rakhna

rano , dadi jada senti mat bano jo bolne aaye ha bol do

maaneet come out from hug and give confused look to them

dadi just cup his face and say maan amain jis din aapka accident hua main bahot dar gayi thi maan so amain bola tha jab app ghar aaynge main apni kuldevi ke mandir aaungi

maan - want to protest but rano ma mana mat karo beta , iam going with dadima so don't worry we will come in 9/10 days dear

maan give look to geet who just nodded in yes maan just say ok but I am sending two bodyguard along with nurse with you , and no argue on that get it

Next day dadi and rano just went to mandir ...they give so many instruction to each other days went with so much nok joke and maaneet romance , maan never lose chance to love geet and make her comfortable her with him ...he took help from dr pinky also ,first some days geet body turn cold whenever maan touch her or took her in hug ...but he just pretend that he don't get it and some time he make her to take first step like with bet some time tease and geet always get trap with maan word

Today is 13 day, today they ill remove bandage on hand, and leg maan is so much happy because so many time that come to his love when he want to hug geet fully ...doc just remove that and give him some exercised for leg and hand , maan just want to took geet in his both hand and just kiss her passionately , geet just read his face and turn red in shyness doc just went from there and geet just want to run so she turn for run but maan just hold her hand and he want to pull her just than maan froze in his place he just tighten grip on geet hand geet feel hurt , she just look to maan face and get shock ,she just follow maan gaze there that so called pammi standing along with some two guys

pammi just clap her hand wow wow msk with her wife ha , we come in wrong time kya

geet just put hand on maan hand and just caressed with so much love , maan just closed his eyes , he don't want to anyone from his house come in muskan villa specially this people

pammi ho yaha romance ho raha hi so tale me msk where is your father ke unko bhi ...

pammi just live than sentence half and give meaning full look to maan , maan past again start to come in front of him and other two man just laugh on that and say yes mama he is expert in this na

pammi - ku msk sap sung gaya kya ya phir your sin come in front of you

maan shaking in anger when he found his so called family in muskan villa

but pummy next word just tear him apart he feel like someone throw fire

on his ear

pummy say rub milayi jodi ek mother killer and other S*** and maan turn in stone his hand turn so cold , but next moment geet just march to pummy and just slap her hard on her face both pammi son march to geet but just veer entered in time and punch them hard

geet again slap pammi face she just slap her three four time and say in loud voice hey women mind you language mere hi ghar main khadi ho ke meri hi

Husband ke barre main you saying all this shit he is killer na wait a minite , geet just took nife from appel plate and just pointed to pammi and say now I am going to kill you and she just pull her hand to stab but pammi hold her hand in air , she is so much schok after geet slap but this

geet just smirk on her and throw that knife and say I am 22 year old leady and you hold my hand like this and how maanji mother can not hold her own 5 year old son hand from stabbing her ...and pammi face turn pale with geet questions geet just say just get lost from hear before I called polic and I know you don't want that na ...so out and dare you try to come near my husband get it

pammi and her son just went from there


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 39


veer just want to say something but she just stop veer there and say till I not open this door no will disturb me I say no one disturbed me ,brought muskan hear veer just give painful look to maan who just sit there with blank face he know now what is maan facing

Veer brought muskan and geet just lock door first feed muskan and make her sleep in criddel in adjourned room

geet just looking to maan and she just feel like someone brake her heart in several piece maan face geet just next to maan and called maan , maan but maan just behind her voice

geet again called maan ,maan lesion to me once

maan just mummer I am killer , main maar diya meri ma ko main maar diya mar diya , jab muski badi hogi wo bhi muje hate karegi jaise papa karte hai geet kyat um bhi

geet just hug maan tightly and say don't say like this please don't say like this ku unke liye troubling yourself they are not worthy of it please dear wo to insan kehene ke kabil bhi nahi hai maan please

maan - tum nahi jaanti

geet just cup maan face and say to bata do na muje , ku apen apko bekasur sabit nahi kar rahe ho app ku inki baate apko itna effect kar rahi hai ku

maan - you will hate me geet

geet main apen bhagwan ko hate karungi kya she say with so much love and trust

maan just took deep breath and say till my 5 birthday all is just perfect in my house ma , papa , my sis and dadi we are so much happy and one day pammi come with her sons and all start to change and within three month my parent start to fight on small things , I don't get there word but get it that something very wrong and I get to scare with it

just than pammi start to say that I am not normal child just hate my sis and pammi son , I broke there game ,book etc but I never geet fist papa also not tust them but every time that broken game part or book parts start to get in my room and all start to accuse me on that only dadi and ma with me

pammi son make me that much irritated that I react in wrong way and pammi just highlight my behavior my father start to effect

but geet I cant prove that I am innocent , ia m innocent ...

she just say one day I will kill anyone in my anger and that I lost mother and father same day it is dadi who save me or else I will be in jail , geet but I am not killer geet ...geet maan just sob like small child and hug geet his sob just giving so much pain to geet

tear just falling from both eyes geet don't know what to do how she eraed his past how treat his soul wound don't know , she just say maan please don't cry please but maan just broken in geet hug , it look like he is broken by mind by soul and geet cant look him like this a man who protect her like this who is life of her she cant look him like this , she just cup maan face

geet just kiss his forehead geet to sirf maan ki hai uski takdir maan se jud gayi hai

She next kiss maan eyes, this eyes is way of your soul and it never told lie ...such in main dikh jata hai maan but maan just sobbing and mummering I am killer I am killer and geet just took his lips in her mouth it is just like she want to took away all his pain , she complanting in her kiss , that your word hurting her ...but maan not responding her he just , geet just bite on his rough lips and just entered her tongue in his mouth

she just pull him to her body and start to caressed his back , geet back memory start to come in her mind but she know it is time to to only think about maan , kya shai hai galat hai , unhe limit main rehana chaiye ya nahi ,ye sab question se badi bath thi ke aaj maan ko geet ki zarrort hai aur geet apne maan ke liye aj sab hade tod degi ku ki wo unke annewale life main ye past ka kala saaya nhi chati thin a uske past ka na maan ke past ka

Mitwa.Mitwa

My soul mate


Love will find a way

Jaaniye heeriye


My love, my sweetheart


Mere man yeh bata de tu


Tell me, my heart


Kis or chala hai tu

Which direction are you going in

it is so hard for her because all image of that janwar , with shaking hand she took maan hand on her hand and just put it on her heart and say maan this heart living for you because ye nai dhadkane app ki ammanat hai maan



but maan blank face some tear fall from geet eyes she just make lay on bed and make dim light of room , she now taking big step she just open knot of her dress and just start to open maan shirt buttan with shaking hand


Kya paaya nahin tune

What havent you got?


Kya dhoond raha hai tu

What are you searching for?


Jo hai ankahee, jo hai ansunee woh baat kya hai bata

What is that which is unsaid and unheard?


Mitwa kahe dhadkanen tujhse kya

My soul mate what are your heartbeats telling you?


Mitwa.yeh khud se to naa tu chupa

My soul mate don't try to hide it from yourself



she just pull out his shirt and with shaking lips she just kiss on maan heart and say in painful voice ye dhadkane meri hai maan , kya mera pyyar appko mehasoos nahi hota maan , kya mera paayr apke liye koi maayene nahi rahata maan unki nafrat mere payyr se badi hai kya maan some tear failed form geet eyes , maan eyes so blank


Mere man yeh bata de tu Kis or chala hai tu

Kya paaya nahin tune Kya dhoond raha hai tu

Jo hai ankahee, jo hai ansunee woh baat kya hai bata

Mitwa kahe dhadkanen tujhse kya

Mitwa.yeh khud se to naa tu chupa

She just closed her own eyes sit for moment and with shaking hand just pull out he dress along with her inner and just lay down near maan and took him in tight hug , maan painful face and that all dirty touch she feel to run from there but her maan need her she just say in painful voice kya unki nafrat mere paayr se badi hai maan , mera pyyar kam pad gya kya maan apne mere khalipan bhar biya hai pane paayr se , ab main I will die maan I will die this sliance is death for me the word death brought maan back and he look to geet , painful voice , red eyes and geet who is uncofatble in his hun laying laying nude to his side , want to make him happy ...fighting with her past meomory and he just lost on his own pain and she all ready to smparpan to him ...


from first mitting to today all image come to maan mind how she feel his life with happiness and he just lost in his own pain he just cover her with duet and took her in hug and just kiss all her face like mad person and mummer sorry geet sorry geet main nahi tumane meri khali jeevan pura liya hai append baatho se , pyyar se , tumahara pyyar kamjor nahi hai main kamjor pad gaya tha geet lakin ye sab ...he left sentence half

Jeevan dagar mein, prem nagar mein (2)

In life, in the path of love


Aaya nazar mein jab se koi hai

From the moment someone has entered


Tu sochta hai, tu poochta hai

Youve been thinking and asking yourself


Jiski kami thi, kya yeh wohi hai

Is she the one you were lacking in life?


Haan yeh wohi hai, haan yeh wohi hai


Yes shes the one

he don't want to rush in their relation ...and took any step in flow of emotions but geet just closed eyes and give pick near his lips yes she say her decision with her action ...happy tear come in maan eyes he get true love in his life his soul mate his mitwa some tear fall from maan eyes he just bend and took geet lips for soulful kiss like he saying thanks in that kiss for come in his life ...and make his life beautiful

Tu ek pyaasa aur yeh nadi hai

Youre the thirst and shes the river


Kaahe nahin isko tu khulke bataaye

So why dont you open up and tell her


Jo hai ankahee, jo hai ansunee woh baat kya hai bata

What is that which is unsaid and unheard?


Mitwa kahe dhadkanen tujhse kya

My soul mate .what are your heartbeats telling you?


Mitwa.yeh khud se to naa tu chupa

My soul mate .dont try to hide it from yourself

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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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part 40

he don't want to rush in their relation ...and took any step in flow of emotions but geet just closed eyes and give pick near his lips yes she say her decision with her action ...happy tear come in maan eyes he get true love in his life his soul mate his mitwa some tear fall from maan eyes he just bend and took geet lips for soulful kiss like he saying thanks in that kiss for come in his life ...and make his life beautiful

geet maan called her softly , we can stop hear dear because may be may it not easy for you he just look to her with that geet open her eyes and look to maan , maan only saw love and trust for him in that eyes

I want it maan it is for me to come out from past , iwant your touch on my body on my soul so I could forget all touch of that all janwar jinhone sirf muje noch tha apani hawas mitane ke liya , laking I want to be love by you maan please ye saara dirt meri body se nikal do maan please muje phi apne pyyar se pure bana do please maan please ...maan just hug her and say iwill geet iwill main tumari sari buri yaade mita dunga geet ...main bahi apne past se bahar aana chata hu geet , we will make new memory for us for our musky geet

we don't have memory when we become one first time but now I want to shower all my love on you geet you are my soul mate hamara to dard se leke attma tak rishta hai geet with that he just put his lips on her lips he will stop there for second but both feel like it is seal of there love and her life love marking her as his soul mate , a red hu come on her cheek and heartbeat start to like dhak dhak dhak

maan just kiss her for head and say yes you are become destiny of mine geet ,and this two eyes when smile in happiness , I feel lucky person in world dear main ager tum se juda ho gaya to khud kokho dung geet ...and he just kiss her heart on duat itself and get just clutch duet tightly in her hand , maan smile with her reaction ...and he just took that rose patel in his rough lips it is just just soulful kiss like he connected with her soul ek na tootne wale bandan main

Hum tere bin ab reh nahin sakte

Tere bina kyaa vajood meraa

I can't live without you now,

What's my existence without you..

Tujh se judaa gar ho jaayenge

To khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

If I get separated from you,

I'll be separated from my own self..

Kyonki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi, ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, meraa dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Because you alone are,

Now you only are,

life. You're my life.

My peace, and my pain,

you alone are my love..

maan just kiss her so slowly and geet moan in his mouth maan ...maan stop for second and say geet you are my life and all your pain , dard are mine just give it all to me dear like you want all my pain and he just took her in hug and pull out that duat from her body and just kiss her shoulder and say I don't want anything between us geet I want to worship my Misty without any ... he again kiss her on her shoulder geet feel so much shy she just push herslf to his body and both are nu** from upper side and maan just moan ohhh GEETTT

Teraa meraa rishtaa hai kaisaa

Ik pal door gawaaraa nahi

Tere liye har roz hain jeete

Tujh ko diyaa meraa waqt sabhi

Koi lamhaa meraa naa ho tere binaa

Har saans pe naam teraa

How's this relationship of ours,

I don't like distance of even a moment

Every day, I live for you

All my time is for you..

There shouldn't be a moment of mine without you,

There is your name on every breath..

her blos**** just touching his tone chest , which set him on fire , he just bite on his shoulder to control his desire and geet hissed in pain and when he suit with his tongue she moan in pleasure maan just say in low voice geet I want to see you please geet just shake with his demand she gulp hard and come out from his hug and just laid down on bed with closed eyes ...red cheek she just biting her lips in nervousness maan just caressed her lips with his thumb and say don't do that ...that are mine geet and just look to geet she is so beautiful her every curve is perfect and beautiful like god took more time to make her maan hand shake for some second to touch her beauty

he just slightly touch her blossom and geet wriggle like fish ...she hissed in pain than maan look closely he saw some radish mark near her N*****

he just ask with so much care ...and poor geet who expecting him to love her and he asking ...she just mummer babaji , wo devil feed lete waqt tang karti hai and ye ...with her mummer maan get it that done by musky ...he just touch that part and say wo musky ne kiya kya kuch medicine but geet just say maan please and maan get that she want else not this questions he just took her beauty in his hand and start to love that with his long finger he avoid to touch that mark area he just planted open mouth kiss on her blossom poor girl just moan in pleasure , maan just crating magic on her body and next second she moan loudly because maan just took that in his mouth and star to caressed other one ,geet just hold his shoulder tightly to control his moan in that she make scratches on his back next few minute maan finger , palm lips , tongue just playing with geet beauty

he feel like he is not getting enough and he want more and more , he just again kissed geet on her lips this kiss is so passionate he just want to drink all sweetness from her mouth and geet feel something hard on her tummy and she turn red like cheery and maan smile in kiss with her reaction he stop for second and look to geet eyes and say can I geet ...

geet just nodded in yes and maan again took her lips , he just kiss her from head to toe , maan touch on her whole body , making her come out from her past , she start to enjoy his touch on body she get that she don't get that ugly image ...and maan just say geet just tale me if you feel any pain .geet just nodded in yes and maan slowly entered in her ...both moan loudly maannn geettt first geet feel thoda pain but than she comfortable and maan just took her to new world with his love the world of maaneet they complete each other in every sense

when maan stop after there first love in sense saw her little unconsciousness like she is verge of lost her hosh , maan just scared for some moment he try to called her but geet get fainted and maan just grab his mobile and called naina to come there as possible as , he try to spread some water on her face but no use

Tere liye hi jiyaa main

Khud ko jo yoon de diya hai

Teri wafaa ne mujh ko sambhaalaa

Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala

Tere saath mera hai naseeb juDaa

Tujhe paa ke adhoora naa raha

For you, I lived

I have given myself (to you)

Your faith [actually means 'my love for you' here] took care of me

Took all the sorrows from (my) heart

With you my fate is attached,

Getting you, Nothing is incomplete (within me, I got completed)..

tear just come in his eyes ...he just make wear her his shirt and make that bed clean in few minute he heard knock on door he just run to door there naina standing along with adi and veer , adi eye fail on maan , his messy hair , scratches on shoulder swollen lips he just stop veer and say naina to go inside and give look to maan like what is all this and blush come on maan cheek and adi give him smile he just want maan happiness , in all this poor veer is confused , first that chudil entry , maan numbness than , geet in maan room from so many hour and now maan called naina and before maan say anyting naina called him inside and maan went inside

there blushy geet just got her hosh and maan just run and kiss her forehead and say you ok are you ok , main wo jada ho ...and he say anything further she just closed maan mouth with her palm and pointed to naina , poor boy just get embarrassed he just forget about naina

naina just come near maan and say wo kya bro ...maan just nodded in no

naina - geet bhabhi please kuch Extra kaam karne se pehale kuch extra kha bhi liya karo , mere bhai ko aise daro mat , look his face and both giggle on him , maan just glare on them

maan - naina please is she ok na ...naina say don't worry bro she is fit actually she don't eat anything from morning upon that all drama and your passion and musky feed all just make her faint so I will not take your time more I brought some juice and eatable for her I if that bander get about thsis they will make your life hell with teasing so GN and ha bro you can continued with ... but after her eating and just wink to maan and just run from there

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh...
so the bi**h dared to step in their paradice..
well iff she tought tht hes the same 5-yr old vulnerable kid
then shes hell wrong..
its MSK now with his FAMILY by his side
which will stand with him in all the thick n thin

n geet gave her nic warm welcome with that tight slap..
nd veer treate her sons well...
they deserved the whole of it...

also geet gave her perfect demo
tht shes hell wrong accusing maan. for killing his mum
and she will definately prove tht in front of world too...

Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago

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