MG FF || HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW #3 || ON HOLD - NOTE PG154 || - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
Why she can't hear anything? Omg.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why she can't hear anything?
Edited by Nav2010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What.?? Almost 160 likes already..Its been only a day.. 😲
My my ..I must admit I am sweetly surprised.. 😆 This is the fastest likes on any HUV update...Looks like I need to get typing the next part now..

The update will be up as soon I get those 20 likes too.. 😳

I wana post the update after pg 120.. Now you guys have some work till I start typing the update.. 😳

Also, here is a teaser for you guys too..! 😃

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TEASER

He carefully scooped her into his arms and carried her gently towards the washroom. She just kept staring at him all along. He was actually there, with her and she was in his arms. Her arms tightly clasped around his neck. Her heart no limit to its happiness.. She kept looking at him when he gently made her stand on the ground and stood there. Confusion took over her, what was he up to by standing there. She tapped his shoulder and eyed him to go out but he shook his head.

Maan, why are you shaking your head.? I need to use the washroom, you need to go. She said to him but sadly heard nothing. It was the truth she was trying to accept it, she could as long as he was by her side. Maan shook his head once again making his intention of staying there clear. Her eyes widened at the thought of him being there. How on earth would she be able to bear it.??

Maan, please.!!! She pleaded but only received his glare..

I am feeling embarrassed, at least turn that side..Do you know how embarrassing it is.?? Why didn't you let the nurse come with me.?? She cribbed in a low voice. The nurse had agreed to come with her but Maan being his stubborn self wasn't ready to let her walk even till the washroom and had insisted he would carry her ruling out any chance of argument. Even the nurse had to shut up before him, like there was anyone who would be able to argue with him. Her eyes narrowed as he smiled widely at her.

Maan, I can't use the loo with you in here, please go. I will call you to take me back, I promise.. She pleaded and he ended laughing up seeing her pleading. She was being her normal self after ages; he would do anything to watch her like this. Smiling at her, he turned his back to her and waited outside the washroom waiting for her signal. The morning had been stressful for her, but muvh to his relief, she was calm with his presence. The mere fact that she wanted to be with him was enough for him; it was the happiness he was craving till now.. His thoughts were broken when he heard her call him.. He was glad to have her safely back in his arms.

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Hope the teaser made you guys relax.!! Maaneet moments .. 😳



Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Am grinning...
OMG... itne fast ek aur update milega... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser
eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
what happened to the hearing problem ???? 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo much painful for maan and geet


very heart wrenching
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser

waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
conrats on fastest likes..
n teaser awsm...😊
waiting for upd 😊
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awesome teaser waiting for update

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